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Posted: 9 years ago
its so so steamy promo...promo aisa hai to update kaisa hoga...wow soch kar hi my cheeks are turning into red...😳
manan in ballroom party...
manan in swimming pool...
and crystal dera its honeymoon update so i know there is steamy and hot romance so no need to feel like this ...u write wht u think is correct and as far as limits u said then its completely fine coz i know u never go over board...so don't worry write bindaas...
waiting for update eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oooh I love this promo!!!
Can't wait for the update already!!
It's a full on romantic and hot promo!!!
Hayeee ballroom party will be fun!!
Oh and swimming m, this will be hot!
Pani mein aag!!;)
Awww Manik sleepy at the begining, but still romancing!
Such cuties!
Impatient for the next part!!!
Continue soon!!!:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsum promo waiting for the bold and hot update
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Hi dear..

After a long gap I am back in forum...
Got stucked in vid some personal commitments..
Islye regularly Koyi bhi stories follow nhi kr payi...
abhi meine shuru kiye saari stories phir se resume krne ki...
Firstly extremely sry dear from bottom of ma heart 4 not able 2 omment 4 last few prts of ur any of d stories... As a reader I am feeling vry much guilty on dat..
Bcz u r sending pms properly everytime for each updates...
Thnk so much dear 4 d pms u send dear...
Abhi abhi dekha aapki thankyou note...thnks 4 mentioning me also dear...
Its seriously a great thing 4 me...U considered me as a good reader of urs...
Really hpy dear..Feeling vry grateful...

Cuming 2 ur stories...all 3 are awesum...For me also dis stry of urs s vr much dearest..
I Came 2 know abt ur dis stry accidently...But when starts reading it na, it bcme so fav 2 me...
Ur way of writing is alwys commendable...Upar se har baar long updates...
Above dat aap har baar updtes ke baad readrs ke opinion suggesstions mangtehe...
Seriously awesum dear...U r suprb...👏
About d stry, Wt 2 say?? aftr reading ur stry na really wish dat i could also get a partner like manik
May b manik jaise log yeh real wrld mein bhi hoga shayad...
Ur each n evry updtes alwys justifies d title of d stry...
LIFE PARTNER BY DESTINY... Few simple wrds vid great meaning...suprb yaar...👏👏
Whie seeing ur thankyou note, I cnt able 2 ctrl myself 2 say few wrdz...
Dats y aise bakvas kr rhi he...😆😆 Might b u are feelin bore...😃😃😃
Jitna spl apke lye yeh stry ho utnabhi spl hhumein bhi he yeh stry...
Maniks character s fabulous...U changed d monster manik's image to a perfect life partner...
U r seriously mindblowing dear...Thnks dear 4 dis awesum stry n a wndrful reading experience...
I wish dis stry wil cross so many more uppdates...



den cuming 2 latest promo...it ws hot...
Kya promo di yaar??? Hotness overloaded...Lagtha he bhut zyada romantic honewala he...
steamy manan romance on d way...seriously waitin 4 dat dear..
Since its their honeymoon thoda boldness to chaltha he...
Phir bhi whatever u feel right n comfortable just express dat dear...
V r sure u will never go over board... 'u had alwys maintained dat line of boundary btw vulgarity n romance...So b cool dear...Just go for wt u feel right...
Do update soon dear...Waitin 4 d sizzling hot steamy romantic update...😆😆😆



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Amazing promo
Loved it
Update soon
Waiting
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Interesting promo yaar..
And of course green signal dear...
No limits and all...
Continue soon..
Waiting for the next part..
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Part 53

It was almost morning when they arrived back at their hotel in Zurich, Switzerland. Both were exhausted due to the traveling and shopping and the eventful day. They just collapsed after they came back.
Next day as their energy was drained so they spend the whole day just eating and relaxing and roaming around in the hotel they were staying in. It was a grand hotel and lots of things to see in it. A private movie theater with movies of all languages.

They watched an Indian movie Dilwaale Dulhaniya Le Jaayenge (DDLJ) on Nandini's insist. This movie was very famous in Switzerland as its most part was shot in Zurich. And Manik was surprised on how Nandini was enjoying like a teenage girl watching the movie. Manik also gave Nandini a break from his constant bothering and all guchi poo things. Because he didn't want to make her exhausted again with his extreme love makings, as he knows that Nandini will never say no to him. They enjoyed the rest of the day like a normal couple spending time with each other.

Next morning , Nandini's sleep was disturbed by the constant buzzing of Manik's phone. She opened her eyes to see that Manik is in deep sleep with his full body covering the small figure of hers. His left leg is on her waist with a secure grip and his left hand is on her chest holding her tight. And his face is dug in the deep crook of her neck. Her irritation is gone watching his half face and smile took over her lips. But she couldn't move herself so she freed her right hand with difficulty and reached the night stand to grab the phone.

"Hello..." She whispered in a sleepy voice.
"Good morning lovebirds... This is Mona..." On the other side.
"Good morning Mona... How are you..." She was very tired to have a long discussion.
"I'm so sorry to disturb you both... But Nandini can you please put the phone on speaker I have to talk to both of you... " she asked.
"He is sleeping Mona..." She said but Manik moved and shook her to do so in his half sleep as he can hear the conversation.
She puts the phone on speaker.
"It's on speaker Mona..." She said.
"Hi Manik... Good morning... I'm so so sorry to disturb you lovebirds.. But it was important.. Actually today is my Pops birthday and you both are invited... It's a ballroom party in your hotel itself, tonight at 8pm... You have to come.." She said all in one go.
"Oh... Congrats Mona for your fathers birthday..." Nandini said smiling. She patted Manik's shoulder to say something.
"Yea Mona..." He peaked out of her neck and said.
"We will definitely come... But is there any dress code..." He asked in a very heavy voice which sounds like he was still sleepy.

