love finds a way ff pt4 pg7

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Posted: 18 years ago
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😳hello ppl i know i haven'y updated that one but this is something entirely diff i don't frm where i got this idea

part 1😃

"didi……..didi……..where r u…………..didiiii" she was calling her 4 so long now but was no sign of her 😕then finally was able to find her on terrace looking at the setting sun she was relieved😊 to find her didi her didi or gauri was lost looking at the pink orange lines formed……. 😃 She took a deep breath n said "here u r .....😃pata hai I was searching 4 u for such a long time now😡…….ok now I have to give u a good news"😃hearing that gauri turned n smiled "really wat my sweet sis wants to tell me" 😉"didi…. The good news is shiv aaraha hai…aur…..😃" gauri didn't even allow her to complete as as son as she heard shiv her smile disappearedn she frowned "wats a good news in that…….aur waise bhi agar who aaraha hai toh main kya karoon" "kya didi mujhe laga tha u will be happy but u……he is ur hone waala husband" 😳"hone waala hai hua toh nahi hai …waise bhi who aaye ya jaaye mujhe koi farak nahi padta…..u get that" 😡kaya was not a bit happy 4 what gauri said as she thought gauri will be happy but she….. "kya didi mujhe laga tha u will be happy but u……oh forget that …….im going" murmuring n cursing herself on y did she come n tell gauri abt shiv….😡

Gauri turned once again to view the sky but the sky has lost her interest as her mind drifted to shiv "oh god this time definitely call for the wedding wat shud I do now" 😕she once again stared at the rising stars n thought how she disliked shiv dispite the fact they were engaged n their parents were friends she had known him from childhood ….😉

She didn't want to marry him but her parents forced her to how many times she said no but still they said shiv is a nice boy he will keep u happy n all other parents stuff u r our lovely daughter we want to see u happy we never asked 4 anything this is our 1st wish plss accept it humaari barsoon ki dosti rishtedari mein badal jayegi etc. etc. so she got ready but then thought may be shiv says no but when he said yes😃 4 the marriage she decided to meet him……….😉😳

everybody comment my 2nd attemt😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part!!!Gauri doesn't want to marry him!!wht abt him saut???pls continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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2nd attempt? cuty keep them coming...as i said we have the best writers and storys here 👏 👏
btw great start 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Zainu, you've got sucha creative and sweet imagination! Amazing start... Please cont asap!

Cheers,
dc
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Posted: 18 years ago
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write many FFs as u want
im going to read them all 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice start!!!!!!!
will be waitin for more....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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a new onewhen??very nice start carry on write as many as u want but cont all of them don't live them in between 😆 ok waiting 4 the next part.... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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brilliant start!!

looking forward to the next part!~!!
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Originally posted by: shivgauri

awesome part!!!Gauri doesn't want to marry him!!wht abt him saut???pls continue soon

ya sort of saut will be reveled later....sorry my computer had some problem😭

Originally posted by: Catwoman

2nd attempt? cuty keep them coming...as i said we have the best writers and storys here 👏 👏
btw great start 😉

thanx kat ...well can't keep them coming😭

Originally posted by: desi chic

Zainu, you've got sucha creative and sweet imagination! Amazing start... Please cont asap!

Cheers,
dc

thanxx di really need your all inspiration😃

Originally posted by: mintfresh

good start
sounds interesting
cont soon

thanx keep reading n commenting😳

Originally posted by: ash9

write many FFs as u want
im going to read them all 😃 😃 😃

thanxx ash i won't write that much though😭

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

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nice start!!!!!!!
will be waitin for more....

updating it soon thanx 4 liking😳

thanx😳

Originally posted by: gujibabe

great start
continue soon plz!!!

thanx well try my level best😳

Originally posted by: koolkitty

a new onewhen??very nice start carry on write as many as u want but cont all of them don't live them in between 😆 ok waiting 4 the next part.... 😊

ok sorry as i didn't tell u 😆 well achanak yeh idea aya😳

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

nice start...continue soon

thanx😳

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

brilliant start!!

looking forward to the next part!~!!

