#9MaNan FF: Dheere Dheere Chapter 40/Pg118/28th-January-17 - Page 67

Manan r always best ..
Twinkle Is going through so much
Continue soon

Oh God. that was so much in the update ... Hush ... But finally update is here missed it so much.. Thankuu for this.. Ahhh Jack is in love wid Twinkle. shit... But alas.. she said they can't be together. Jack is shattered .. Oh jack ko fever h .. nandu n manik are so worried ... Oh God..Poor jack.. Muktii really treat him as her brother .. She was so furious on twinkle.. Ahhh Twinkle. I feel bad for her.. This Vikram. he is a bloddy jerk.. I hate him.. twinkle loves jack.. ohhh .. koi help kro yr un dono ki.. Ye vikaram kitna ganda h.. huh... That was very Tough moment. Twinkle was crying so much. n vikram. he is disgusting ... All are so worried for Twinkle n jack. But aisa bhi kya reason h ki twinkle ye sb bear kr h.. M so eager to know. Hahaha.. Nandini is damm cutiepy. She just managed to smile everyone. her antics na so adorable. aww so sweet na... Bas manik ko dard me nhi dekh skti.. They both really can do anything for each other k pain k liye.. So Lovely. . Only abeer n nandu can make Jack smile. aww that scene was so adorable na. ahhh so sweet.. jack has gyaa.. Vikram n twinkle I here. That jerk na. Jack can't handle that much... Ohhh poor twinkle. ..I feel ao bad... Jinkle ka scene ohh so emotional. so pure scene na.. how Carefully she said hug her. hold her.. protect her. ahh. loved it really .. Vikram.. arghhh.. mujhe bhot gussa aa raha h us pe. I just want vikram ko accha sabak mile... But seriously u write so well. aisa lgta h jaise hi real.me jo rha ho. Thanks for it . Will wait for next update. Till then Cyaa. U enjoy ... Stay Blessed. Keep Smiling

what an update reallly its mix emotional update hasu rou kuch nhi smjh aara ...

starting with jankle scene they kiss !! kuch had tak ye keh skte aag dono taraf barabar lagi h coz twinkle also kiss jack but aftr that slap ... oh shit unse mana krdiya jack is so hurt ...

mukti loves her brother vo uski reaction me dikhayi diya ... but sb bohot tens hai jacks k liye

vikram ra**d twinkle aur vo bhi 1years se this is bomb ...

when everyone comes to knw abt twinkle story tears ki nadiya bahegi for sure ...

nandu the tantrum queen ( Mawara mera ye manana hai ke tumhe nandu ko tantrum queen likhane me bohot majjja aata hai coz hme vo padhaneme bohooot mjjja aata hai bichara manik but lv them both )


disparate to knw twinkle story why she accepted vikram torture ... why why why ???


& jacks reaction aftr story ... pliz cm back soon

Mindblowing update...

Jinkle kissed each other but jack got slap...omg ...so much confusion...

Jack is so much hurt...manan is worried for jack...

Vikram is such a jerk...feel like to give punch on his face...

Manik n twinkle scene was too gud...he was consoling her...love their bonding...

Nandini is too cute...manan tom n jerry during breakfast...lovely...

Abeer n nandini asking chocolate from jack that scene is too gud...

Feeling sad for jack...he came to knw abt vikram...

Twinkle's words for heart wrenching...

Twinkle pov was gud...

Hope jack n all save twinkle for that jerk...

Loved d update...

Awesomee mindblowing update...
Poor twinkle n jack yaar unke love story mai ketne problems hai yaar...
Poor twinkle vo ketne bad phase se gujar rahe hai aur uske sath koi hai bhi nahi vo vikram ketna kamina insaan hai he says she is his finance bt he treats her like her trash her he forced her raped her misbehaved with her she loves jack bt bcoz of vikram she cant do anything...
Jab manik ne twinkle ko uss halat mai dekh liya vo bhot shock aur hurt ho gaya aur usse vikram ko marne ka maan kar raha tha par jab usse sab sach pata chal jayega to pata nahi vo vikram ke sath kya karega...
Jack ko sach pata chal gaya pata vo kese react karega hope still he sticks by her side n dont leave her...

hey maw pie..

thank u for showing us the reality kitno ke saath aisa hota hai...awsome update loved each n every part of it...thank u

It's an amazing update. I loved it. And vikraam I hate him.
I can't believe it that in Manan ff I can enjoy the story of another couple instead of Manan. But credit goes to u. It was hell intresting update. I'm loving twinkle and back I mean jack's love story.
Superb cute actions of nandni baby were cherry on cack.

Sorry u were so disappointed with the response :-( today i ll tell you one thing mawara u are the inspiration of so many people to write stories on forum. I love from core. I liked today's update, genuinely it was good manan daily nok jhok...and last one was so good jinkle 😛 god how they will save the naive girl