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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 9

Rajeev asks tanuja for dance and takes her to the dance. MP - bhai woh dekho tanuja rajeev ke saath. Rishi - kya. MP - mera matlab hai dance kar rahi hai. Rishi sees and says - iski itni himmat, meri biwi ke saath dance kar raha hai. Ahana listens and says - tumhari biwi. Rishi - haan meri biwi aur hamesha rahegi samjhi. Ahana - toh divorce kyu kar rahe ho aur aur toh aur roka bhi kar li kyu rishi. MP - tum meri bhai aise nahi baat kar sakti. Ahana - sach hi keh rahi ho, kuch galat thodi kaha. Unable to see tanuja and rajeev and answer ahana, rishi leaves from there. MP - bhai suno toh. Rishi - chote mujhe akela chod de thodi der ke liye and goes to the terrace.

Rajeev and tanuja see rishi leaving. They smile and come to ahana. Ahana tells tanuja, rishi has gone upstairs and tells her go to there as he couldnt see them together. Tanuja reaches terrace and sees rishi standing there. Tanuja goes near him and asks - tum yaha kyu aaye. Rishi - bas aisi hi, par tum yaha kya rahi ho, tumhe toh bahut maza aa raha tha na dance karte huye. Tanuja - haan woh toh hai, rajeev bahut accha dance karta hai, bahut comfortable feel karwata hai teek waise hi jaise main tumhare saath feel karti hoon. Rishi gets angry and pulls her towards him and holds her by her waist and asks - kya uske saath bhi tum wohi feel karti hoon jo tum iss waqt feel kar rahi hoon. Tanuja tries to remove his hand but is unable to, rishi tightens his grip ever more.

Rishi - bolo na, chup kyu hoon. Tanuja closes her eyes as she gets affected by his closeness. Rishi notices and feels happy. He carress her face and kisses her on her cheeks. Tanuja opens her eyes. She smiles shyly. Rishi goes to kiss her. Tanuja - yeh kya kar rahe hoon, chodo mujhe, koi dekh lega. Rishi - apni biwi ko kiss kar raha hoon, mujhe kisi se koi farak nahi padta. Tanuja - agar farak nahi padta toh yaha kyu aaye. Rishi - kyuki main tumhe kisi aur ke saath nahi dekh sakta hai, tum janti ho phir bhi tum rajeev ke saath dance kar rahi thi. Tanuja - tumne poocha dance ke liye, usne poocha toh mana kaise karti. Tumhe jalan ho rahi thi. Rishi - haan, mera matlab nahi. Tum mera saath dance karogi. Tanuja nods. Both come down and dance romantically. Except rano and netra everyone enjoys.

Party gets over. Rajeev thanks everyone for coming. Bedis also take their leave. Rajeev once again compliments tanuja and says she is looking very beautiful in the saree. Rishi doesnt like it. They reach home. Rishi to tanuja - yeh rajeev hamesha tumhari tareef karta rehta hai. Tanuja - toh tumhara matlab main tareef ke kaabil nahi hoon yehi kehna chahate ho tum. Rishi - aare nahi, mera woh matlab nahi hai, tum galat samaj rahi hoon. Tanuja - toh kya matlab tha. Tum khud toh kabhi meri tareef nahi karte, koi aur kare toh tumhe bardhaast nahi hota, aakir tum kya chahate ho. Rishi - tumhe. Tanuja - mujhe, isliye tumne uss chipkali se roka kar liya. Rishi - yeh chipkali kahan se aaye. Tanuja - yeh toh tumhe pata hona chahiye, tum laye usse hamare beech. Khud toh uske saath chipke rehte hoon aur koi meri tareef kare toh tumhe accha nahi lagta. Tang aa chuki hoon tumhare iss attitude se, ab bas. Main tak chuki hoon. Mujhe sona hai..good night and goes off to sleep. Rishi is dumbfound, doesnt understand wat to say. He says good night and goes to sleep. Rishi is not able to sleep. He thinks he has to do something before tanuja goes far from him.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
Another excellent piece of update Achelvi, loved it dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
Love this rishi.So much progressive for tanuja.Kash show mai bhi yhi rishi ho.Any way Waiting for next.Can't wait more for the update.Please update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
Finally got update after longtime
Loll I love how tanuja making rishi jealous with rajveer
Totally loving how rishi plan backfired on him now he is not getting close with that chipkali
Bravo tanuja ahana & rajveer
Uff when rishi will have guts to break his roka with that chipkali?
At last tanshi got their romantic dance
Oops rishi got trouble as tanuja got angry now what he will do to manofy her?
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
Ya love the jalo rishi it's a cutie trick from Ahana and tanuja to tease rishi love it update sooner
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
Part 10

Rajeev comes to bedi house frequently and his friendship with tanuja increases. Rishi doesnt like whenever he comes but cant do anything. Their phone calls also increases. Rishi tells MP and UV about his fear of losing tanuja. Both advice him to break his roka, then everything will be fine. Tanuja will be happy and wont have insecurity of losing him as she really loves him a lot. Rishi fears rano's blackmailing.

