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...parth...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#401

Want to read next 3 or 4 parts tonight .

hopefully you will update soon😊

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Doyel

@--Doyel--

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#402

Hiii,

I didn't know that even"wowww" could be an understatement for anything... I mean do you even realize how beautifully you have expressed this update!!! Their pain, their need for each other.. Just fantabulous!! The love making scene tooo was amazingly penned!!

Waiting for the next chapter eagerly!!

Take care..

Love,
Doyel 😳

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thamannamanan1

@thamannamanan1

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#403

I wasn't sad for leaving Panchgani Manik..

I was sad because I was going to leave behind the Manik I had met in Panchgani.

That Manik was not angry, because he didn't have with him the experiences that make YOU bitter.

He was free like the air and he was warm, he didn't carry the burden of a tortured childhood or a neglected teenage.

He wasn't cross with the world and he could love without being afraid.

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👏

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vaanii078

@vaanii078

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Posted: 9 years ago

#404

Beautiful update dear .it was really an emotional episode. No matter what they will stand for each other.The way nandini gives confidence to manik and say his heart was angelic he was nothing but a simple pure soul.Liked the way she said she will never judge him .manik really need this support from his star she was his only home .Thank u so much for this update .Take care and God bless u.

Edited by vaanii078 - 9 years ago

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Rebecca Valentine

@RebeccaValentin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: 1_drop_of_rain
@rebeccasweety: Ok first and formost, thank you for this essaish comment.comments like these give me that scoring 100/100 wali feeling. Two platonic kisses to u for that.BTW I shared your last comment on wattpad :)and there were 22 comments on top of that.
You know what precisely my point that we should all feel happy about neel because every time that dumbass ends up doing something better and he himself keeps on falling lower and lower.
However, coming back to u. do ur exams seriously. Story , is not going anywhere. So you can read later as well.
And as far as PM is concerned, I used to send across PM after every update, but I have so less time, saving every minute counts. So i dont send pms anymore. Sorry.

aww! hw cute! 😳 hugs & kisses cumin ur way too!🤗 loads & loads fr our brilliant writer who keeps manan alive! 👏 I consider it an honor 2 c my cmnt bein shared by U😳 Tnq so much!! 😳

Yes u r ryt! Absolutely on point! ⭐️ Eva since d rain seq whr manik askd nandini if she luvs neel or not, I kinda feel glad dat, dat shitty jerk's char is present here!!😆 Yes he hurts manan babies a lot, bt afta dat, dey end up gettin stronger & closer.. ❤️

Dat seriously brot a smile 2 my face! Ive neva eva heard of a writer sayin tes wrds.. Speaks high volumes of ur char 🤗 I already knw u r sucha brilliant writer.. bt now Im sure dat u must b a vry carin frnd too.. ❤️

Dats completely ok.. Yes U must b runnin shrt of time & i can undrstand it. Writin sucha brilliant piece of wrk must consume lotsa ur personal time.. tnku fr dat.. 🤗

& Plzzz keep writin. Dont b upset abt less likes or cmnts. I know its kinda upsettin wen ur wrk dosnt get d recognition dat it deserves. I dont evn knw wot2 say. But trust me. WE ALL LUV U..😳

Edited by RebeccaSweety - 9 years ago

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Rebecca Valentine

@RebeccaValentin

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#406

I knw i say dis vry often. Infact I feel dis literally afta readin EVRY update!😆 bt trust me. Dis one is so far d best update eva! I had2 repeat evry para fr atleast 4 tyms b4 movin on 2 d odr.❤️ I ws like "shit" wen it got ovr.😛 Wish i can keep readin it 4va.😛 Evry line of it was so freakin beautiful.👏 U hav a way wid ur wrds. Trust me. 😳I ws so curious2 knw hw Manik wud react2 dis & wot wud hapn. Bt dis really made me surprised & emotional.☺️ U hav penned it so beautifully. Deir innermost emotions.. I neva expected smtn lyk dis2 hapn. D outburst, d pain, d backhug, d kiss & d jammin. Evrytn was so touchin 😳 Dis had so many WOW moments. D shower scene (esp d "DIE" reply frm nandini❤️). Esp wen he askd her if dat jerk had touched her, I went "aww".. hez broken bt stl hez so concerned4 her. nly our Manik cud do such things.. ❤️ fr d 1st time I saw Manik refusin jammin😆 bt his reasons wer agn so touchin. It showed dat his luv4 her is much mre than his attractn fr her.. ❤️ & nandini's rply2 him tellin him its k if he vents it out.. aww! who wont fall in luv wid sucha carin girl?? 😳 & then d intense healing jammin. I guess more than d show's one & d panchgani one, dis one jus stole my hrt. Not jus Manan themselves, evn I'd rembr dis jammin weneva I tink abt manan.. 😳 In short, so MANYYY WOW moments in dis update!! 😳 LUV YOU FOR THIS!! hugs! 😳😳

& now Im wonderin wot dat jerk is gonna do. & hw Manik is gona deal wid dat shit & Nyonika. D story is gettin more interesting wid evry update! Im thoroughly luvin it..

