FF: tu pyar hai Part 31!!! pg. 156 - Page 62

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Posted: 18 years ago
dis s getting boring!!!
i dnt like dis anymore!!
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Pls can any1 explain to me wat tht means?? Actually i 'm new here soooo plsss??? i'm really sry but if anyone could... then it would b gr8!!!

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I read your whole fanfic and I have to say it's to good. Can't wait for more
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: umaraa

gr88!!
i love itt lolll
aw i love shivvv 😊

thanx hun.. glad u liked it ... yep we all love shiv😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
thank so much.. glad to know ur enjoying it.. thanx
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Posted: 18 years ago
i'll surely be updating tonight.. i've started it.. so im sorry fo d delay.. thanx hun
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Originally posted by: ridhhhiii

Pls can any1 explain to me wat tht means?? Actually i 'm new here soooo plsss??? i'm really sry but if anyone could... then it would b gr8!!!

Thanks 😛

im sorry i don't get u.. wat r u asking????
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Originally posted by: Jai-Bani_Kasamh

I read your whole fanfic and I have to say it's to good. Can't wait for more

thank u so much hun.. glad u know ur enjoying it.. and yep jb kasamh se😉
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Originally posted by: Bratz

dis s getting boring!!!
i dnt like dis anymore!!

well hun im sorry u find it boring.. as i don't know where exactly i lost ur interest.. 😕 but all i can say is.. thanx fo reading and commenting.. im sorry i couldn't keep up wit ur hopes
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Posted: 18 years ago
hope u guyz enjoy this part.. im so sorry fo d delay 😛

*~*~*PART 21*~*~*



**wow 20 parts done.. now part 21.. this part is dedicated to EVERYONE who takes their time out to read this ff.. thank you sooo much.. if it wasn't for u guyz.. i wouldn't be up to part 21.. so thank you to all d silent readers.. as well as everyone who reads and comments.. means a lot to me..so once again thanx and thanx to my meanie for helping me out..cuz u know i'd be be lost wit out u** 🤗

now both shiv and shashank are fighting.. while the masked gunman.. comes behind gauri.. held her to gunpoint and before she could shout, he covers her mouth and drags her along and puts her in the car and drives off...At the mandir..shiv and shashank are busy fighting with each other completely oblivious to their surroundings..cuz at that time all they thought about was how to knock the other one out

Shashank was infuriated because he thought that shiv actually HATED gauri and his anger grew out of control.. when shiv dared to raise a hand on him...while shivz blood kept on boiling high.. just thinking...how dare he even think of raising a hand on gauri...(cough.. HIS gauri cough cough)he thought that shashank would just throw a few insults and leave...but this was out of control...He won't leave shashank for doing such a thing with gauri...

While they are busy.. fighting each other.. the pundit ji comes and tells them to behave as this IS a temple and not a wrestling arena that they can fight... they should show respect to god...finally shiv and shashank let go off each other.. their temper's still rooftops..
Shiv: Shashank aaj toh maine tumhe chod diya pundit ji ke kehne par, lekin agar phir tum meri aankhon ke samne nazar bhi aaye, toh tumhe mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta 😡 as he throws one angry look at shashank.. he turns and leaves.. not giving shashank a chance to reply..

while Shashank is standing there thinking Aaj ka din main zindagi bhar nahi bhulonga, kuch din tum log khushi se raho, but i will be back. as shashank leaves the mandir.. wit a evil grin on his face..

Gauri is in the car.. struggling like crazy to get loose but no chance of that happening.. as the kidnappers grip on gauri is TOO tight.. and to make it worse.. he has her at gun point the ENTIRE time.. which is scaring gauri to death.. After half an hour of driving.. the driver stops the car.. they arrive at a secluded place.. its dark all over.. no one in sight.. no house, no car... no nothing.. no communication.. this was bad.. a BAD sign.. secluded places are alwayz a bad sign.. especially when ur the one whose kidnapped

The Kidnapper then takes gauri into a boat.. to a remote island, where u can't see anything.. but a house type of thing.. a house.. just in the middle of nowhere.. no ppl.. no signs of any other living thing.. near by.. and now they were by water.. more further from the city..
Since it is now evening the area is just dark, with no lights, which was scaring the daylights of gauri.. who was shaking/shivering like crazy.. just thinkin wat would happen to her.. why was she kidnapped.. who could be behind this... why her?? as the kidnapper grabs gauri, still holding her on a gun point, takes her to the stranded house...throwing her inside (the kidnapper - aka TK.. so don't get confused )

TK: Now you can't escape anywhere, and don't even try running away from here, because this is a private island and if you move a single muscle, you will die a very painful death 😡 with that said, he locks her in, and goes outside.. he walks back.. making his way towards the boat again..

when he reaches for his cell.. dials a number..and waits
TK: ur work is done.. before he hangs up.. the person on the other side tells him to stay there for a couple of minutes as he is also reaching the destination..just then the kidnapper sees another boat heading his way.. towards the island.. and the person on it..