"Yes yes... Tuxedos for men and gowns for women..." She said.
"Ok... We will see you than..." He wanted to cut the call but Mona interfered again.
"Manik listen... Nandini do you have gowns or you want me to arrange it for you... " she asked.
Nandini looked at Manik his eyes were still closed and his nose is rubbing her cheeks.
"Nandini do you have any gowns.. " he asked in the same position.
She nodded her head in a no. He said to tell her with his actions.

"No Mona... I don't have any gowns for now..." Nandini answered.
"Oh ok... No froblemo... Whenever you are free after breakfast... You can give me a call till than I will arrange few gowns for you... I'm here in your hotel today... Ok..." She said.
"Thanks Mona... I will for sure call you... In a couple of hours..." Nandini replied.
After hanging up she turned to Manik.

"Uthiye na... Look Kitna time ho Gaya hai already... And we have to go get ready and meet her also..." She tried to push him off of her but,
He is not in a mood at all.
He tighten his hold on her and gave a bite on her neck. She hissed by that. He smirked and kissed on the same spot.
"Yeh aap Kya kar rahe ho... " she said shyly.
"Apni biwi se romance kar raha hoon... Aapko koi aiteraaz hai..." He said very softly giving light kisses on her neck on her cheek and her jaw.
"Romance bhi kar Lena pehle uthiye... I'm hungry... Let's eat naa..." She said like a little girl.

He got up with the support of his elbow and staring at her face. It was glowing with his immense love and also due to her innocence.
He removed her hair from her shoulder and checked all over her shoulders and everywhere around.
"What are you searching for..." Nandini was surprised by his sudden change.
"Just checking..." He bend down and checked everywhere.
"What..." She asked.
"If there is any marks of my extreme love... You know... What if you wear a gown and the marks will reveal everything..." Manik was busy seeing marks.
Nandini's cheeks turned red due to the blush.

"Yaar there are still so many marks on your neck... And here on your shoulders... Ab Tum gown kaise pehnogi..." He asked getting worried. Nandini lips spread wide with a huge smile. She pulled his cheeks..
"My dear pati dev.. You are so cute.. I will cover it with make up.. So don't worry..." She assured him.
"Are you sure.." He asked.
"Um hmm..." She was still smiling.
"Hans kyun rahi ho... Agar kisi ne dekha Tou Kya sonchega... Ki ki dekho..." But he was stopped by Nandini's lips on him.. She closed his mouth by pressing her lips on his.
He was taken aback by her move but he liked it.
After kissing her she pulled herself blushing like a cherry.

"Mrs Malhotra.. Don't you think.. You are getting bolder day by day..." She blushed deep red again by his comment.
"It's not that I'm not complaining... I Tou like it... Aise sudden attacks... You know.." He tickles her.
She giggled.
"No please... No tickling.. Not this early... Please.." She said giggling.
He stopped. And moved aside.
"Ok Tum fresh ho jaao... Then we will go down for brunch and then we will meet Mona... Ok..." He said and gave way to her. When she was getting up he pulled her and she landed on his chest.

"Ab Kya hua.." She asked with a frown on her face.
"You know what.. I have a better idea..." He said cheerfully.
She lift her eyebrows.
"How about if we get freshen up together.. Time bhi bach jaayega.." He said excitingly.
"Pakka na time bach jaayega... Aap koi sharaarat tou nahi karenge naa..." She wanted to makes sure.. Coz she knows how her husband is. He will not leave any chance to get cozy with her.

"Main Aur sharaarat karta hoon.. Main tou itna shareef hoon... Main tou tumhe kabhi bother nahi karta..." He said so seriously that She laughed in his kiddish behavior.
"Ok theek hai.. Phir chahiye... " she gave up on his cute face.
He pulled his elbows with a victory.
"Yesss..." He mouthed and she heard him. But didn't say anything.

In the huge bathroom of their suite started a teasing session. Manik didn't spare a single second to leave her body. He applied the soap on her and massaged her body from the front and the back and he also makes Nandini puts the soap on him.
She very shyly blushing to the glory applied the body wash using the washcloth.

But he wanted to feel her hands on him so he took the washcloth and make her use her hands rubbing all over him. After giving a bath to each other for a good full hour kissing and making out in the washroom itself they came out.

Nandini was shocked seeing the time and started blabbering drying her hair.
"I told you.. We will be late.. See itna time ho Gaya... We have to eat and then go and meet Mona to select the clothes.. Than get ready for the party... And aapne kaha ki aap koi sharaarat nahi karenge..." He pulled her sliding his hands on her waist from the back.
"Kya karun.. Meri koi Ghalati nahi hai you know... It's all your fault... Kisne.. Kaha tha tumhe ki itni cute bano.. That I just couldn't keep myself off of you... And before going in the washroom who told you to be so bold and all Haan... Phir main apne Aapko control kaise kar sakta hoon..." He said resting his chin on her shoulder.
She smiled at his cuteness and turned around in his hold and framed her hands around his neck tip toeing her feet.
"I love you... And I love you so much... And thank you...For showering your immense love on me and making me feel special... " she pecked his nose.
"Jaan meri... Agar aise cute harkatein karogi tou... Don't blame me for losing myself again.. Ok.." He said kissing her cheek.
She smiled again and started getting ready.

