Manan OS - My Birthday (completed) (new story alert page 2)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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#Manan_New_OS.

#My_Birthday

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01.07.16

In heaven..

I am Nandini Murthy..today is my birthday and also my death day.. I died in today by gunshot..

I entered in heaven few minutes ago..

My eyes r so blessed to see such a beautiful scenario..I can not able to blink my eyes...

its so beautiful..more than beautiful from my think. A pure river of water , clear as crystal is flow from the throne of God
..On each side of the river there r a tree of life, yielding many kinds of fruit every month. The streets r made by pure
Jewel , like transparent glass. The walls of the city is made with many kind of jewel,There r no need for a sun or
moon, and no need for a temple or church. The presence of God is light..Only Spring season available here..
out of the throne of God..so overwhelmed with His love..

When I saw him face to face..

His smile is warm. His face is bright , radiant, charming...his voice is magical..

He wipe every tear from human eyes. There r no more death or mourning or crying or pain, only happiness exploring everywhere..

"Welcome home ,, My child!" God tenderly welcomed me...
I lost in his magical voice..

But somewhere I felt unhappy in my heart,, sad and empty.I know death is a sorrowful with its separation.it separated from my love /my manik. I lost my soulmate...
we have so many dreams we had, so many songs unsung...

After entering , the angel of heaven comes to me and gave me a white floral gown.here every humans were wearing white cloths .this is there rules...it seems,, white clouds exploring everywhere..

After wearing the gown..

"U r looking like an angel,naive ,pure and innocents. There r no difference between u and us " One Of Angel of heaven complement me and left..

I felt alone inspite of so many human.. Thinking of Manik.. My soulmate,, love,,.. This make me sad and cry..

I start crying...

God is sitting on his throne which is made by a lots of Golds and Diamonds.
.
A crying sound came to his ear..

"In heaven,, nobody cry or sad here??..here all human r so happy..here they escaped from their whole earth life sin..but what happened to her?? Why she is crying??God disbelves himself and comes near to her..

"Child, what happened to u??.. See other human r so much happy here?? But why r u crying ?? God asked her in a curious tone..
She turns her face and looks at God..

"God,, why u brought me here??..separated from my love..today is my birthday but u also made this day is my death day.. Why God?? What sin I did??, I am angry with u??.she complaints Her God like a child..

"Child,,this is your fate which was written when you born.. Nothing changed .. All human r bonded by their fate and destiny
,,don't be sad" God said and cursed himself for writing such a cruel destiny..

She still sobbing..
____________________
Nandini pov-

Flashback..

In Mumbai

Mr Samar Murthy is my father. My dad and Mr Raj Malhotra r business partner.Manik is only one son Raj Uncle..me and manik were childhood friend.. We love each other..

Today is 01.07.2011

Malhotra Mansion..

I am shouting.. "Manik , Manik , where r u ?? "Entering the lavish mansion..

"Angel,, what happened?? Why r u shouting??Raj uncle asked me..

"Uncle,, where is Manik?? I want to see him.. U know,, today is my 18th birthday.. I have a surprised for him.."i replied him and blushing...

"Oh,, Today is my Angeles birthday.. Happy birthday to Angel.." Raj uncle wished her..

"Thank you ,,Uncle.. But where is he??" I again asked him..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Next..

"Oh,h,, He is not at home..in morning, he left for London..For
business studdies and also maintain my business there.."
Raj uncle told me..
"What.." I am in a disbelieved tone..
"Yes,, Beta,, he will stay London at least 5 years" uncle
replied..
" but why he didn't tell me this.this sudden disappearance." I
said in a angry tone..
"It happened within one days..he had not enough time to tell
u".uncle said..
I angrily left Mansion..
"Angel,angel listen,, Nandu.." Uncle shouted from behind but
i already left..
I came to my home..and sitting on my rocking chair..
Tears r rolling down from my eyes..
"How u do with me manik??.. Without telling me??u left your
angel.." I am sobbing..
"My 17th birthday manik said me, *I U*..but I didn't
response ..Today is my 18th birthday..I will waiting for this
day from last year..this is a very special day for me,,today,
also i turned as a women.. I want to tell him those 3
magical words.. But he left without telling me .he
disappointed me a lot...ok (Wiping tear),,nothing will be
apart us..Manik and Nandini will be Together forever.. I Will
waiting for u, Manik till my last breath" Nandini in mind with
a hope..
...
.
5 years passed like this..
Today is 01.07.2016
My 23th birthday
At 12.15am
I layed on my bed..checked my phone time to time..becoz ,I
am waiting for Manik's wish..in last 5 years manik was not
contact with me.. I am in hope.. Today he will wish me..
Bit almost 3.00am..
I am not able to sleep today..becoz,Manik is not Wished me
yet..
In the mean time.. I heard some gun shots..

