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vinushi

@vinushi

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Amazing update foxi😳...tanshi first meet catch fall...rsb ka Dil goes mmm😳...n Tanu ka pain😭 jaldi jaldi update kar can't see her in pain ...rsb will cure her all pain 😭..u know marhami sa khawab hai tu 😳wo khawab bna de rsb Ko Tanu ka ❤️

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: vinushi
Amazing update foxi😳...tanshi first meet catch fall...rsb ka Dil goes mmm😳...n Tanu ka pain😭 jaldi jaldi update kar can't see her in pain ...rsb will cure her all pain 😭..u know marhami sa khawab hai tu 😳wo khawab bna de rsb Ko Tanu ka ❤️

wo word baby...😳

i will try to update ASAP...😳

lets see when will he cure her pain...😳

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Gopika

@gopsss

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Haya...I have no words!!! U rocked it...👏... ManShi combo😆!!! Ur story had stole my heart😳!! Update . Can't wait anymore... Woh for late dear...

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: gopsss
Haya...I have no words!!! U rocked it...👏... ManShi combo😆!!! Ur story had stole my heart😳!! Update . Can't wait anymore... Woh for late dear...

wo word dear...very glad that u loved it...❤️

I will try to update soon...😳

And its ok baby...barey barey shehron mn choti choti btn hoti rehti hn...😉

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

I feel really bad for tanu

She lost her parents & her home she all alone

Glad she has friend like ahana who love & care for her so much

I really want kill that bloody chacha chachi they r so disgusting

Awe tanshi first meeting was cute

Loll rishi fall in love with tanu at first sight

Loll ahaman fight like tom & jerry

Both tanshi were shocked to hear each other name but couldn't ask anymore question as ahaman start fight

Poor tanu miss her parents that's why she never go to anyone home

Hope now tanshi will know each other

Continue plz

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paru000

@paru000

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Haya awesome the intro and the first part. Tanu ahana friends and rishi and mp friends. Interesting and tanshi waiting for their love story . Update soon dear.😊

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: cuteariya
I feel really bad for tanu
She lost her parents & her home she all alone
Glad she has friend like ahana who love & care for her so much
I really want kill that bloody chacha chachi they r so disgusting
Awe tanshi first meeting was cute
Loll rishi fall in love with tanu at first sight
Loll ahaman fight like tom & jerry
Both tanshi were shocked to hear each other name but couldn't ask anymore question as ahaman start fight
Poor tanu miss her parents that's why she never go to anyone home
Hope now tanshi will know each other
Continue plz

wo word dear...

And yup her fate brought too much for her...

Lets see what happens...

I will try to update soon...😳

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: paru000
Haya awesome the intro and the first part. Tanu ahana friends and rishi and mp friends. Interesting and tanshi waiting for their love story . Update soon dear.😊

wo word choi moi...

We saw them as bro and sis so i thought to bring something new...😳

I will try my best to update soon..😳

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#29

PART-2

Mp takes ahana's no. He calls her as directed by Rishi...

Rishi wants to know that this tanu is her sweet bestie tanu or not...he still remembers her bestie...

Mp calls ahana...

Mp: hello mo...i mean ahana...😛

A: han bolo kya kaam hai...or han jldi bolna mere pas time nhi hai...u have only 5 mins...

Mp cuts her off...

Mp: abey chup kr or meri sun le...bolne degi to bolnga na...

A: ab hogya tera bolega kaam kya tha...

Mp: wo mera friend hai na rishi usko tumhari friend tanu ka no. chahiye...

A: q???

She said in a teasing tone...

Mp: pehle tu mjhe tang kr le...no. mjhe nhi rishi ko chahiye...foran fix hojati hai...

A: aye sukre tillay tameez se baat kr wrna mn no. nhi dongi...

Mp: aye moti no. nahi dena to nhi de bhar mn ja...

R was shocked to listen mp...

R: oye kya bol raha hai...idhar de phone...

R snatches the phone...

R: ahana ahana ahana...listen to me...see mn is gadhe ki taraf se maafi mangta hon...plzzz mjhe tanu ka no. de do...

A: tum ache ho rishi...tum mang rhe ho to de deti hon...mn msg kr dongi...

R: thank u...thank u so much...

A: mention not...

Ahana text him her no.

R calls tanu...

T: hello who's there...

Suddenly she feels something and says...

T: rishiii...

Rishi was hell shocked listening to her...

R: tumhe kese pata???

T: dont know but i felt ur presence...

R: oh wow...means u also fell for me...

T: what??

R: nothing...i want to meet u...

T: for what???

R: yr i want to talk to u...

T: rishiii u rrr talking to me...

R: arey phone pe nhi mil kr...

T: ok ajao mere ghar...i mean hotel...mn tumhe address snd kr deti hon...

Tanu texts her address and rishi comes to her...

Door bell rings...

rishi was standing outside...

Door opens and he saw a beautiful lady or we can say his lady love standing in front of him n smiling...

T: come rishi...

Rishi still lost...tanu noticed it and clicked her fingers in front of his eyes...rishi came to his senses..

T: rishiii andar ajao...

R: hmm...

They both goes inside...

T: wait mn drinks lati hon...

R: hawww tanu tm drink bhi krti ho???

T: rishiii jokes marna band kro...mn soft drinks ki bt kr rhi hon...

She goes to kitchen and brought drinks...

T: here take this...

Rishi takes the drink...tanu sits on sofa in front of rishi...

T: rishi u want to ask something...

R: hmmm tanu whats ur full name???

Tanu's eyes welled up on listening bcz he was asking for her farther's name...

This didnt go un noticed by rishi...he comes and sits next to her and wipes her tears...

R: see i didnt meant to hurt u...

T: its ok rishi...

she starts smiling...

T: my full name is tanu shri...

OMG a big revelition...rishi was hell shocked listening to her...

R: tanu shri...

His eyes are now filled with tears...

R: tanu...my tanu...tanu i got u back...i m so happy...

Tanu was shocked at his reaction...

T: rishi what are u talking about???

R: tanu i m ur rishi...ur only bestie of childhood...dont u remember me???

T: rishiii...

Now her tears are rolling down her cheeks...

T: rishi how can i forget u...u were my only best friend...

R: tanu u know i never forgot u...i missed u each and everyday...i thought we will never meet..but see our fate bring u infront of me as my love...I LOVE U TANU...I LOVE U SOOO MUCH...

Rishi cuped her face...tanu also cuped his face...

T: rishi u know i never told u...but...i love u since our childhood...u missed me each and every day...but i missed u in every second...in my every breath...I LOVE U RISHI...

Both joined their heads...

They share a deep and long emotional moment..

Something clicked in rishi's mind and he moves back...

R: tanu ahana told me u have some worst past...i know ur parents are not with u...but i dont know the whole truth...tell me...

Tanu told him everything...when they were gone..her parents died..what her chachi chacha did to her...and they even snatch the only memento of her parents...her property and company...

R: tanu dont worry i will get ur all ri8s back...

T: rishi i trust u...

Rishi smiles and hugs her...she hugs him back...

It is a bone crushing hug...😳

Precap: rishi gets tanu's all property back..

Thats it for now...leave ur comments below and hit the like...😉