Manan FF - Kaisi yeh Yaariyan season 3 - Chapter 123 & note - Page 50

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Posted: 8 years ago
Heyyy dear!!!!!!
Well frankly saying if anyone else would have written about dhrulya...it wouldnt have been much appreciated...not because we are biased towards u...but because no one has ever done such justice to dhrulya...and expressed the emotion and feelings so well...believe me...

And yeah not only dhrulya but i would also like to see more of mukti and navya...

And about the story...well i dont know if am being selfish...but...i really dont want it to end soon...naah...not at all...
And write as much as you can for now...please pretty please... _/\_

Your story is a stress buster...your writing style is so...perfect...
You literally have done justice to show and done an even better job than the MTV team could ever have...
Season 1 was a treat to cherish but season 2 literally was a disappointment...manan were not given a proper end...what happened to dhruv ???? Wouldnt alya ever find her true love???? What about navya's baby????about mukti's career???? Was manik able to regain his forgotten memories??????
Nothing was answered...
Maybe these issues would be taken care of in season 3...ONLY IF IT EVER COMES...

But you my dear have literally brought its grace back and gave manan and the fab five and navya what they deserve...
And frankly it would be a treat to watch this story of yours on MTV ...


Ek minute ...ek minute...
A question just popped up in my mind...
Dhruv toh chala gaya tha na ...to become something or whatsoever...(by the ending of season 2) ..toh when did he return?????

Well...for now...its a bye...gotta studyyy...sigh...
And yeah once again...keep updating and we'll keep commenting...:)) :D

And yeah dont end it soon...it still has a long way to go...
Love yaa and your story :)) <3<3
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update...

alia had been thru tough time n she is letting out her frustration now ...
Candlewick thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Di...
How are you doing..?

As I said ..I'm loving the plot..and way the story is progressing... its a bliss to read the cute MaNan moments ..!!..After a long time I've found something which is relatable to "A fault in our stars"..!!

I just want to say...PLEASE NEVER EVER END IT!!..I know I sounded stupid.. but trust me this story fascinates me..to a great extent ...! One emotional dialogue is enough to moisten my eyes and one sudden twist is sufficient for my hairs to stand on ends...!!

I know there will be a situation when you'll run out of plot...but now your story has layers and layers to be described.. continue it as long as you can honey..!!


And once again I'll like to thank you..for introducing -KY2S3..!!! ^.^

Lots and Lots of love from India..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow di this is so amazing update.loved it very much.this cute romance of manan.
It's really superb manik always never leaves his chances to romance nandu& tease her.too cute😳
Then their Beach convo it was very well written. Thank u di.like manik & nandu I also hope ki fab5 phir se atleast normal hojaye.

Ok di I think u had a lot work this week,that's why u are late& yes u told us already about it.so no need for sorry&don't take too much stress& take care di.& take rest too.now I am leaving di
Byeee& stay blessed😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update dear.Their cute talks and romance ,beach walk .talking about fab5 he was missing his family. manik doesn't need to regret or blame himself for his friends because he gave his everything one can give to their friends. He always only wanted their happiness beyond every thing.And he showed me what is real friendship and how much one can sacrifice his happiness for his friends.I luv Manik. well written episode. Thank u so much for the update. Take care.
Edited by vaanii078 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update dear. Mukti and alya need to talk to each other. Since manik feel fab5 as his family, of course it will be difficult for him to digest all these unexpected things but at the same time he can't control that as Nandini said . He has to let go things the way they are . Nandini is a good friend too for manik. She is really a moral support to manik at difficult times. Thanks for the update. Take care
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: 1_drop_of_rain

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I am very sorry guys.. very sorry, i have been wanting to reply to u all for the past two weeks and every i time i failed. :(
So sorry..
Also the names are in totally random order:

@shoana : ch94 - I got ur comment on wattpad. Glad u r there, at least there i am punctual with replies :) n hows ur fever now? Glad u liked it :)

Ch 93 - Loved how you wrote I mande u read about Dhrulya :):) U r a sweet heart. But i explained later y its important to give everyone a fair chance :)


@thamannamanan1: ch94 - Pehle to thank u for reminding me that I missed the song. I totally missed it :) I like your multi coloured comments, just like you :) n i am glad u liked the update, it was rather sombre, the two different faces of their relationship, the childlike side and the serious side :)

Ch 93 - yes they suddenly neglected Alya and screwed up her character. They made a caricature ot of her. Evert character, be it good or bad should have depth to them n Alya was given none. As this story progresses, I hope to add more depth to both Dhruv and Alya. n yes Dhruv was doing his share of calculations in his head, because he listened to everything silently, he neither realized his own mistakes, nor did he own up to them and showed the inclination to correct them. But with time they both will understand whats best for them


@ac2000 : ch93 -I guess i already replied to u about Neel. He is just a part of this story , not the centre so, we will not give him more than the mileage he can swallow.