thanx 😳 next part up😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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well sorry 4 updating late my internet had some problem so wasn't online 😭
well this is a kind of different concept use so bear with me 😆

part 2

She was 20 when she got engaged to shiv 😊 that time both were studying shiv was in one of the class just sitting n chatting with one of his friend when gauri stromed in she didn't even notice anupam went straight to him shiv was a lil surprised to see her as she always stayed away from him no matter wats the occasion……. 😕 😃 she hardly spoke to him n now she is standing in front of him fuming…..amazing atleast he thought it to be amazing gauri in front of him….. 😉 "well shiv I only want to tell u that our parents want us to get engaged" " sooooo whatt" " so u shud say u don't wanna marry mee….got that" 😡 😡 it was clearly visible that she wasn't a bit interested in talking to her but he was also 1 of his kind exclaimed "can u pls explain why??/ me" 😳 "its bcoz I cannot say no" "its ur problem well tell me ……is it bcoz u have any affair with some one…" 😕 he winked as he thought gauri n affair funny…. 😆 this sentence infuriated her "whaaaatt u think I have that much time like u to have affairs ….well I hate this community of boys who don't have any other work but to flirt ….stupid ppl…….so u r telling that u don't want to marry me ….is that clear to u" 😡 😡 "no" 😃 how calmly he answered her when she was boiling "obviously y will I say no…I don't have any problem with marrying u as my parents want me too …..n if u don't want to u say ur parents as its your problem" 😊 😃 he shifted all the burden on her shoulder such easily n now she was controlling she also didn't know y whenever shiv comes infront of her she starts fuming…… 😡 😡 "so u won't say no…after ward u will regret it…" "we'll see" "get lost" saying this she turned n walked away briskly .. his friend anupam was bit a more surprised as she haad talked to shiv according to him 4 the 1st time "shiv what did this atom bomb say" "anupam dada I guess u heard everything with ur ears n saw with ur easy soo noo need 4 me to say" he chuckled "so wat will u do now will u say no" 😊 he asked …shiv smiled n said "no ways I won't ever say that I don't want to marry her ….actually she needs a hott dashing handsome husband like me…its 4 her own good…understand" 😃 😉 "well many other girls want to marry u …..Then y only gauri….u cud marry them also..." 😕 "nahi yaar ….it will be fun n a good experience to marry somebody who doesn't love u…understand dada n waise bhi nafrat pyaar ki pehli seedhi hoti hai" 😃 "that's true u n ur ideas really strange……well lets see wat happens" n they went to attend their next class smiling….. 😃
Shiv knew that gauri won't be able to say no as their parents were determined abt that n that only happened they were going to get engaged soon 😃
The days were going busy by shopping n shopping nikhilla wanted that gauri shud also come along with them for shopping as didn't want anything which gauri didn't like little did she no that gauri did not like shiv itself……..but gauri didn't want to go as shiv was also coming with them "no mamma I don't want to go u know I don't like shopping n stuff..plss nikhilla aunty u all go" "nahi beta tumhein chalna chahiye afterall tumhari engagement hai or nikhilla bhi kitna insist kar rahi hai""haan beta plss chalo….n pls mujhe aunty wanty mat bolo main bhi toh tumhari mamma hoon call me mamma or mom as shiv calls me" nikhilla patted her face gauri didn't have other option but to smile "but mamma" shiv who was all quite till now said "gauri come with us we all will be happy" 😃 gauri was staring at him furiously "ok fine" he smiled "omg jab hum kab se insist kar rahe the toh she wasn't even listening par jab shiv ne kaha she got ready in one go ……kya baat hai" 😛 😆 😆 everybody teased them she cud do nothing but stare at shiv n walk out seeing her this reaction he smiled thinking something 😳
In the mall also she wasn't a bit interested in any thing whatever everyone asked "beta how's this one…..shud I take" "ya sure aunt its really nice" 😛 even tough she didn't like it a bit n was passing her time there from the corner of her eyes she saw shiv who was taking interest in each n everything …….even in her clothes… "Laugh laugh this smile of urs is temporary I told u b4 its self" 😡 😡
They came back "kya gauri not a single thing u bought of ur choice" her mom asked her "when u all were selecting y shud I say n humesha toh apne choice ka hi pehenti hoon kabhi toh aap logon ke choice ka bhi pehenna chahiye na" 😳 "how sweet meri bahu ko abhi se humari kitni fikr hai" nikhilla patted her cheeks with love n she smiled as she knew nikhilla loved gauri a lot even gauri loved her n everyone else in the family except shiv it was as if she had some childhood grudge with him 😕 😕
Finally the engagement day arrived……..everyone was busy with the preparations…….afterall it was a big affair "gauri jaldi se tayyar ho jao those ppl will be coming" her mom came n reminded her to get ready "ok mom I will" relclantly she said as she was feeling really upset abt all these happenings
Her dress was a pink color lehenga with silver designs it wasn't that heavy which was good 4 her as she didn't like heavy clothing……..when she was almost done kaya came in "oh didi u just look stunning when jiju will see u he will surely faint" standing behind gauri infront of the mirror she was admiring her kaya always liked her sister's dressing whatever is the occasions gauri always took along time to get dressed biggest secret behind her look ….. gauri stared at kaya "y I always look the same" "no didi this dress is really suiting u" she thought it was necessary to clarify it "tum tayyar hogayi beta ……arre wah my daughter really looks good today …." N kissed her on the forehead "chalo beta jaldi chalo sab log aagaye" she took gauri with her downstairs ……….where everybody was waiting 😃 😛
Shiv was dressed in blue sherwani……… saw her descending down the stairs n he cudn't help but stare at her he was really mesmerized by her beauty no doubt she was beautiful 😳 😃
Kaun kehta hai ki chand
falak se niche nahi utarta
Jab hum nazar utha kar dekhte hain
Toh saamne hi chand utarta nazar aata

