Meevan/Vivra FF: Rise Of The Devil *Chapter 1 page 2* - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 1:
"Lafzon mein ishq (love is there in words)"

D: Meera, ladke wale dekh ne aa rahe hai jaldi tayar ho jayo.
M: but mom...
D: meera...plz main koi disturbance nahi chahti
M: okay but mummy ap kisi vivan ke bare main keh rahi thi...
D: haan, woh aj anne wala hai and main use lane ke liye prince ko keh diya hai.
Suddenly dolly phone rings , she picks up. It was suman she pleaded to dolly to cancel this meeting. Dolly agreed.
D: ley bhai teri sasu ma kah phone tha
M: hmm...
D:arey, koi drama nahi?
M: nahi maa mujhe aj mujhe nah papa ke saath picnic banana hai.
D: toh cancel kar De?
M: bhala kyun?
*beji enters*
B: Meera tu vivan ke liye zara rajma chawal bana de.
M:thik hai
All of the girls get onto work. Meera cooks rajma chawal for vivan. Vivan and Amaya enter. All the girl servants (without ghugat) put their ghungat and start throwing flowers. Meera was still roaming without ghungat. Meera came out without putting her veil in , eating a apple.
A:*whispering* Bro , yahan sab kitne ajeeb hai
V: shut up Amaya kahi aisa nah ho ki yeh hamari jaan le le
A: *watches meera and shouts* meera
M: amaya
*they both hug each other. Vivan eyes is now fixed on meera.*
M: *noticed vivan watching at her* hello ...
V: yes...
M: why are u looking at me with curiosity ?
V: oh hello madam I have no interest in u...
M: every boy replies this when any girl asks him.
V: what do u mean?
M: yahi ki tum besharam ho
V: mind your language
M: well hamare yahan nah ladki ko bhi gun chalana ata hai
V: and u know London mein jo log dusre logo ko bewazah paresaan karte hai wo jail jate hai
M: hello Mr. Ghochu Kapoor, guest ho is liye chod rahi hun

*till that time her dupatta gets attached to his watch. She was about to go when her dupatta stretched her and both her into his arms. They both were mournfully watching each other without any words to speak. Amaya , the true shipper was watching at them and was continuously smiling *

M: vi...vivan please leave me *in a sweet voice*
V: miss meera, I haven't held u. You came into my arms.

They notice the dupatta attached to the watch and laugh. Vivan smiled at her and went away. He turned back and signed her bye. She smiled and left for kitchen work

Here was chapter 1...
I will continue some parts focusing on meervan after that will come to the point of secret

Banner will he updated soon!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Wow awesome update dear
Loved it
Plzzz do continue soon
Thanks for the pm
Edited by kusharberry - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
Thank u😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: kusharberry

Wow awesome update dear

Loved it
Plzzz do continue soon
Thanks for the pm

Thank you 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjani-pagli

wonderful Rosy...plz do continue!!!

Thank you😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16
Thank you 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved the chapter
Thank you so much for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AisiDeewangi

nice update

thanks for pm

thank you😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: eufara_naghm

Loved the chapter

Thank you so much for the pm

thank you😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update dear...
Eagerly waiting for next update...
& thanks for the pm...

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