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Kashish Patel

@Jai-Bani_Kasamh

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Posted: 19 years ago

#151

aditee that was so professional keep up the hard work. I love all the parts mostly with Jai and Bani. 😊

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Rimpy Kaur

@punjabi#1

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Posted: 19 years ago

#152

Jai looked (in my head) so sexy in the last part. 😳 😳 😳 I wish you would write another part today because your fan fic is like the only thing that is cheering me up today becasue I am sick.

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NaV

@SIKinLoVE

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 19 years ago

#153

luvedddd part 22 👏 that was gr88..

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Ashna Chand

@Ashna_Chand

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Posted: 19 years ago

#154

it juz keepz gettin better n better....i'm totally addicted!! you are a very talented writer...!!!

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Sarah

@SRKfever

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Posted: 19 years ago

#155

👏 👏 awsome part
Can't wait for what happens next
please continue soon
thanx 😳

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pooja1_76

@pooja1_76

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Posted: 19 years ago

#156

Aditee,
this was great...... only missing thing was his faded aqua colone smell mixed with his.

but brillient part how banee's expression changes after her talk with MS. Singh is great.

you are just making this real

pooja

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Nina

@shahni4

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Posted: 19 years ago

#157

Part 22 seems like a prelude to a really really fantastic and hot part!!! You are very very talented can't wait for the volcanic erruption in Par 23!!! Please write and post it soon!!!!

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Mamta Singh

@Piku_S

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+ 7

Posted: 19 years ago

#158

wonderful 👏 👏 👏
i feel like heated arguement is going to come btw jai n bani 😆
please write and post part 23 soon i am dying to know how the volcano errupts from bani 😆

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sahar khan

@red_ruby82

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Posted: 19 years ago

#159

aaaah! y did u have to stop there!! lol! i can already sense the explosion in the next part!! im dyin to read part 23! btw luved the jw description...very hot n sexy indeed 😉 pleez cont asap!!

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crazyfats

@crazyfats

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Posted: 19 years ago

#160

Thanks friend. It was wonderful.

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