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They have their brunch in their hotel and met Mona in the ball rooms dressing room. She arranged so many gowns from which Nandini's has to choose. But the thing was all the gowns were revealing, deep neck , open back, off shoulders, deep cuts from either sides of the knees. Manik knew that Nandini will not feel comfortable in these gowns so he left on her to choose without forcing her or pressurizing her for anything.
Nandini checked all of them but couldn't decide which one to choose.
"Why are you so quiet... You tell me na which one should I were..." She at last asked him his opinion.
"Sweetheart it's totally your choice... Tum jis mein bhi comfortable ho... You can choose that..." He said leaving up to her.
She came near him and whispered going to his ear.
"Don't you think all this are revealing... " she said and before Manik could say anything a boy came with another rack of gowns at the same time.
" guys these were some more here... Try this on too..." Mona said.
They both turned to check. And othe of their gaze stands on the first gown right in front of the rack.
"This one..." Both said in unison.
Mona laughed.
"Wow... You both selected the same thing... And good choice... Nandini you can try and check if it fits you... Or else my tailor can stick it for you accordingly..." She said.
"Mona that's so sweet of you for taking care of my dress... Otherwise it would have been very difficult to arrange a perfect gown in such short notice..." Nandini thanked her.
"I told you already Nandini...no froblemo... You are in my country... And you are the guest here... It's my responsibility to take care of your needs... So chill..." She assured her.
Nandini took the gown for trial and Manik wrapped up the payment inspite of Mona's insistence he paid for the gown , though she make a lot of concessions. Mona also helped them in choosing the matching accessories with that. And she hired a makeup artist to do her makeup later for the party.

In the evening Manik was all ready and came down to check where the party was so that they can go straight to the hall after Nandini got ready. After half an hour he went back to his room to check if she is ready or not.
The makeup artist was coming out of their room when he reached their.
"Is she ready... " he asked her.
"Yes sir... She is ready.." And she left.

Nandini's dress necklace set with earrings


Heels


Bracelet


Watch

(The white one)

Manik enters the room and closed it behind him. As soon as he turned he was stunned to see the beauty standing in front of him. She is the same Nandini, his wife, his LIFE PARTNER, but in a totally different look. She was looking like a Goddess of beauty in a simple yet elegant gown with two tones black and blue covering all her curves in the perfect ways.
It was the same gown that both of them selected with Mona, with a strap on one shoulder that was revealing her milky body from the top but still looks decent. He didn't thought at that time that she will look breathtakingly beautiful when she will wear it.
She was looking one of the gorgeous girl in this whole world.

She was standing their bending her head down with her hair tied up in a decent bun. The matching earrings and her bracelet was complimenting her beauty more.
She was so shy standing like that feeling his intense gaze on her that she couldn't move an inch from their.
She didn't even look and see what he was wearing.
He took slow steps towards her until he was very near to her. He lift her chum with his index finger.
"Wow..." He could just utter a simple wow.
She looked up to meet his desire full gaze on herself. He hold her by her shoulders. Her heels are making him easier to even out the height level between them today.

His eyes bored into hers as if he's trying to peel her right there with his intense gaze.

"Gawd... I love you Nandini... To the core... More than you imagine..."
She smiled shyly feeling his immense love through his eyes.

His fingers tighten on her arms and moved closer. So that their bodies were touching. His hands moved up to her shoulders , then grazed over her neck making their ways to her face , which he held gently and tilted her head slightly.

He bend his lips lowered to hers , and pressed it softly. The kiss was so soft and feathery as gentle as the evening breeze. Manik tilted her head a little more and took her lips for a deeper kiss. Nandini felt herself falling, feeling no strength in her knees. Her hands ran traveled from his shoulder to his neck and pulled him closer. He slid his tongue inside her and his tongue stroked hers longingly and she moaned in his mouth. After savoring her completely he pulled back when they were out of breath. He rested his head against hers for endless moments.

"I'm totally drowned in your beauty... How am I gonna stop myself through the evening..." He said softly by her forehead.
She blushed by his comment.
She lift her head and took a look at him.
"Aap meri itni taareef kar rahe hai... But did you look at yourself... You are looking equally handsome and gorgeous that I was thinking something..." She said.

Manik's suit


Rolex


He was wearing black tuxedo with a button down and a black bow tie. And to add more charm he was also wearing a Rolex watch on his left wrist. His hair was jelled up and combed to the side ways that is making him look more like a groom who is ready to get married now.

"What..." He asked.
"How am I gonna save you from all those young girls eyes who will be watching like a hawk at my charming man..." She said still keeping her hands on his neck.
He laughed whole heartedly listening to her comment.
"Why are you laughing... You know even I don't like it when girls look at you like that... I want my husband all for myself..." She whined like a little baby making a pouty face.
"To jaan meri... Yeh Banda pura ka pura aapka hi Tou hai... Without any doubt...hmmm..." He pecked her nose.
They have their cozy moment for a couple of more minutes.
"Ok now you fix your lipstick... And then we will go down.." He said.
She blushed and turn to adjust herself and fix her lipstick.
He stood by her side with offering his arm to her and asked
"Chalein..."
"Yes..." She replied smiling.