is none other than shiv kapoor himself..he looks extremely angry and frustrated.. if looks could kill, anyone coming his way would be dead..
just then shiv's boat makes it near the island.. shiv gets off the boat.. making his way towards the kidnapper
Shiv: Is she here?
TK: Yes sir, i did exactly as i was told.. she's inside..
Shiv: Okay, and make sure you NEVER mention this to anyone, do you get me?
TK: Don't worry sir... But what are you going to do with the girl?
Shiv: Like i said before, Today is going to be the beginning of tears in gauri's life, she will know what it is to mess with shiv kapoor 😈
as he gives an evil smile

Shiv: now go finish up the work.. make the other arrangements that i told u about.. im gonna go talk wit gauri as shiv's about to walk towards the house.. he stops
Shiv: and this time, you better be quick, is that understood??? the guy leaves to go start the arrangements that shiv told him to make.. when shiv makes his way towards the house

Gauri's sitting in the house.. which is quite dark.. as she's sitting in a corner.. crying.. thinkin about everything that happened today.. her life.. her wedding - that was just left incomplete and then her thoughts drift onto shashank.. and wat a jerk he is.. i can't believe.. after wat i did for him.. this is wat i get.. i sacrificed my love for that pighead.. and he played this game wit me.. wit her tears... anger is shown on her face.. as she's thinkin about shashank

but soon her reaction changes to that one of confusion I am never going to understand shiv... First he claims he hates me..and when someone else tries to harm me...he is ready to murder that man...As soon as i think that he may also love me... he does something that makes me think otherwise...he is sweet - well obviously i fell in love wit him.. yet the most hateful man there is...
when am i ever going to find out what he feels for me?


Just as she is lost in shiv's thoughts the door opens
and gauri is just scared out of her wits, thinking what is going to happen now.. Gauri looks towards the door.. Since its all dark...all she sees is an outline of tall well-built man 😉 She is not able to see the face clearly..but somewhere in her heart she has a feeling that she knows him...As the man came closer..making his way inside..instead of fear...gauri had this strange feeling...her tears had a mind of their own.. as they had stopped flowing...curiosity got better of her..as gauri got up and started walking towards the man...

the strange feeling inside her felt really good 😳 she had never felt this way before... it was scary yet very enlightening at the same time...As shiv was approaching gauri, he had mixed feelings.. he was anxious and at the same time....he was happy 😳 then he was caught surprised as noticed gauri walking towards him..as shiv was lost in his thoughts Wasn't she afraid of what's going to happen? This girl..i'll never be able to understand her....No wonder.. she always has to be on the edge everytime i see her...She is the only one who has driven me crazy like this..and yet i am enjoying every minute of it.

As both of them are walking..towards each other.. they stop in the middle of the room...where the moon light was shining...putting them on the spotlight... Gauri was not so surprised to see shiv standing in front her... instead of reacting she just stood there staring at him.... with a feeling of content...Shiv was just mesmerized by gauri's beauty..the moon light gave her an ethereal glow...He thought she never looked prettier..even with her puffy eyes... and messed up make up..she still looked like the most beautiful woman on this earth...

Both of them just stood there looking at each other...while the moon light was shining on them...it seemed like a blessing from the above...As they stood there..just looking at each other... Suddenly gauri saw a change in shiv's expression...Shiv as though hit with reality...came back to his senses... and then all the other feelings were taken over with anger..Shiv...coming out of the trance..yelling at himself for getting carried away...as he looked at gauri thinking what the hell was i about to do??? I shouldn't have gotten carried away... No matter how pretty she is... i still need to do this..

Gauri was just shocked at shiv's sudden change.. when Shiv decides to break the silence.. as he talks to gauri wit nothing but sarcasm in his voice
Shiv:I hope you are enjoying yourself at MY place. After all..you will be spending the next few weeks here...
as gauri looks at shiv shocked
Gauri: ur place?? this??? u mean ur the one who kidnapped me??? shiv smiles as the sarcasm continues to flow thru his words
Shiv: no no Of course not..i just came here to ask how you were doing...
gauri gets angry.. one cuz he kidnapped her.. and two the sarcasm
Gauri: What the hell is all of this shiv? Why are you doing this to me?
Shiv : Doing what gauri??? wat am i doing?? Now you will know what it is to mess with Shiv kapoor 😡
gauri listens to an angry shiv.. as tears start falling through her eyes once again
Gauri: I can't believe you are doing this... I hate myself for loving a man like you and wat i hate more is that i can't stop loving you even after everything... as gauri's voice breaks down a little cuz of the tears and sadness but she continues to talk
Gauri:As much as i would love to hate you...i can't even do that..because with every passing moment.. my love just keeps getting stronger... Even after all you have done with me... i still can't help but love you more...

They say love grows with moments of happiness, but we know it's true love when it blossoms with hatred

Shiv: Gauri... i didn't tell you to love me... all i know is that you insulted me... If you had truly loved me... then you wouldn't have done and said all those things... and now you have to pay... gauri is left heartbroken by shiv's words.. when she starts running towards the door when she is close to the door... she stops in her footsteps... due to shiv's voice

Shiv: Gauri run whereever you want.. but you can't escape... this is MY island and there is no way you can get out of here... Just go out to get some fresh air and you have to be back



hope u guyz enjoyed 😳

Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago

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