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Posted: 7 years ago
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WANT MY POPAT AGAIN SO WRITING THIS OS BASED ON PRECAP(PLZ NOTE AISA KUCH NHI HOGA😆
TUM BIN

Ak:Tum bas apne bare mein sochte ho
Rishi ignores him and goes to tanuja
Ri:Mujhe lagta hai hum yahan theek se baat nhi mar payenge so plz agar tum chahti ho m in papers par sign karun toh mujhe is address par milo(he gives her address)aur ha akele aana papa ko sath mat lana
Ak:Hey u Mr rishi singh Bedi mind Ur language
Ri:shhh i m talking to my wife who the hell u are.(he turns towards tanuja) m wait karunga jaana and he leaves
Ak tries to talk with tanuja but tanuja ignores him and goes to her room😆
In evening tanuja goes to meet rishi and pk follows her
Rishi is waiting for her she comes and sit
R:Kya logi chai coffee ya kuch aur
T:jis kaam k liye aaye h Voh kar le plz
She gives him divorce papers but has tears
R: Tum ro rahi ho
T: Divorce marzi se ho ya mazboori mein dard toh hota hai
R:Tumne marzi se kiye hai ya mazboori se
she breaks down and cries
Rishi gets up and comes closer to her and wipes her tears
R: Plz roya mat karo mujhe acha nhi lagta agar tum mazboori m kar rahi ho toh mat karo m tumhe in sabse bahar nikalunga
T:Excuse me
She goes to washroom and cries much more
Mp is also there he sees ak there and
Mp:Aa gaya manhoos disturb karne kuch karna padega iska kya Karun ha idea
He calls ak from his other number
Ak picks up
Mp(in his girlish voice):Hii handsome
Ak:Kaun bol rahi hai app
Mp:Bhul gaye mujhe
Ak:Batao toh sahi kaun ho tum
Mp: Hey bhagwan m toh lutt gayi barbaad ho gayi yeh mujhe bhul gaya 😆
Ak is irritated
Ak:Kaun bol rahi ho tum maine nhi pahchana tumhe
Mp:Kyu pehchanoge ab tumhara kaam toh ho gaya bhugtna toh mujhe padd raha h
Ak:Daffa ho jao and he is about to end the call but
Mp:M tumhare bacche ki maa banane wali hun ak 🤣
Ak shocked
Ak:Kya bakwas kar rahi ho
Mp:Yaad karo Voh haseen raat london mein jab tum aur m m aur tum sath the aur ussi raat yeh sab hua😆
Ak remembers and uski toh duniya hi tabah ho gayi
He hangs up and in thoughts
Ak:Yeh mujhse kya ho gaya tanuja ko pata chala toh nhi usse pehle m sab theek kardunga m abhi k abhi london jakar uss ladki se baat karta hun
He books the tickets and directly goes to airport 😆
Tanuja comes back
Ri:Tum theek ho na
T:Ha
R:Yeh lo juice pee lo tumhe acha lagega
She drinks the juice
After 1 hour Tanshi are shown in kb house (where rishi and tanu united 😆)
Tanuja is unconscious and rishi is waiting for her to get back in senses
After few minutes tanuja Wakes up and
T:M yahan kaise aayi😲
R:M laya
T:Tumne mujhe kidnap kiya
R:Aur kya karta tum toh bas divorce divorce ki ratt lagakar baithi thi yeh dekho tumhare divorce papers
T:Tumne papers jala diye 😲
R:Ha 😆 jin papers ki wajah se kisi ka dil toote Voh papers jala hi dene chahiye 😆
T:Tum bas apne baare m hi sochte ho rishi.Itna bhi aasan nhi humara sath rahna
R: problem kya hai yaar tum mujse m tumse pyar karte hi
T:Problem hai netra aur Tanya m unki zindagi barbaad nhi kar sakti
R: tumhare aane se tanya ki zindagi barbad nhi hogi balki sawar jaegi
T:Kaise pita ho tum apni hi bacchi ko uski khud ki maa se dur kar rahe ho
R:Netra tanya ki mom nahi hai
T:Kya 😲
R:Ha Voh smiley ki beti hai
Shocker for tanuja
Ri:Netra bas usse ek maa ka pyar de rahi h aur issi wajah se Voh humare ghar mein hai koi rishta nhi h mere uske sath
T:Phir juth
R:Tanu ki kasam yaar sach bol raha hun mere liye Voh bas ek achi dost aur tanya ki maa h aur kuch nhi
T:Kya 😲
R:Maine bas 2 ladkiyon se hi pyar kiya h pehli tanu aur dusri tum
Tanuja with teary eyes
T:Toh tumne mujhe yeh pehle kyu nhi bataya m toh bewajah hi tumse dur bhag rahi thi yeh sochkar ki tanya tumhari ane netra ki beti hai
R:Chii yaar aisa soch bhi kaise sakti ho tum
T:mujhe laga uss raat jo maine dekha uski wajah se
R: kaunsi raat aur kya dekha
Tanuja with courage tells him the whole truth and reason for leaving him
Rishi is super shocked
Ri:Chalo mere sath abhi sab baatein clear hongi
Tanuja and rishi comes to bedi house
Rishi shouts netra netra niche aao
Netra comes down and other family members too come
Bi:Puttar tum aise kyu chilla rahe ho aur tanuja tum yahan
Ri: Biji plz aaj bas netra bolegi toh bolo netra aur sach bolna tumhe meri kasam
N:Kya bolo rishi
R(with loud voice):Tanuja ke iss ghar se jane ka reason
Ran:Rishi yeh kya bakwas h yeh baat tanuja se phucho netra se nhi
Ri(angrily):Mom yeh meri Life hai aap interfare karna band karo Plz aur itni hi problem h tanuja se toh app hamesha k liye is ghar se ja sakti ho and i mean it mom
Bolti band rano ki 😆
T: Batao netra
Netra tells them everything and everyone is shocked
Tanuja goes and slaps her tightly
T:Tum itni giri hui hogi maine kabhi socha bhi nhi tha
Rishi too slaps her
Ri:Dost kahlane layak nhi ho tum tumhare samne rota raha arre pagal tha m jo uss insan ke samne ro raha tha jo mere dukh ka karan hai
Biji:Tumhare jaisi ladki nhi Dekhi maine (and she turns towards kanchan)dekh liya apni beti ki harkat hamesha bolti thi rishi ne galat kiya uske sath par yeh dekho tumhara hi khoon ganda hai le jao isse yahan se
Ah:Aur khabardar jo apni shakal dikhayi toh muh tod dungi tumhara smjhi netra
Ne:Kya ek last time tanya se mil sakti hun
Ah:bilkul bhi nahi apni tanya par tumhara saya bhi nhi padne dungi
And she throws her out
Ah:Aunty le jayo apni is beti ko yahan se
She closed the door
Tanuja and rishi in guilt for not trusting each other
Both said sorry to each other and a reunion hug of Tanshi (long one)
All are happy except rano
Next day rishi brings natz home and tells he is father
N:Par dadi ne toh bola tha ki aap papa nhi ho tanya k papa ho
R:M tum dono ka papa hun
N:Sachi
R:Ha
Natz happily accepts him as father but tanya refuses to accept tanuja as her mother
Pk returns India and shocked to know tanuja goes to rishi and he is big dhukh and again leaves India forever with Massi and myra 😆
With every passing day Tanya too start liking tanuja and she accepts tanuja as her mother.
A happy family except rano 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hahaha chulbul tu q itne bare bare jokes maar rahi he...aisa to may be kasam end hone tak bhi nhi hoga...🤣jokes apart very nice update seriously want this in serial...😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: HayaZehra313