The hall


They came down and walked all the way to the ballroom. They entered the hall and was mesmerized by the grand and awe inspiring arrangements of it. It was a huge hall with high ceilings of 32ft tall and big chandelier that is hanging in the middle of the ceiling which was spreading the warm light through out the hall. A DJ was arranged in the corner and a small stage was setup with a screen to show the program that was going to happen. Though the hotel was renovated but the 18th century Victorian style touch up was still kept intact in this ballroom. Seating arrangements were also organized in the sides of the hall for the guest to rest and have their food and beverages.
The waiters were roaming in the hall offering drinks and appetizers. The corners of the halls were setup by different stations of food accordingly to the guests taste.

Manik and Nandini step forward hand in hand and searching for Mona or Girish as they are the only one who they know.
Manik felt a pat on his shoulder and turned.

Mona's dress


"Hey you guys welcome..." It was Mona, she was looking more beautiful in a black net gown with exposing more of her assets and a slid on her dress from her knee al the way to the bottom revealing her more than half a leg from her knee.
"Wow Nandini you are looking gorgeous... This color suits you a lot... And it's enhancing your beauty more..." She praises Nandini using so many good words.
Nandini felt shy.

"You are looking beautiful too Mona... " but Nandini felt a little sadness in her eyes, she looks a little upset. She was very excited for this party when she was showing her the gowns in the afternoon. But Nandini didn't asked anything.

"And Manik as usual... You are looking handsome as he*l.. " she winked at him. Nandini didn't liked it and tightened her hold on his arm, but she ignored.
Manik felt that.
"Where is Girish... " Manik asked.
"I don't know... And I don't want yo know..." Mona snapped all of a sudden, to which Manik and Nandini boggled.

"Why what happened... Did you guys fight..." Manik asked.
"No man... He just don't care about me... He says that I'm not giving him enough time... He don't understand that this party and it's arrangements was so important to me for my father... And I was busy in preparing it... I got busy... But him... He don't realize that how much I love both of these men... They are the only important people in my life..." Mona started complaining and her eyes got moist.
Nandini left Manik's arm and came forward and hugged her and rubbed her back.
"Where is he..." Manik asked.
Mona just shrugged her shoulders not knowing.

After few minutes. She calmed down. And separate herself.
"Thanks Nandini... I'm sorry guys... I involved you with my upsetting story... I'm sorry..." Mona said.
"It's alright Mona... This is what friends are for..." Nandini would her tears.

"What's going on here people..." An old man in his 70's came near them and asked.
He is a handsome old man with gray hair and a good graceful personality wearing a vey high quality grey Armani suit was standing beside them.

"Mona baby... Are you ok..." He asked.
"Yes Pops... Everything is fine... Here let me introduce you to my friend and his wife...Manik Malhotra and Nandini Malhotra... I told you right , they here for their honeymoon..." Mona introduced them to him.
"And guys this handsome dude is my Pops..." She said giving a kiss on his cheek.
Manik and Nandini shook hands with him and wished him a very happy birthday and also thanked him for inviting him.


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Mona's father left them after few minutes and told them to enjoy the party. Mona was still upset she excuses herself by saying that she will go and give a touch up to her makeup.
When she left Nandini came and grabbed Manik's arm again.
"Suniye... I think we should do something for Mona... She looks so upset..." She said getting concerned.
Manik was astound by her wife's cuteness and concerning nature. One second she gets jealous of that same girl and the other second she's ready to help her because she is upset.
He unknowingly pecked her forehead and smiled.
"What happened... Why are you smiling..." She asked.
"Nothing... So tell me how should we help her... What should we do..." He asked.
"Let's talk to her husband... And sort their differences..." She said.
"Hmmm... I have a better idea... Let's go and find him first..." He said looking around.

They found Girish on the bar counter having his drink. Manik and Nandini reached him and said hi and hello.
Girish also looks very upset and accepted that he is at fault and he want to mend things with Mona as he loves her a lot.
Manik and Nandini exchanged their looks and decides what needs to be done.

The cake was cut and all the guest were busy eating , and chitchatting , some of them were dancing.
Manik went to DJ and gave him his I pod and asked him to play it in five minutes. He went back and brought Girish on the dance floor and asked Nandini to bring Mona with her.
They were all on the dance floor. Mona looked at Girish and turned away with a mad face. Girish bend his face down by her behavior. Manik showed thumbs up to the DJ from afar and the music started.
Manik stand behind Girish and Nandini stood behind Mona. Manik made Girish move with him holding his shoulders but in a dancing way making him bend down on left and right. And Nandini make Mona move forward in the same way and Manik started singing making actions with Girish hands.

Heyyy Heyyy
Heyyy Heyyy

Tumhe pata to hoga
Tumhi pe main Fida hoon
Tumhe hai jabse chaha
Hawaaon mein udhta hoon
Tumhi mere har pal mein
Tum aaj mein Tum kal mein.
Hey shona hey Shona (2)

Mona didn't understand the words that much but smiled the way Manik is making Girish do the actions like a puppet.
And Nandini started to sing exactly like Manik did, making her move by motioning her arms from the back holding her elbows.