I come to down stairs and show some toddlers shots here
and there.I don't know who r they?? Why they came here?.
They also killed my parents..
"Mamma,,pappa" I shouted when I see their dead body..
Before I do something they also shots me and I layed on
floor..
"Maann..."only one word uttered from my mouth..
__________
Scene change
In Airplane
In the same time ,,a boy felt his heart beats r stopped for a
few second.. He is not able y take his breath..
"What happened to me?? Why I felt like this?? It seems,
someone snatched my soul from my body" he thought
himself..
.
.
After a sometimes ,,a smile crept on his lips..
"Nandini,, today is your birthday.. I did not wish u last 5
years also not contact with u.but,tomorrow u will be
surprised when u see me .."he is smiling..
.
After 30 minutes..
Suddenly, plane virtually uncontrollable due to mechanical
failure...
"OMG,, What happened??. Why plane is moving to and fro. I
will die anytime."he said himself in a shocked..
Before he says something ,, all passengers r start shouting
and runnings here and there..and plane is crashing into a
mountain..
"Nandini..Happy Birt..."Only two words uttered from his
mouth... And took his last breath..
.
.
Breaking news.."Most talented business Tycon,, Mr.Manik
Malhotra died in plane crash..he achieved..."
Flashback end

___________
In heaven..
Many human entering in a same time and make some noise
gathering..
"God,, what happened?? Why many humans r coming
hurriedly in a same time."Nandini came near to God and
asked curiously..
"Child, a plane crashed in earth and all passengers died on
the spot" God replied..
"I felt,very weird.. Seems Manik is closed to me.." Nandini
in mind..
Suddenly, I see a boy is sobbing something,, bending his
head one of corner of the heaven. My heart skipped a beat
and I can't able to move.. But I managed to walk and came
near him.I keep my hand on his shoulder.heard something..
*HAPPY BIRTHDAY NANDINI* he said in a prayer..
My eyes r popped out from my socket
"Maaaniikk"I managed to say in a shook..
He turned his face and look at me..
"NANNNDINI.".he said in a shocking voice..
"I think , I lost u,,but why u here??" Manik askss...
We narrates our both story and hugged each other..we r
feeling now real heaven in each other arms
.
Manik - HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U NANDINI..
Nandini -I LOVE U MANIK.
Manik - I LOVE U TOO..
happy tears escape from their eyes..
"NOTHING WILL BE APART US. MANAN WILL BE
TOGETHER FOREVER FROM BORN TO AFTER DEATH" both
said unsionly..
"Oh what a eternal love!!..God feels also proud himself for
seeing such a happy love story in front of his eyes..
"All birds r singing in a one tone,,APSARA also starts their
dancing.. Flowers rain occur..etc etc.." To see the lovey
dovey couple..

Days/years passed ..
One day they r sitting in a rocking cradle holding each others
hand..
"Its a miracle Nandini,, God wants our love story like this in
heaven, our romance also" Manik huskily said near her ear..
She is shivering..
"Manik,, u monster,Mr. One track mind, u r still same.stop
romancing"Nandini slaps his shoulder playfully..
"we r not alive,, but look our soul craving for each
other'"..He said and start tickling on her..
"Manik, stop,ha ha hi hi" she giggled..
(Kya ajeeb couple hai heaven main bhi romance korti hain
)
In the mean time God called them..
"Manik and Nandini,, u both r escaped from heaven. this is
the time for both of your rebirth,, time for do what u left
your previous birth"God announced
"No,, God, no, we won't need rebirth.. Plz don't separate us "
they pleading..
__________
Its 3000 years
Mr Malhotra and Mr Murthy r neighbour.they r living in Dilhi
and a same flat.
This is why, Mrs Malhotra and Mrs Murthy r having a good
bond.. Both r pregnant of 7th months..
They r happy ,, first time pregnant for Mrs Murthy and
second time for Mrs. Malhotra..
After two months..
01.07.3000
Both took in hospital due to their labor pain in a same time..
Two cute baby , a boy and a girl are born..both babies right
hand have a green colours birth marks..
Their parents r happy also astonished to see the same mark
have both of their hand.when first time they close to each
other.. They touch each other hand..its a miracle..
They keep their name Manik and Nandini..(unknowingly)
They grow together..their first baby step to first mamma
pappa calling ,, all r occurring in together..
Every year their parents r celebrated their birthday together..
their childhood ,they used to fight with
each other. Whenever they fight,,they cant live without each
other. When nandini used to go for holiday's with her
patent..manik becme restless and miss her a lot and waits
for her arrival, also same case with nandini.
They are read in same class from school to college..
Inspite of, their fight,, they love each other madly.

01.07.3018
Manan proposed each other on their 18 th birthday..its a
special day for them..
01.07.3024
They r married on their 24th birthday..after call they are a
happy couple.
01.07.3026
Manan r blessed with a twin boy and girl..
After aged,, Manan blessed with many grandchildren..
01.07.3080
They died in each other arms..
Again they enter in heaven together after a good memorable
journey in earth..
"Welcome again my child.. I will waiting for u " God tenderly
said..
My birthday is very special for me..
MANAN WILL BE TOGETHER FOREVER
NOTHING APART THEM.. BECAUSE THEY ARE TIED FOR
7TH BIRTH..
_____THE END______
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice os.
MaNan is together not only for 7 births...they r forever.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one..
Manan r together forever...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Excellent os...
Every emotion written beautifully...
D way manan met after death was cute...
Luved it...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful ...so pure serene magical wow luved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am writing a new story manan ff - Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon ek Baar Phir
plz check it..

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