Hahaha chulbul tu q itne bare bare jokes maar rahi he...aisa to may be kasam end hone tak bhi nhi hoga...🤣jokes apart very nice update seriously want this in serial...😳

🤣 tabhi toh mention Kia aisa kuch nhi hoga 😆 humare chahne se kya hota hai hoga wahi jo Voh namone chahte hai 😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari454

🤣 tabhi toh mention Kia aisa kuch nhi hoga 😆 humare chahne se kya hota hai hoga wahi jo Voh namone chahte hai 😭

point...😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Super one Pari... Aisa hua bahuth acha hoga but CVs won't do... Loved how Rishi kidnapped her n the way truth came out... Netra got only two slaps😭...loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I wish k iss time rishi AK k samne usse Tanuja ka papa bole...But nhi Milne wala tune diya pari 😳...Or Tanuja ne ignore Kiya wah wah ...Or Jana wifey Sab Kah diya rsb 😆... Awesome pari Jana I love u for this
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb thought kash hamari wish pori ho jati or tu kasam CV bn jati 😒
Its last epi of kasam ki update kya itna maat soch us mein bhi hug or fake smile k sath photo hi mile GI maybe along rano death tanshi will unite 🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ManazzaShahid12

Superb thought kash hamari wish pori ho jati or tu kasam CV bn jati 😒
Its last epi of kasam ki update kya itna maat soch us mein bhi hug or fake smile k sath photo hi mile GI maybe along rano death tanshi will unite 🤣



jis rano iss duniya se nikali uss din bedi family k ache din shuru ho jayenge chipkali pk kuch nhi honge bas Tanshi aur Tanshi moment honge kya din aa gaye hai pehli baar kisi ki death k liye pray ho rahi h😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divya333

Super one Pari... Aisa hua bahuth acha hoga but CVs won't do... Loved how Rishi kidnapped her n the way truth came out... Netra got only two slaps😭...loved it



😭 maine do toh marre but cvs namone usse ek choti si daant bhi nhi padti bas Mahanta Mahanta aur Mahanta 😡 chudail ko devi bana diya h cvs ne 😡
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinushi

I wish k iss time rishi AK k samne usse Tanuja ka papa bole...But nhi Milne wala tune diya pari😳...Or Tanuja ne ignore Kiya wah wah ...Or Jana wifey Sab Kah diya rsb😆... Awesome pari Jana I love u for this

ha meri bhi wish h but cvs [😭
and love u too

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