Tumhe pata tou hoga
Ke mere dil mein Kya hai
Chalo kahe deti hoon
Kabhi nahi jo kaha hai
Tumhi mere har pal mein
Tum aaj mein Tum kal mein
Hey Shona hey Shona (2)

Both Manik and Nandini bring them close together and make them hold their hands in a dancing position. Girish can understand what they were singing so he kept her hands on Mona's waist and pulled her to him and kissed her cheek. Mona was still not smiling.
Every one claps on their gesture.

Manik asked Nandini's hand for a dance and she slipped her hand in his.

Tum jo ghussa bhi Karo tou pyaar lagta hai jaane kyun

Manik elbowed Girish and signaled at Mona

Main tou jo bhi kahun Tumhe iqraar lagta hai jaane kyun.

And Nandini elbowed Mona and make her look at Girish

Chodo bhi yeh Ada Paas aake zaraa
Baat dil ki koi kendo naa.
Hey Shona hey Shona.(2)
Manik gestured to Mona to forgive him by holding Girish hands together in a sorry.
Mona smiled and hugged her husband.
Mona's dad gave a wide smile at this and applauded for his daughter as he loves her a lot and his happiness is everything to him.
He came near Manik and Nandini and patted their back to say thanks to them. Even though he didn't understand what they were singing but he knew this much that they patch up their daughter with her husband.
Nandini continued singing.

Saari duniya ko chodke chaha hai Ek Tumhe

Manik also continued looking into Nandini's eyes.

Maine zindagi se maanga hai tou manga hai sirf Tumhe
Nandini encircled her arms around his neck and sang.

Ab isi chah mein ab isi raah mein
Zindagi bhar mere Tum ho naa
Hey Shona hey Shona (2)

Manik framed her waist with his hands.

Tumhe pata to hoga
Tumhi pe main Fida hoon
Tumhe hai kabse chaha
Hawaaon mein udhta hoon

Nandini rubbed her nose with his

Tumhi mere har pal mein
Tum aaj mein Tum kal mein.

Both of them sang together

Hey Shona hey Shona
Hey Shona hey Shona

There was a big round of applause for Manik and Nandini for their effort to of what they have done. Most of the guest knows Mona and Girish. They also knows that they love each other a lot so they felt very happy seeing the scenario.

When they were done Mona and Girish came to them and hugged them both.
"Thank you so much guys... You did such a huge favor on us... I'm really thankful to you both..." Mona said.
"Me too... Yaar you guys were so good and the song you choose perfectly fits at this situation..." Girish said.

"By the way.. What was the meaning of that song... I know it has something to do with Girish apologizing me right..." Mona asked rubbing her chin.
All of them laughed at her.
"Well Mona... It's kind of that... And also...it says that you both are equally involved in the mistake and both are saying how important you are for each other so let's forget everything and be back like before..." Nandini explained her. And Manik Mona and Girish were impressed with her choice of words.
"So yaar Girish I think you should say sorry to her..." Manik said.
"I know.. I'm really sorry baby... I overreacted a little... I should understand that your Pops need you too... I'm so sorry..." He hugged her.
"Even I'm sorry baby... I should balance my time in between you too... Important Men of my life..." Mona said.
And Manik side hugged Nandini watching them back together again.

Both Nandini and Manik have a lots of fun in the party, excusing themselves at around around midnight they left for their room.

"Nandini... Are you tired... Do you want to go to sleep..." Manik asked after changing into her sleeping tracks and vest.
"No... Not really but my feet at bothering a little because of these high heels..." She said sitting on the couch rubbing it. She changed into a full length negligee with spaghetti strap.
"So ek Kaam karte hai... Let's go for swimming... Raat mein swimming Karne ka maza hi Kuch Aur hai... And your feet also feels relaxed...," He said excitedly.
"But itni thand mein..." She asked innocently.
Manik always get amused by her innocent answers.
"Honeybun... We have our own private pool with warm water... No worries..." He came and sat beside her on the couch.

When she didn't say anything else he got up and searched for his swim shorts. Nandini followed him to the closet. Finding it he started to change and took out his vest grab in a towel. Nandini covered her eyes. Manik smirked seeing her.
She moved her hands.
He was watching her antics by the corner of his eyes.

"But..."

"I can't swim.." She said watching him changing in his swim shorts.
He turned to look at her, but she felt shy as soon as he turned to face her. It's not that she is watching him bare chest for the first time ,but every time she sees him like this it creates a total havoc inside her. It turned her uninvited desires which she don't want to show him.
He is a complete Greek God with his sculpted body. He smirked mischievously.
He bend down and blow air on her face. She felt more embarrassed.

"Do you like what you see..." His sudden question startled her more.

There's no doubt in this world that she has a husband who is no less than a perfect model and she's very lucky to have him in her life.
In her heart she thanks a million times for having him in her life.
Seeing her quiet he shook her.
"Where are you lost... Honey what you are seeing is all yours, I'm all yours... From top to bottom... And also from here..." He puts a full palm on his heart.
"So stop staring me and come with me..." He Pecked her nose.
She pat his shoulder and smiled.