………his beautiful thought was interrupted by his elder brother sumit "shiv close ur mouth or else mosquito or fly or atleast a dinosaur will go inside" he waved in front of his face "yes bhai were u saying something" 😃 he asked coming out of the trance " no nothing I was saying my wife is looking beautiful" "no mine is looking more beautiful" 😃 "what shiv abhi tak tumhari wife hai toh nahi ….so how come" "u don't know bhai today I will get one" 😃 "ok for u to get 1 wife u have to go there….lets go" 😉
Shiv n gauri were brought in front of each other he smiled she stared ………then exchange of rings ……..shiv took hold of her hand n took a long time to insert the ring in looking directly into gauri's easy gauri was feeling little uncomfortable with his gaze when it was gauri's turn she tried to put as fast as possible so as to get away from his touch n gaze ……
Everyone clapped n family members hugged each other as now they were relative……..aur koi bhi party ho without any dance is it possible no right …….shiv n gauri were forced to dance shiv was ready but gauri didn't want to dance with him as dance means look into his easy which was really difficult for her……. "come on tum log sharmao mat" saying that sumit forced them on the dance floor……. He took hold of her again looking directly into her eyes which was the thing she was scared of u can say as it really carried her away n the song DAMN y do they put such songs which has full affect on the situation…….. 😕 😆 😆
Hum tum ko nighahon mein
iss tarah chupa lenge
Hum tum ko nighahon mein
iss tarah chupa lenge
tum chahe bacho jitna
Hum tummm kooo
chura lenge hoooooooooo
teri aashiqi mein jaana
teri aashiqi mein jaana
duniya bhula denge
tum chahe bacho jitna
Hum tum ko chura lenge hoooooooo