I started wid ur FF. Urs s my 1st one eva! Then i tried anodr SS & FF which r stl ongoing. Bt trust me. U r d NLY writer who updates regularly. U dont make us w8 fr too long unless U hav compellin reasons & dats d best part abt U. I knw I dont hav2 worry abt U disappearin fr long & dat gives me a feel gud mood.. Tnks agn fr dat! Tons of hugs!

( I knw i dont hav2 say dis, but jus so I'd feel betr. update soon😛 )

Edited by RebeccaSweety - 9 years ago

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monstermanik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#407

mananlacious update...
loved it to moon n back...

their patch up was sooo sooo beautifully penned down...
d words were absolutely heart touching...

both r ready to absorb d pain of d other n both of them dnt wanna hurt d other in dat...

i just loved it whn manik said he dnt wanna end up hurting her n how beautifully she asked him to let his pain n anger out...
i went all awww reading it...

d manik in panchagani description...awesome...

nandini knew way to his heart n she once agn healed him n brought him out of d guilt...

this was best n my fav update so far...

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ac2000

@ac2000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#408

Manik was in so much pain yet scared to accept Nandini's love coz he was afraid his anger might ruin their 'jammimg' 😳 . But Nandini didn't let him be miserable 😊. Manan healed each other 😃☺️. The update was heart touching to say the least 👏. Yet reading it, one can hope everything will be alright for Manan now ☺️. Will it be so? Update soon. Take care. ❤️

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manju-ujnam

@manju-ujnam

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#409

Hi!

Usually I like your stories and I follow them regularly. They will be awesome. You know that too 😉

But this particular update is way more than awesome. The way you made Manik - Hulk, and Nandini - Baby. The way you described their relation of healing each other is marvellous . This particular update is like a poem, as if it smoothly flows tagging their feelings along. if you had made this as an OS also then it will be a huge hit.

continue your work. I may write or not. From now on, I will try to comment on your posts. Hope so.

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Jenny1011

@Jenny1011

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#410

Hi dear...

And i am really really sorry...i knw you must be mad at me...but kya karu yaar...these exams...just abhi khatam huye aur next month phir se hai...

Anyways coming to the updates...

Just read the last 4-5 updates and...

Samjh hi nahi aa raha ke kya likhu...

U left me speechless girl...i mean it was...sooo...intense...

It was so damn touching...and yeah you made me cry...like literally cry...

The way manik was so excited to read her diary and how it became his worst nightmare...it was...ughhh...not getting the perfect word to describe it...

The way nandini was trying to bring him back...stopping him from going and using that authorative tone on him...

Ugghhh...what do i say man...i am not getting how do i explain what i felt...the way manik got shattered...how he didn't want to spoil their jamming bcoz he was afraid of his anger...and every emotion that manik and nandini felt...

The way manik asked nandini how can a mother be like that...but what could the poor soul say when she toh didn't have one only...

I swear man i would love being manik and nandini's partner in crime in planning the murder of this neel dixit...but not only him..i would have definitely planned to kill nyonica too...

Loved the scene when nandini was crying inside the washroom and manik was crying pressing his face to the door...

Manik was mad bcoz nandini didnt tell him anything but vo karti bhi kya...but even manik's anger is justified...

But finally after what felt like an eternity they were at home...<3

Kahan se laati ho aise ideas?.??.??.??. And aisi lines?????

I must say u r an amazing writer...the way u describe everything,every scene,every emotion is just commendable...

The choice of words u make...the lines u write...the magic u create within the story...

I have really become ur fan man...

Haan i agree ke yeh fan reply karne mein kabhi kabhi(most of the times) thoda late(bohot late) ho jaata hai...but fan toh fan hota hai naa...XD XD XD

hahahhahahha i knw i write real bad shit...thanks for coping up with it tho...will keep irritating u with these...

Love u and ur story...