One day, rishi comes home and sees tanuja on phone saying - arre yeh toh bahut acchi baat hai, tumhe usse keh dena chahiye, I am sure woh tumhe mana nahi karegi. Tum ho hi itne acche koi ladki tumhe mana nahi kar sakti. Apni dil ke baath keh do and wish u all the best. After keeping the phone tanuja tells rishi about the call. she tells him rajeev had called, he has fallen in love with a girl. Rishi - kya, mera matlab hai kaun hai. Tanuja - woh toh usne nahi bataya, kaha ki aaj dinner mein batayaga. Rishi gets tensed and thinks wat will happen if he proposes tanuja. Rishi - tumhe kuch idea hai kaun hai woh. Tanuja - nahi na, par jo bhi hogi bahut lucky hogi, rajeev hai hi itna perfect. woh bahut accha husband sabith hoga tum dekh lena. Rishi - hmmm...

Rishi goes and tells MP and UV about it. MP - bhai socho and jaldi kuch karo, agar rajeev ne tanuja ko propose kiya toh and agar tanuja ne haan keh diya toh. Rishi - tu chup kar, main waise hi tension mein hoon aur toh mere tension aur bada raha hai. yeh sab tum dono ke karan ho raha hai. Tum dono ka hi idea tha na ke main roka kar loon and tanuja apna pyar confess karegi, ab dekho kya ho raha hai. MP - jo socha tha waise kuch nahi hua, balki baath aur bigad gayi, bhai rajeev ke aane se pehle hi aap apna roka thod do, aur koi option nahi hai.

Rajeev comes at night with red roses and gives to tanuja ahana and beeji. At dinner table, tanuja asks rajeev about what he wanted to tell them. Rajeev tells her to have patience and will tell. Ahana also asks him to tell. Finally rajeev tells how he met a girl few days back and has fallen in love with her. Rano becomes very happy hearing that and signals netra the girl is tanuja and netra also becomes happy thinking finally tanuja will be out of rishi's life and then she will be in rishi's life. MP, UV, and rishi look at each other with worried looks.

Papaji - yeh toh bahut acchi baat hai, tumhe usse jaldi bata dena chahiye, aise baaton mein dheer nahi karte. Rishi thinks in his mind - yeh papaji mere pyar ke dushman kyu ban rahe hai. Rajeev - haan isliye toh main yahan aaya, aap sab ke samne usse baat karoga aur agar usne haan kaha toh phir mom dad se baat karoga. Ahana - jaldi bolo na, ab sabr nahi hota. Rishi gets tensed. Rajeev - accha teek hai, batata hoon. Rishi gets up and says - isse pehle rajeev kuch kahe mujhe kuch kehna hai. Ahana - rishi tum baad mein bolo na, rajeev ko pehle bolne do. Rishi - nahi, meri baat bahut zyada important hai. Rajeev - haan rishi tum pehle bolo.

Rishi goes to tanuja and holds her hand. Rano and netra are shocked and wondering what is happening. Rishi kisses her hand and says - main tanuja se bahut pyar karta hoon. Tanu ke baad agar kisi ne mujhe jeena seekaya toh woh tanuja hai. Main iske bina mar jaaoga. Tanuja keeps her finger on his lips - mare tumhare dushman, phir aise mat kehna. Rishi takes her finger and says - main apne saare zindagi sirf aur sirf tumhare saath beetana chahata hoon. Rano - rishi yeh tu kya keh raha hai, tum dono ka toh divorce hone wala hai and tumne roka bhi ki netra se. Rishi - koi divorce nahi hone wala aur main iss roke ko nahi manta tha, mein issi waqt isse thodtha ho. Woh toh aapne blackmail kiya isliye main tayar hua tha. Beeji - rano toh kabhi nahi sudhregi, tujhese apne bete ke khushi nahi deke jaate kya. Rano leaves from there in anger and netra also goes behind her. Rishi then asks tanuja if she is ready to spend her life with him. Tanuja nods and both hug each other. Others clap. Rishi is happy and says - rajeev tumhe jo kehna hai ab kaho.

Rajeev - haan ek minute. He takes his phone and does video calling to naina. Naina comes on call. Rajeev introduces her to all the family members and then tells he met naina few days ago and how he felt like he knew her from ages and tells how he wants to spend his life with her. He proposes her. Naina is little shocked but is happy as she also likes rajeev. Rishi is happy that tanuja is not that girl rajeev was talking about. Rishi then tells naina - jaldi se haan bol do. He starts praising rajeev. Ahana and tanuja are shocked. Naina finally says yes. Rishi hugs rajeev and congratulates him. Everyone wishes him good luck. Rajeev says since naina has said yes, he will now talk to his parents and takes their leave and tells them he will personally get naina to meet them. Rishi - zaroor lana. Ahana and tanuja look at each other and smile. Beeji signals thumbs up to them and they smile looking at each other that finally their plan worked and rishi not only broke his roka but also confessed his love for tanuja in front of everyone.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
nice ending👏.loved the way how rishi confessed his feelings infront of everyone.😳 rajeev and naina ending also goood!👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
Wonderful end but why end.Love all parts.Finally rishi comfrass his love and ahana and Tanuja plan get success.Happy ending.

Ps: Achieve love ur writing.Plz write on current track also.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
Loll rishi jealous was on peak
He was so afraid that tanuja will leave him
Hearing Rajeev want to propose a girl but rishi thought Rajeev proposing tanuja
Even manpreet & uv got worried as their planned to jealous tanuja backfired badly
Thank god finally rishi got his guts & confessed his love to tanuja in front of everyone
So Rajeev love navina & he proposed her in front of bedi
Loll rishi got really happy & relieved that Rajeev didn't have any feeling for tanuja
Rano & that chipkali will never understand tanshi love
Finally ahana plan worked & rishi broke his roka with chipkali
I'm sad that this story finished

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