Fanfic: Shuruaat Pyaar...fresh updt 4/24 - Page 4

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Recap: Gauri refuses Shiv's help and decides to not let her hopes rise and to stay away from him.

As Shiv stared at her he could only think of one thing. What is she thinking about? After a few moments he finally turned around and said, "I'm going to take a shower…do you need anything before I go?" He waited for her to say something but when she didn't he went to take out his clothes from his bag and was about to enter the bathroom when he heard her whisper his name, "Shiv." He turned around to look at her and saw that she was looking at him. Her next words surprised him even more than her refusal for his help, "I'm sorry." He was stunned. He didn't know what to say so he finally asked, "Sorry? What for?"

Gauri heaved a sigh and continued, "Sorry for putting you through all this and sorry that you had to attend to me. You shouldn't have had to do all this." Her words pierced his heart. She was sorry that he was there for her? He didn't know what to say and before he had a chance to reply she continued, "But it doesn't mean I didn't appreciate it. Thanks…she hesitated…thanks for everything." Shiv, upon hearing her say thanks mellowed a bit. "You're not welcome," he replied in a soft but stiff voice and headed towards the bathroom. As soon as he closed the door, he turned the shower on at full and then leaned against the bathroom door and took a deep breath. "Why, why is she sorry? I should be the one apologizing not her! It's because of me she's in this condition. Had I not brought her here none of this would have happened," he thought. But a little voice somewhere said sarcastically, "Yes, you're right none of this would have happened. Neither would you have gotten to know her better and nor would you have realized her value." He looked around to find no one there and wondered if he was loosing it. With that he went to go take a shower and stood under the water for a long time, thinking back to the time spent in the jungle. For some reason he kept remembering Gauri's words, her anxiousness when he was being taken away, her concern…Gauri's thoughts refused to leave him. As he stood there, his dream slowly came to him. He realized all of a sudden that he had had a dream last night but could not remember what it was that he had dreamed about. It certainly wasn't the same dream in which he was running away from something or someone. He had actually slept peacefully through his dream! What was it that he had dreamed about? It was a very blurry dream he remembered that much and he had heard faint voices or was it just one voice? He couldn't place it exactly. He finally gave up and then realized that he had been in the shower for a while and that he should head back in case Gauri needed him.

While on the other hand…as soon as Shiv had closed the bathroom door Gauri had let her tears spill. She didn't know what to think. Why was this happening to her? Why couldn't they go back to the way they were before this honeymoon trip? She at least knew that Shiv disliked her and would never come near her no matter what. Then why did all this have to happen? Why were they forced to come close to each other? Why were they forced to open up to each other? Why? It was already hard to keep herself together earlier but now…she didn't know what to think. She had come close enough to Shiv to know that she liked being near him, close to him. She had come close enough to know that she felt safe & most secure in his embrace. But now what? Oh how she craved to be in his embrace again…it was as if all her pain would go away if Shiv would take her into his arms once again.

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thanx for all the lovely remarks and i'm posting a longer part as a treat! hope you enjoy it too...

RECAP: Oh how she craved to be in his embrace again...it was as if all her pain would go away if Shiv would take her into his arms once again.

"STOP IT!" she told herself. "You will live. You have endured a lot of pain before and you didn't flinch then why be afraid to bear this with a smile? She wiped her tears and promised herself that she would not let him realize her feelings for him. She would not let him affect her. The room phone rang startling her out of her thoughts. She reached for it and picked up the receiver and said, "Hello?" "Gauri! How are you beta? And how's Shiv? Do you know how worried we were? Are you both alright? You're not hurt are you? Everyone here is so worried about you two," Gauri smiled at her mother-in-law's concern. "Everything is fine Badi-Ma. I'm much better now…" "Much better…why? What happened?" Gauri remembered Ipshita's words and realized the family didn't know about her getting shot so she tries to manage by saying, "Nothing Badi-Ma. I was just very exhausted and…very scared." Now that I've had rest, I'm better. Don't worry everything's fine." Nikhila was relieved to hear her daughter-in-law's voice again but she also knew that the rest of the family (of course not including Palak and Maya) wanted to talk to her so she said to Gauri, "Beta, I'm putting you on the speakerphone so everyone can talk to you…just hold on a second." Gauri smiled and waited and she too felt that she would be much more comfortable if she also put herself on the speakerphone. She wouldn't have to tire her arm and back. She turned her speakerphone on and at once heard everyone's concerned voices, "How are you Gauri?" asked Dadi, Dada, Baba, Mashi-Ma, and Kaya. "I'm ok, how are you all?" And Dadi said, "You are worried about us? Beta, forget about us and tell us how you two are."

Gauri was trying to adjust her pillows while talking to the family and as soon as she had gotten comfortable she saw Shiv staring at her from the bathroom door, clad in a towel. She immediately closed her eyes and pulled her blanket over her head with her left hand. Shiv gave her a very irritated look because she did this every time he came out from the bathroom. He failed to understand what her problem was. Did he not look good after a shower or what? Usually, girls went nuts when he was fully clothed, just imagine what would happen if they saw him like this. He was thinking this when he looked down at himself again and then it struck him. What am I thinking? Do I want Gauri to go nuts over me? Oh god…what's wrong with me! And why does she do this every time? It annoys me so much…why can't she see me in a towel? Is she seriously this shy? Oh! Shy huh…hmm…cute, very cute. He smiled at the thought of her getting shy because of him. And then smacked himself on the forehead as soon as he realized what he was just thinking.

While this was going on the family was still trying to ask Gauri how she was and since she was under the covers, having lost sense of all else, she didn't reply. The family was confused by hearing no response from her. Finally Dadi asked in a higher tone, "Gauri beta? Are you still there?" Upon hearing Dadi's voice Gauri emerged from under the covers and slowly peaked around the room. She heaved a sigh of relief not finding Shiv in the room. He had gone back into the bathroom after grabbing his clothes that he had left on the sofa.

"Yes, Dadi. I'm here. What were you saying?" Shiv comes out in red pjs and an undershirt and heads towards Gauri. He goes and sits besides Gauri and says, "I'm here too you know, not just your daughter-in-law. I didn't know that you cared more for Gauri than me," he said teasingly. The family laughed, relieved to know that the two of them indeed were fine. They had to be fine considering Shiv's mood. Nikhila already had tears in her eyes but when she heard Shiv's voice she couldn't control them. Dadi said to Shiv, "do you know how much your mother has cried for you?" And Shiv immediately says, "Ma, I am ok. Please don't worry about me and I promise to see you in two days." "Two days? Why not today? I can't wait that long to see you and until I see you two with my own eyes I'll not be convinced that you are both ok." Both Gauri & Shiv looked at each other and Shiv continued, "Ma, we're both ok and we can't come home any sooner because we need to take care of some formalities with the police and can't leave till that's over. But I promise to be with you in two days." "Fine, but no more than two days…got it? I don't want my daughter-in-law to feel lonely and I know that she needs lots of love & care right now. After all that has happened it takes a while to overcome the shock. And don't you leave her alone for even a moment, you get that?" commanded Nikhila and Dadi said, "Gauri make sure that he's here with you in two days and no later. It's your responsibility to bring a son to his restless mother." "Ji," said Gauri and they ended their conversation.

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