He did not leave her until he was asked to😆……but he said "one more song pls" at this gauri was shocked she didn't know what to say so she just…… n shiv "oh god"😕 "what happen shiv"😳she asked innocently "haan bhai kya hua"😕 asked a confused vivan "no nothing absolutely nothing I just remembered something that I had to talk to gauri" 😉he smiled looking at gauri n gauri's smile disappeared 😆as she knew shiv will take revenge of stamping his feet ….. "hai na gauri….chalo"😉 "what…..no…..i don't want to go any where" she refused but he cudn't let her go at any cost "no u have to come"😉 saying that he took hold of her hand n took her towards gauri's mom "aunty can I talk to gauri alone .pls"😳 "sure beta u don't have to ask permission for that" 😉she smiled "thank u aunty" 😳he smiled at gauri's mom n then took her in one of the room as now he got full right on her because gauri's mom also gave her the permission ….😆but gauri was trying hard that shiv leaves her hand but it was difficult as shiv was stronger than her………. 😃
As they reached inside the room gauri was able to losen the grip of shiv's hand "what the hell was that….why did u bring me in here" she was fuming as in front of everyone he took hold of her hand "well I want to tell u something"😊 suddenly he became serious "okk tell me fast" 😡 not being a little interested "not so easily" 😉 he took hold of her hands once more "u know tomorrow I'm going to UK that to for……" he was telling with a sad tone but this seems to brighten gauri "Really for how many years" 😃"I know that u will feel bad ….but 3 years will pass just like that only" he assured her but she "what only for three years I thought u will go for a longer time" "what u r not feeling upset that your fiance is going for 3 yrs" "no not at all …….i guess its good at least I will be away from u" "don't worry sweetie I will call u everyday" 😃 "what…no need u r going there to study so y waste time u see I'm so worried for u" 😃 she didn't want him to call her😕 "koi baat nahi …..See me properly so that u r not able to forget my face"😉 he took hold of her by her shoulder n was gazing directly in to her eyes this was the thing she disliked "I don't want to see your face". She tried to remove his hands from her shoulder but he wasn't that easy to deal "well I guess u will miss me soo………." He hugged her as he himself assumed that she will miss him "a big hug that u can feel me every moment in these 3 yrs" 😳 she was soooo shocked with this as she did not thought he will hug her soo easily she did not know how to react as this was the first time somebody other than her parents or friends have hugged her with soo much passion …….. The shivers ran down her spine……as he gently placed his hand on her waist….. she could feel his hand taking hold of her and pull her close towards him ….she could feel his heartbeat increasing……but even her heart was now racing…… Feeling his head against her shoulder…she did not know what to do……… this was enough to drive her crazy…. she realized her condition…….…he never felt soo good in his life what he was feeling in gauri's arm…….. Unknowingly gauri also had wrapped her arms around his shoulder ………but then something happened to that this beautiful moment came to a stop ………….gauri pushed him "what were u doing shiv" 😳 not looking into his eyes as it was really difficult that too now "well this u will remember for 3 yrs as after three yrs new experiences" he was being naughty n was walking towards her gauri's brain had stop working just after 1 simple hug she started walking backwards until there was only the wall…… he stepped close to her……now gauri's condition was vulnerable as he was leaning ……..leaning close to her……….he raised his hand……..she closed her eyes………… n put the strands of hair flowing here n there behind her ears……. "won't u remember this" 😉 his fingers outlined her face as he said in his husky voice…….she just in a nick of a second pushed him backwards n ran out…………as now her heart was racing n shiv let out a laughter inside………. 😃 😆
Gauri was sleeping peacefully after the tiresome day n …………….. She was unwilling to get up but kaya was determined to wake her up ………. "didi utho…..today jiju is going n you r sleeping…..mamma said we have to go n meet him ….get up fast" 😃 "kaya if he is going what cud I do go in his place" 😡 she was irritated as she did not like anyone's disturbance in her sleep "no u shud go n meet him after all he is your…….." "Ok u doesn't have to repeat …….go I'm coming" finally he is going what was her feeling she did not know n did not wanted to know too 😳 😃
They reached kapoor mansion shiv was ready to go his mom was in the state of crying😭 as she won't be able to see her son for 3 yrs gauri cudn't see her aunt's state she went near her "aunty don't worry everything will be alright n he is going only for 3 yrs n it will fly soon ….. hum log toh hain na aapke saath………sirf shiv ke jaane se aap itna dookhi kyon ho rahin hain"😛 she was making her understand nikhilla hugged gauri n stated crying mother's heart no doubt she thought "mom if u cry like this I won't be able to go see because of u gauri will also cry" at this gauri stared at him 😡how could he even think that she will cry for him " I can understand beta yesterday itself u both got engaged n today going far from each other well really your both condition is vulnerable" nikhilla tried to controlled her feelings ……… 😭
Shiv was taking blessing from everyone n hugging all of them when he came in front of gauri he smirked she just tried to ignore him "gauri I know u r feeling bad but don't worry I will call u everyday" 😃 "no need" 😕 she frowned "don't be shy in front of the family members I know deep in your heart u want me to call u" 😉 😃 gauri was staring at him in disbelieve she did not know he will be back of her like this …. "my sweet family can I hug my wud be wife" 😉 he was as if asking permission gauri's mouth opened in disbelieve is he nuts 😡 she thought "sure we will close our eyes" 😆 his bhabhi kumkum chuckled everyone laughed at that "thank u" n he really hugged her in front of everyone 😉 😆 n now was whispering in her ears "now u won't forget this either will u" 😉 😳 she whispered back "u fool just leave me now if it wasn't for the family or else till now I wud have kicked u" 😡 "I will be waiting when u can kick me sweetie" 😉 "don't call me sweetie I'm not ur sweetheart get that" 😡 "ok honey" 😉 "shut up n leave me" 😡 like a obedient boy he left her she sighed a relief………. Shiv left but she wasn't able to forget him as some body or other reminded her of him "shiv like this" "shiv likes that" somebody or the other kept on telling these things…. 😉 😳 she removed the ring but her mom told her to wear it ……….. 😕 she became a frequent visitor of shiv's house as nikhilla always wanted her to be around her 😉 plus she has joined kumkum with her boutique as she was a designer…. nikhilla n shyla with gauri's mom shalini were running Ngo's …. 😃
N now 3 yrs has past n he has come back now definitely next step was marriage she thought……………….. 😳


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Edited by fida-cute - 18 years ago

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