"Aap bhi naa... But how will I go... What if... " She blushed and replied.
"Don't worry sweetheart... Main hoon naa... Ok I'll carry you in the water... And it's only five feet pool as its the private one..." He clarified.
She thought something and said.
"Theek hai... You go ahead I will join you in a bit..." She bought some time from him to prepare herself to wear the swim suit. He turned to leave , but he stopped and came back.
"You know... There's a small gift for you kept in the changing room..." Before hearing her he kissed her cheek and ran from there.
In few seconds she heard the water splash from the pool.

She went in the changing room and saw the gift bag. She dug her hands and searched it to find only two pieces of clothes. She didn't understand first but she took it out and hanged it in front of her eyes.
What she saw makes her embarrassed and her cheeks turned into a deep color from blushing.

Swimsuit


It's dark red color two piece swim suit. The top has a string which goes around the neck and the back, and a small piece of bottom.
"Aiyyoo Aiyyappa... Yeh main kaise pehnogi... " she said to herself.
Her eyes caught a piece of paper in red inside the gift bag. She took it out and checked there's a note written on it.

"SWEETHEART, I KNOW THIS A LITTLE, (A LOT) BOLD WEAR,
AND I KNOW YOU ARE NOT COMFORTABLE IN WEARING SUCH CLOTHES.
I DON'T KNOW WHY I BROUGHT IT,
IF YOU ARE NOT COMFORTABLE PLEASE DONT WEAR IT,
THERE'S ANOTHER ONE IN THE DRAWER YOU CAN WEAR THAT.

She checked the drawers and see that there's another swimwear which is like a normal one piece swimsuit. She smiled and started thinking , but the color of deep red is not leaving her cheek.
She thought
"He brought this swimwear thinking something... Maybe he wanted to see me in this... If I don't wear it he will definitely not mind... Because he know that I'm not comfortable..." she sat on the bench that was there.

"But Nandini... Think about it... He is your husband... Your LIFE PARTNER... He has done so much for you... He can go to any extend to give you happiness... To bring smile on your face... He fulfill all your wishes without even you saying it out loud... And the most important thing is.. He loves you immensely.. Irrevocably... To the infinity... Can't you just make him happy for once... Can't you bring smile on his lips by this little gesture of yours... "

" maybe he brought it with a teeny weeny hope that you will wear it... So be brave and put it on... And no one is here... You are showing it only to him... Just for his happiness... And wear it happily not with a stressful mind..." Preparing herself she got up to change.

Fighting and winning with her thoughts she was finally ready wearing the two piece swimsuit.
She grabbed a red plain sheer dupatta from her closet and covered herself from top to bottom. It's not helping in covering her at all but to her satisfaction she just covered it.

Swimming pool


She came out in the open and dimmed the already dimmed lights.
Manik's attention was grabbed by the change of lights. He was in the pool , so he turned in the water and saw that Nandini was standing close to the pool her gaze down on her feet.
He was shocked first to see her in that swimwear, because firstly he didn't expected that she will wear it...secondly the dupatta is see through and he can clearly see what's underneath it. Her hair and her makeup was still the same from the party.

He stand in the pool and taking slow steps he was out of the pool and came near her very close.
By the shyness and somewhat the dress and his closeness is making her more conscious.
Lifting his hand he reached for her shoulder.

He saw her in more naked condition than this but now that she is very very shy and conscious about her appearance he was bold over again by her innocence.
Though they make love so many times till now and was aware of each other's every single detail of their body, but she was a shy person in general.

He touched her shoulder and she shivered by his touch like he is touching her for the first time.

He wrapped his arm around her shoulder and make her walk till the steps on the pool. He make her take the steps and went inside the pool with the dupatta with her.
When they reached the bottom step and the water was covering till their waist he hold the dupatta and pulled it slowly and took it away from her.
She covered her chest with her hands.
He smiled and slowly holding her wrist makes her opened her hands and hanged it down.
She was looking down.
He saw her exposed and heaving bosom by the heavy breath that she was taking. His heart started beating faster and his raging hormones were arousing to the peek.
He came closer and said.
"You look...h...hot... And se... Se*y..." He fumbled by her looks.
She felt more embarrassed and hugged him tight.

Her exposed front collided with his wet and bear muscular chest. He hugged her too and roamed his hands throughout her back. He make her take few more steps down and make her cradle on the water by lifting her in his arms.

She was calm because he was there with her.
He can see her body half covered half exposed in the water.
His heart wants to do so many things to her right now and his fingers were itching to grab his favorite piecesin front of her, but he controlled himself till she will feel more comfortable.
He didn't want her to ran away from the water feeling afraid of it.

He made her stand in the water on his feet and took her to the rim of the pool and make her sit on that.
"So how do you like it... Are you enjoying..." He asked standing very close to her.
"I'm really enjoying..." Her nervousness is almost gone.

He thought to being a little naughty with her. At first he adjust himself in between her knees and hold her tight by her waist.
"Sweetheart... Thank you so much for wearing this for me..." Pecked her forehead.
She blushed by his comment.
He went closer and asked.
"Hum itna sab Kuch kar chuke hai... But yum Abhi bhi itna sharmati ho..." He rubbed his nose with hers.
"That's something I can't change... I can't help it... Bas sharam aa jaati hai..." She said.
He laughed at her cuteness.

He pulled her close to him and took her off of the slab and brought her totally in the pool away from the rim. She hold his neck locking her hand behind. Their bare and wet bodies clamped to each other. The water level was close to her neck.

