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Posted: 9 years ago
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OK guys...I wanna ask u something about my new story... Wajah Tum Ho.
1.Is this a wrong story...???
2. Did I give wrong explanation about my characters.

Kindly plz reply me...😊 Or agar koi doubt ho to v puch Lena...😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mujhe to aise kuch feel nhi hua...
Mujhe to bilkul shi lgaa..
buy why are you thinking like that ?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nope nthg lyk that
In fact I lykd the character sketch
Any problem dear...why r u thinking so
Kisi ne kuch kha
Don't think lyk that u write awesome
Ab give update jaldi jaldi 😉

Keep smiling always
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Naa na... Everything seems good... But y r u in doubt??
The story seems Intresting and nice to me
:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: gtilwani45

Mujhe to aise kuch feel nhi hua...
Mujhe to bilkul shi lgaa..
buy why are you thinking like that ?


Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

Naa na... Everything seems good... But y r u in doubt??

The story seems Intresting and nice to me
:)


Originally posted by: akshima1995

Nope nthg lyk that
In fact I lykd the character sketch
Any problem dear...why r u thinking so
Kisi ne kuch kha
Don't think lyk that u write awesome
Ab give update jaldi jaldi 😉

Keep smiling always
😊


Thanks for reply...actually I got some review that story is wrong but sadly they didn't point out my mistake. So thought to ask u guys...
About next part to woh next 2 or 3 days main ho gayega hajir...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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no problem
all the best
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Posted: 9 years ago
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No there's nothing wrong with it...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
No dear there is no problem and nothing is wrong u just continue ur story 😛 all the best dear luv u 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
Nah! its awesome! continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I don't find any wrong in this story
it is damn interesting & awesome
don't mind about others
cont soon
waiting for update😊

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