Bonded by womb - MaNan FF Chap 1[pg 3] 2/1/17

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Bonded by womb



Alia listen , we don't have to do this. There are many couples like us . Listen this is not needed. Look at me, I am happy, ain't I ? You don't have to do this for me. Please...


This conversation always ended up there. Always.
And here we are waiting for a girl named Nandini, in a restaurant.

Alia looked at me. She was looking pale. Ofcourse due to all the stress we are going through. Still I don't know why she is doing this , when I myself told her several times , it's normal and it's okay.

I always loved babies. After I lost my little sister in an accident when she was only a few months old, her picture plastered in my heart forever. And ever since that day, I kind of felt a connection with babies, their innocence, their smiles.

Alia and I got married. It was a compromise for me, but for Alia it was her dream marriage. She always loved me, ever since she learned the word "Love".

For me?
I have never felt anything for her which could be called Love, even Alia knows about it. It was a relationship of trust and friendship. Alia was happy with it. But I never cheated on her. I was raised on a right manner, not to jeopardise a sacred relationship like marriage with infidelity.

After we got to know , Alia can't be a mother due to some internal problems, at first I broke down. Cause I was always fascinated about having my own baby.

But there was someone more than me who got affected. That was Alia .
She always knew , I wanted a baby .
That's what made her more depressed that she couldn't give me one.

I tried a lot to make her understand for the last one month that , Alia and her health is more important than baby. Maybe this is God's plan. We can't always adopt a baby.

And here we are. Waiting for Nandini.

Nandini murthy.

She was in need of money. Her family is going to be bankrupt if they can't manage the money by next year.

She tried everything, everywhere. But whenever someone came to know about her background, they all backed off.

Here she is, forgetting the world , forgetting the shame, going to accept the offer and save her family from being completely ruined.

She doesn't care if this ruin her or not.
She knows it will ruin her. After all it's her Manik again.
Manik Malhotra again after all this years.


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A new concept came up to my mind. Basically I read a lot of fanfic. While reading one of this , suddenly this idea came up. Do let me know if it's worth continuing forward. Since this forum is gradually dying, I wanted to be the saviour, to enlighten it again.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great start dear
Pls update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Will love to read it,
continue soon.
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Hey the plot is amazing..I haven't read anything of this sort on MaNan..And the prologue is very well written..you should definitely continue
Prologue reminded me of movie Chori Chori chupke chupke..that movie was also very amazing <3
Just a suggestion..if you could post this on Wattpad as well..because people hardly come here..when u take efforts and write something then u deserve a proper response not just 4-5 comments..on wattpad u'll get great response.. its just a suggestion I hope u don't mind :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonia1000

Hey the plot is amazing..I haven't read anything of this sort on MaNan..And the prologue is very well written..you should definitely continue

Prologue reminded me of movie Chori Chori chupke chupke..that movie was also very amazing <3
Just a suggestion..if you could post this on Wattpad as well..because people hardly come here..when u take efforts and write something then u deserve a proper response not just 4-5 comments..on wattpad u'll get great response.. its just a suggestion I hope u don't mind :)



Thankyouu . Glad that you liked the plot. It reminded me of that movie too 😆 😆

And I have already uploaded this prologue in wattpad too. My wattpad Id is nishi005 . You can check there and do let your friends check that out too. Still a newbie in wattpad. Still doesn't know how to operate it properly
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pagolmeye



Thankyouu . Glad that you liked the plot. It reminded me of that movie too 😆 😆

And I have already uploaded this prologue in wattpad too. My wattpad Id is nishi005 . You can check there and do let your friends check that out too. Still a newbie in wattpad. Still doesn't know how to operate it properly

I'm not a newbie but still don't know how to operate it :P lol
Don't worry..I'll let my friends know :)
btw my username is KainatAshraf on wattpad..I just followed you there
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Posted: 8 years ago
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new story...
interesting concept...
waiting for update...
will b it same like chori chori chupke chupke film?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: navla

new story...
interesting concept...
waiting for update...
will b it same like chori chori chupke chupke film?



To be honest , I have never seen that movie. But somehow know that the movie is something like this plot. So really can't say if this will be like the movie or not. I hope not :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow nice concept do update soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Bohot accha tha yaar.Chori chori chupke chupke ki tarha story hain.I hope manan jeyada ho.Update soon.

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