He puts his palms under her armpits and lift her up high so that she comes out of the water a little, and her face is closer to his.
"How are you feeling..." He asked her.
She smiled hesitantly with nervousness.
"Don't you trust me... I won't let you fall..." He said looking into her eyes.
"Now look at me and smile properly..." He said.

She gave a full fledged smile feeling herself secure in his arms.
"I have a better idea..." He whispered in her ears.
"You trust me right..." He asked
She nodded her head.
"Ok just let me do whatever I'm doing..."
He slowly leave her but only to hold her by her waist with his one hand and make her legs wrapped around her waist.

She understood what he's trying to do. She felt hot even in the water feeling his stiffness. Both of their bodies were creating fire in the water. He was controlling himself till she is adjusted in water.
"Sweetheart.. Just hold on to me with your legs around me... Ok.." His tone was so s*xy that she shivered.

She twirled her legs around his waist tight and laced her arms around his neck. Their bodies were skin to skin glued to each other.

Her body started reacting to his closeness. Once he makes sure that she was settled than started his teasing session.
His hands roamed around her back which was void of clothes as her b*a is tied with a strap on her back and around her neck. He cluched her back with his fingers tight nuzzling his face in the crook of her neck.
"I really like swimming with you..." He whispered with a warm voice coming to her lips and smashed his lips to hers for a passionate kiss.
After sucking the life out of her lips making it swollen , he rest his forehead to hers.
"You know I want to make love to you right here right now... " he said tracing his fingers on her face.
She gasped and looked up.
"Yahan... Aise..." She asked innocently.
"Kya karun... Tum itni hot lag rahi ho ki... I can't just keep my hands off of you... No matter where we are... " his tone was hoarse and seductive.

"And yeh hamara private pool hai.. There's not gonna be anyone here..." He whispered again.
Noticing her quiet he said again.
"ok... You know I have an idea..." He said.
" I'm not going to tell you...but..," saying that he moved with her to the back and made her back touch the wall of the pull.
"W.. What... Are you gonna do..." She fumbled seeing his proximity.
He pulled her out of the water and make her sit on the rim. A chill ran over her body suddenly coming out of the water.
Manik's eyes was full of desire by seeing her fully exposed body in the golden dim light of the surrounding. Her legs were still wrapped around his waist. He utilizes the opportunity and holding her face in his palms he kissed her hungrily taking her whole mouth inside hers.
He sucked and chewed her lips , entering her mouth he devoured each and every corner of her mouth.
Her body was responding to his closeness. His hands travel down to her cl****ge. He cupped her bossoms and pressed it with gentleness and make her moan in his mouth. Her hands were still in his hair and she fisted it.
He moved down trailing soft kisses all the way to her neck and then the front of her. She arched back to give him more access. He bend more down and sucked her sensitive part through her fabric and makes her take his name in the most se***st way.

"Manik..."

He encircled his palms around her br**st and moved the fabric aside to expose her. She couldn't take it anymore and first his hair harder , but he didn't care what she is doing and he took the mounds in his mouth to suck on it one by one. She let out a deep moan. His one hand travel down to her moistened area where she is ready to have her release. He moved her lingerie aside and without warning his one finger slid inside her core. She clamped her teeth biting her lower lip to suppress the scream.
He pulled himself a little away from her to Experience her expressions.

"I hope I'm not hurting you..." He said rubbing his other hand on her chest. She was not in a condition to say anything as the words are stuck in her throat. His finger is started moving in and out first slowly than hearing her moans its movement became vigorous.. He leaned forward and nipped her jaws and chin. He was afraid that his teeth were going to give her the bites like a vampire, but he licked it with his tongue to sooth her. Going to her mouth, he grabbed her mouth in a full mouth kiss.
Not able to take it anymore she digged her nails in his shoulder leaving deep marks on him. His finger did all the works till she shudders. Moving down again to the swell of her br**st he kissed her. Nandini screamed as soon as he left her mouth, with a low scream. Still it echoed throughout the pool area. Her breathing was coming in heavy gasps and ,Finally she couldn't stand more longer and he felt her release. He slowly took out his finger and calm her down.
He was watching her and enjoying her and he closed her mouth with his again.
She collapsed after her release into his arms resting her head on his shoulders. She can't feel her legs and he is still standing in the pool. He encircled his arms around her waist and hugged her.

"Did I hurt you... " he asked very softly.
"Uh uh.." She was totally gone with his new techniques of loving her. This was beyond her imagination and a new experience.

She never thought that she will ever be like this with him. This open , This exposed and this bold.
She shied with the given situation and hugged him tight with shyness. She didn't say anything. But Manik felt her uneasiness.
Staying in the same position he asked.
"Are you ok... "
"Sweety... Tell me something openly... Didn't you like it.."
She was shocked, how he knew what she was thinking.
After settling her breath she moved back cupping his face in her palms as they were on the same level.
She kissed his cheek one by one and said.
"Firstly you can never hurt me... Secondly... Who said that I didn't like it... Woh..." she blushed all of a sudden.
"I never... Imagined... In my life that I will be this comfortable with you in all these different styles... " she bend he head down.
"But I really enjoyed..." She said in a very slow voice the only he can hear.
"Hmmm..." He lift her chin.
"Maine Tou socha Ki... Maybe you didn't like the different ways of love making..." He pecked her nose.
"But.. Not bad not bad... MRS Nandini Manik Malhotra Ko mera andaaz pasand aaya..."
"Kaise nahi aayega..." She encircled her arms again around his neck.
"Mr Manik Malhotra hai hi itne dashing... Aur apni MRS se itna Pyaar jo karte hai..." She said and pecked his pointy nose in return.
And they laughed and the atmosphere turned light.

