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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello all 😊
Weekends really get me bored , coz there is no RaVika. So , I thought of writing this OS. If you love RaVika , this is for U. Of course this wudn't be as good as watching RaVika onscreen , but it might help U a bit to enjoy them together , if U can imagine what U read.
So , here it goes. Hope U have a happy reading.
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Location : - Ravi's place.

" Oh Lord ! " , he said , yawning wide , " this Nivedita might even kill me someday . " Since the last five hours Ravi had been straining his eyes , by keeping them glued to the screen of his laptop , searching for necessary information , required to complete the work , his boss had assignd him.
Ravi had never been lazy , but the failed attempt to reveal Saket , in Devika's mehendi ceremony , and the hurt in Devika's eyes when his mother insulted Devika infront of everybody , was getting on his nerves now. He could have refused to accept the work , but he knew better than to do that. He could not provide Nivedita , his egoistic boss , one more chance to insult him , and call him lazy or unworthy for that matter.
He was really tired and his eyelids were beginning to drop when he heard a familiar voice. " Ravi. Are you okay ? " . He raised his head to look for the owner of the voice and found Devika. In a blue-green salwar-kameez , looking as fresh as the morning dew , she was standing infront of him holding a cup. To say he was surprised would be an understatement. " What ? You. I mean , you here . How ? " , he blabbered all at once. " Oh God ! Relax Ravi. Its just me. Here , " , said Devika , placing the cup on his table , " coffee for Kumbhkarana " , she finished with a teasing glint in her eye , and a smile. Amusement clearly shone in his eyes , but Ravi warned her in mock anger , " How dare you ? Kumbhkarana was a fatty like your brother Sanjay " . " And by the way , thanks for the coffee , its superb. You didn't tell me , why are you here at " his eyes widened , as he glanced at the clock , and raised an eyebrow , " 10 PM ! ? " . " I am here Ravi because I wanted to thank you and tell that I trust you. I know that Saket is...not good . You tried to warn me , that is what matters . I am lucky to have a true friend like you . " . The seriousness in her eyes told Ravi this was not a lie. Devika trusted him. He found himself getting relaxed. It wasn't the coffee but her words that had produced the effect. ( U may imagine Kabhie na sukoon aaya playing in the background ) Then as if suddenly remembering ( background song ends ) Devika spoke , " About the coffee , I knew it would be superb. After all , I made it. " . then drawing a serious expression on her face and pointing a finger at Ravi she warned him , " And my brother is no Kumbhkarana. Get it Mister ? " . He did not find the expression scary at all. Rather he thought she looked cute , and also realized that he thought a lot these days. He would really have to put a stop to such thoughts. But for her sake , he put on a scared facade and said , " Ok . Got it . Devi Maa . ". " Oops , Sorry . Devika . " . He let out a laugh as he noticed Devika's eyes going wide and her mouth turning into an O' shape . Amidst the giggles that escaped him , he apologized , " Hey ! Sorry. Devika . Stop. I said I am sorry. U did call me Kumbhkarana. Remember ? " , as Devika hit him repeatedly with the pillow she found on the sofa nearby . " God , Bhai ! Devika ! Stop screaming guys , are you both some five year olds ? " . " Maasi will kill us all if she gets up and find you here Devika . " , said a surprised Monty . It was clearly evident from the look on his that he couldn't believe his brother was involved in a pillow fight just seconds ago. " Monty" , said Ravi almost requesting , " Don't tell Maa that Devika is here . " . Monty looked at Ravi like he was speaking in Latin , and then as if realizing , his lips curved into a smile as he told him , " Devika didn't tell you , that I brought her here. While Vikas bhai and I were returning , she was trying to sneak out of her house to come and thank you. She thought she is Devi Maa , and she could go anywhere without anyone noticing her . So , I helped her . " . The inquisitive expression faded from Ravi's face as he vibrated with silent laughter noticing Devika slip back into her former angry avatar. Monty looked from Ravi to Devika trying to decipher the reason for their weird reactions to his words. " MAAa... " , he screamed , covering his face and jumping backwards , as Devika moved towards him with a raised hand and a murderous expression . Then opening his eyes slowly , he saw that Devika had just pointed a finger at him and was now looking at him as if he was mad . Monty did not miss Ravi laughing hysterically at his plight.
" Ravi ! Bhai ! Hey ! Get up . are you all right ? " , the concerned voices of Vikas and Monty woke Ravi up from his dreamland . Ravi realized that he had fallen asleep and Devika's presence was his dream. His heart sank as reality hit him . " Are you okay , Bhai ? " , asked Monty. " What was it " , asked Vikas , " Did you transform into Rahukaal in your dream and snap your boss's neck ? " . Vikas and Monty high-fived each other laughing at what they thought was the greatest joke. " Very funny " , said Ravi , " Its nothing. You guys go sleep. I think I just need some rest " . " Alright , Goodnight then " , said Monty as they retreated towards their respective rooms.
Only if it hadn't been a dream , would it have been a goodnight for him . As he now lay on his bed , he decided he wouldn't give up and would surely protect Devika from all evil . But sleep refused to embrace him , the only thought plaguing his mind , " Do you trust me Devika...still ? ".
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A/N: Now that you have scrolled to reach here , I am hoping that you have read the OS . If you liked it , please hit the like button and tell me what U thought.
Waiting for your precious comments . 😊


Edited :-
Last night , my wifi connection was really weird and when I posted this OS little data was lost.
Nothing major though , just few letters chose to fly hindering with the spelling of few words. Sorry for the inconvenience.
But now all is well . 😊
Edited by 2Obsessed - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ani dear I wanna hug you
This is just superb
Fantastic
And I was really missing Ravika
Thank you so much
I wish his dream turns true someday
Keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow ani it's just totally rocking or shall I say awesome... I wondered what raving would be feeling after that meeting with her family and the whole saket fiasco...
It's lovely to see him missing her so much and the he even remembers her in his dreams...must say his love for her is blossoming slowly...

It was a delight to read and my favourite part was the pillow fight. ..just too cute. ...

Hope he gets to meet his friend soon otherwise he will become a lone ranger and I am sure we don't want that...

Thanks for sharing...

Raz :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix

Ani dear I wanna hug you

This is just superb
Fantastic

Manu , U loved it so much. 😃 Thank U. 😛

And I was really missing Ravika
Thank you so much
I wish his dream turns true someday

Amen 😆

Keep writing

Sure dear.😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: raaz19

Wow ani it's just totally rocking or shall I say awesome...

Thank U so much Raz 😛

I wondered what raving would be feeling after that meeting with her family and the whole saket fiasco...
It's lovely to see him missing her so much and the he even remembers her in his dreams...must say his love for her is blossoming slowly...

Yeah ekdam correct .

It was a delight to read and my favourite part was the pillow fight. ..just too cute. ...

Wud be awesome if we get to see that on screen . Isn't it ?

Hope he gets to meet his friend soon otherwise he will become a lone ranger and I am sure we don't want that...

Of course not . Never .

Thanks for sharing...

My pleasure :)

Raz :)


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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow superb os ani. i loved it so much. i have no word for this.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Such a cute scene. Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreepatil.

wow superb os ani. i loved it so much. i have no word for this.

Thank U , dear.
I m glad U liked it. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: JazzyM

Such a cute scene. Loved it

Thank U for reading , and appreciating , dear :)

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