Author note - U have open invitation in kill Neel team. Just drop in your ideas :)




@vijayfan: ch94 - U r such a sweetheart, every comment of urs is so full of love and concern. Whether i get to reply or not, I love u and ur comment. This past week I had a lot of exams dear. every month 1st week i have these module exams. During these modules i struggle to updat. Also as my posts lengths have increased, it takes two days to write one update :)

Ch93 - Thank you for ur faith in me dear. Thank you for seeing them through my eyes and trying to understand the less told part of the story :)




@vaanii078 : ch94 - Yes he has always sacrificed for his friends but u know what sometimes even the best of intentions bring out bad results because what we think is good for others is in reality not the best for them. But i hope by the end of S3, i would do justice to each of them, their love and friendship.:)

Ch 93 - I understand ur anger for dhruv and Alya. If i had taken it forward and given them the same flat characters, to fir kya alag karti? How wud u have credited me as a writer then. Let me give them a fairer chance. and let me see by the end of this season whether you hate them just as much or not.


j@esse93: ch93 and response - Sab Alya ko jealous hi samajhte hain, because thats how she had been potrayed by the writers. I want to show another side to her, which is the more humane one. So lets ki yeh stoy khatam hone tak u love her or still hate her. :) No of updates zyada hi rakhungi :)

@rockstarlover ch93 - Thank you dear :)

satya 28: ch92 - All your questions will be answered slowy. Like Neel and Amms. So chill for now and go with the flow.

Ch93 - Its just the begining of Alya's realization. With time her actions and her attitude will transform and i hope I can show that transformation to the best of my ability. :) Well u have manan in ch 94. It cant always be manan because its yaariyan. hope u love others almost as much as Manik.


@jenny1011: Hey girl, I love all your comments. I savour them actually. I will give a combined reply to your comments on chapter 93 and the following note.
'what happened to dhruv ???? Wouldnt alya ever find her true love???? What about navya's baby????about mukti's career???? Was manik able to regain his forgotten memories?????? ' - all your questions will be answered one at a time as the story progresses further. So chill.

"Dhruv toh chala gaya tha na ...to become something or whatsoever...(by the ending of season 2) ..toh when did he return?????" - ok thats a blooper :) For some reason I considered Dhruv to ave never left. So forgive me on that slip up :)

I will not end it soon, i mean take it to a place where it deserves to go.

I loved how u said u r biased towards me :) n i forced you to read about Dhrulya. but I would ike to use this special priviledge i have and take you to a world that more humane and forgiving. Everyone can call a villain villain, let me try making a hero out of a villain.and i hope i justify my words and not just leave them as tall talks :)
I love you girl. keep commenting. n yes, keep studying.

@candlewick: ch93 - You have ur manan today :) but u sud brace uself because going forward, there will be a lot of updates about all the other characters and i hope u start liking them too :)

Author note - hey coming to the 'Fault of our stars', have u read silence speaks? I hope u have, if u havent, read it. i m sure u will like it as well.
yes this story has layers and layers and I am having a hard time mainting all the layers, but i hope by the end i donot leave any lose ends. nd please dont say thank you. thank all of u for supporting me every single day :)


@rekharv : ch93 - Thank you so much dear. Thank you very very much.

@manansamkhan: Author note on ch93 - yes, we human beings are complex in reality. we rae jealous, we are angry or scarred. Most of us are a sum total of our circumstances. BUt as a writer, at least i can script the journeys of a few characters and i better make it real and positive. Lets c what more is in store.

@monstermanik: Ch93 - yes she has been :) but hope she will see better times.

n last but not d least,i love u all, ,where ur name features here or not. I love u to bits :):)




Hai d luckily I am awake so got to read ur response& I think I am the first one to comment.heyy!!!!! I really like it when u address me affectionately like sweetheart. Thank u so much.
Di I didn't complain that u were late but I was concerned for u& I don't have any problem if ur update delayed for& I really don't know about ur exams.so di ur having exams every month.hmm it is really tough for u handle everything.so now ur exams are finished It is my turn for exams& I have my internal from this week & so I think I too have prepare for my exam.so diiu take rest now& I am leaving. Byyyeee. Keep smiling😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear hats off to you
I read 91 -94 updates in one go & it's mind blowing dear.Ek se badkar ek hai Sab.I truely wish yeh season 3 reality mein ho jaaye.Pls don't end this story soon.I wish it will never end.You are a fabulous writer dear.Way to go more dear.I hope ur story will be on screen soon. You brought us a clear pic regarding Aliya & Druv. And it was amazing.May Allah bless you dear.
Take care. Muaaah
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ciao...first of all...thanks for replying...I really like when there is an interaction...its breathes life in the comments...!
About silence speaks...yeah I've read it and it was really good...very touching plot with strong feminism at the end...the headstrong Nandini emerged...whom I enjoyed...!!..I honesty don't like open ended stories...where readers ate left free to ponder over unanswered questions...but actually that was the beauty of your ff...it ended soon...!..It wasn't a drag...And.. thanks for penning that down...

And yes...I've braced myself for all the ups and downs...twists and turns...!!

Lots of love from India...!!
Edited by Candlewick - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow amazing update. i am already eagerly waiting for the next update 😊

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