Adjusting her he came out of the pool and lift her in his arms and took her to the changing room they both went inside the small bathroom with a standing shower.
He opened the shower and washed her not letting her hair wet. He took off her swimsuit and make her wear the bath robe. He too put on his bath robe that was hanging on the hook.
They came out and walked straight to the bedroom. All the while they were quiet not saying anything to each other , just enjoying each other's company.

But it was enough for Manik. His patience level was done for today.
He stand there silently for a while looking at her with his deep and hypnotic gaze.
A gaze which is making her melt again. He opened the strap of the bath gown and pushed his hands inside her and hold on to her bare and naked waist. Pulling her closer he smashed his mouth on hers.

She was waiting for this moment as she knows since a long time he was controlling himself.

He wants to love her aggressively today. He wants to make her scream his name again with pleasure and anxiety, specially when he is inside her. She wants her to cry for her release again...
But he was still going slow as he knows that she is very fragile and she can handle him only to a limit. He didn't want to hurt her again.

But Nandini being his better half, can also figured it out what all was running in his mind by his hungry kiss.

She took control now and started dominating him by kissing him vigorously exploring his mouth. He felt happy and surprised by her move and he let her do what she's doing.
She pulled her holding his robe till the bed and pushed him on it. She claimed the bed on to him and was on top of him now. She pressed her lips to his and started kissing hi.

She kissed him, she pressed her lips hard to his and thrust her tongue deep inside his mouth and closed her eyes. The spikes of heat was soaring through her body at their contact.

Manik took charge after few minutes feeling her loosing herself. He took her robe off of her. He flipped the position with their lips still intact and moved completely over her.
His arousal pressing onto her center.
She detached him from the robe and throws it on the other side.

She roamed her hands at his back and before he doing anything she herself spread her legs slightly. She can feel his hard length ready to come.

He smirked on her move.
"I fall in love with you every day... Every night every minute and every second of my life sweetheart..." He whispered.
"And when you try to be this bold than... You know I'm knocked out... With your boldness..." She kissed his nose.
His lips found hers in a kiss so deep that they were both out of breath. He pulled away trailing small and hot kisses down till he found the puckered mound of her br**st. He palmed the other side while sucking the other one.
Them he trailed his kisses down her navel, and Nandini was on fire. She could feel again that she's gonna explode.
But Manik on the other hand is taking his own sweet time to explore her parts. His hand cupped her there again. And his fingers tried to go inside,but this time she hold his hand right there.
"No... Not now... I know... You will control... Again to give me pleasure... But... " she lift her head and leaning close to his ear she whispered very softly.
"I need you inside me... Like now..."
His lips spread wide with a huge smile.
"Your wish is my command.. Your highness..." And he kissed her passionately again.
He came in between her and spreading her thighs more he guided his length slowly inside her and gave a hard thrust.
"Maniiik..." She screamed his name aloud. And he was completely inside her.
He pushed himself deep and deep that his length can stuck the inner core of her.
He pulled himself and gave another push thrusting him deeper.
She clenched the sheets beneath her and screamed again. He enjoyed his name more from her mouth specially at that time.


Making her moan his name louder and louder his body came in a rhythmic form. Her eyes shed Silent tears from the sides. He bend down and sucked those tears and kissed her cheeks. And took her mouth for a deep passionate kiss till he wasn't his highest peak of exploding. Their bodies gave way to another unimaginable and pleasurable and a sensational ride which cannot be described in words.
His sweaty and moist being collapsed on her. She can hear his accelerated heartbeat on her chest. She wrapped her arms around him and kissed his shoulder and thanked on her destiny for giving her such a lovely and adorable husband.

She smiled. And gathers him in her small petite arms.
After his heartbeat relaxed he moved out and laid down beside her. Taking their night gowns which was already kept there by none other than Nandini. They wer again in each other's arms.
"I love you... Sweetness... I love you so much for bearing by harshness and my aggressiveness..." He kissed her head that was relaxing in his chest.
"I love you more... For everything..." She said and closed her eyes cuddling more closer to him.

And once again two beautiful souls who love each other immensely drifted into a deep slumber.

End of part 53

Holla people.
I'm back with another hot update of your favorite couple on honeymoon.

So tell me how do you like it.
And honestly letme know did I go overboard or was it fine.

I really want to know.
How was the steamy romance in the swimming pool.
And later in the bedroom.

Thank you so much sneha_glamourous for providing the pictures.
Sneha honey thank you so much.
For helping me a lot in selecting the gowns and matching accessories
I know I bothered you a lot by doing back to back Pms for the perfect pictures
Thanks a ton for that I really really appreciate it.

And thank you all for everything
For your comments using lovely words

Once again start commenting lamba lamba.
I'm waiting.

Take care and stay blessed
And always remember to keep smiling.

Love you all
Question
Do you guys want me to continue with the honeymoon or shall I finish it off.

Edited by Redcrystal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow...as promised here u are with update...

will read it tomorrow...
now going for sleep as it's 1am now...

though I'm very excited to read it ... but feeling little sleepy...
Edited by sneha_glamarous - 9 years ago

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