MaNan SS - A Dawn to remember [Chapter 2, Page 1, June 3]

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Chapter 1



Summer it is! Dawn is not there yet. But it is not entirely dark, the night is donned with the orange light of the street lamps. It is serene, but still there is the movement of vehicles though their frequency is low. Still horns can be heard, stating that I am not alone. On the beach road, here I am waiting for her with a thousands of thoughts and arguments playing in my head. I wanted to take this chance. She intrigued me to no end. I want to solve her mystery, but at what price I don't know.




Yes, I am attracted to her and I don't want to do anything about it. Can I propose her a relationship, just because I want to know about her, when I don't believe in one? This is the question bothering me all night. Yet, I am here to do the same on our crazy date. She is still to come. Weird as it seems, when I asked her out , she had asked me to choose a public place and the time should be 3:15 AM on any weekday! It didn't surprise me, she works for a BPO and her shift ends at 3 in the morning. So here I am waiting for her, Still an hour is there for her to come.



I had met her on various occasions but, I didn't had any proper conversation to cherish with her. I met her on the opening day of a discotheque D&D- Drink and Dance'. I am the one who inaugurated it and she is there as a customer.




"... Please join your hands and welcome our guest Mr. Manik Malhotra, CEO of Malhotra groups, to inaugurate our D&D- Drink and Dance' ".


Came the announcement. It is my cue to join them. As I entered the venue spotlight is on me and the path to the ribbon is lit along the edges directing me. I can see the crowd, quite enthusiastic indeed, to enter the disc. As I cut the ribbon , they cheered and started to pounce giving guards a hard time to control.



Among them, there is a girl in white just at the entrance who had leaned along the wall with folded hands and observing the crowd with a smile. Her posture is cute, was my thought at that time. I can't see her clearly. But, with a smile I did enter the disc. The organisers followed me to show the place around and I moved with them.



This disc belongs to my cousin, Dhruv Vedant, who is also my best buddy and classmate in my MBA. Unlike me, he does not want to join their family business, Health Care Group of hospitals situated across in various cities of India . He is shy, not confused, he has a clear cut opinion on people he is dealing with. He is one among our group of friends and we are close. He has another set of secret friends(That is all we know). He don't say a word about them and absolutely nothing comes above them, not even us. We sometimes tease him of having a secret girlfriend, but he will never react.




After showing me around the place, the organisers had seated me in the cabin above the dance floor and dispersed of course not before offering me pleasantries. The cabin is made of one way see through glass on 2 adjacent sides and the rest of them are of mahogany wood. I had stood in front of the glass and observing the crowd on the dance floor making moves accordingly for the peppy number played. And suddenly, I saw a flash of white jumping in the crowd. It's her again.





For past fifteen minutes or so, she is repeating the same step. First she will bend down and then suddenly she jumps up and tilts her head in the air making her hair to sway in the air. First I thought she doesn't know how to dance. After some time, she is signalling thumbs up to someone among the seating area. I followed her line of vision and found another girl with camera. Then I got that this girl in white is posing for a picture.



After another good fifteen minutes they started to pack up. I just don't want to let it go, until they leave my sight completely. So I had quickly changed my attire from formal to jeans and T-shirt with hood (provided by the organisers, so that I can easily get to exit without creating hassle among the crowd.) Luckily, I didn't miss them and absolutely nothing had prepared me for the scene happening in front of me.



An average built guy caught hold the hand of the girl in white. That was the first time I saw her face close, though her side profile. She is cute, with medium fair skin tone, chubby cheeks and long hair messed up with constant jumping. Still it didn't decrease her appeal. More than this attraction, she has a divine aura around her that is forcing me to dwell further. I thought of intervening but what he said next stunned me-




" Guys presenting here Nandini Anand oops sorry Nandini Murty. She is my wife. So Nandini, what does it tell about you being present in the club in the ungodly hours?"



WHAAAT Wife!' is the only word playing in a loop in my mind. As I watched Nandini (the girl in white) face for the confirmation of the fact, she is just composed and calm as nothing is affecting her. But the photographer girl is burning with rage. She is about to move to the guy, suddenly Nandini held her hand with her free hand. Just like that, the photographer girl had stopped with a smirk on her face.




" was.. It's, was my wife Nandini Anand, now Nandini Murty, my dear ex husband Shekar Anand. That 'Virgin' wife, despite of an year of marriage had applied for divorce against Shekar Anand. Do you want me to disclose the reason too... coz you may not enjoy it. If don't leave my hand this instant, then maybe I will... you know." stated Nandini with a rudely polite tone.



Again my mind is clouded with same question WHAAAT!! Is shekar...?Interrupting my thoughts a guy in shekar group voiced out my own confusion.




" Shekar..! Are you gay??"


Shekar instantly left her hand with disbelief written on his face and turned to his friend who questioned him-



"Abey! Don't tell me you believed this bb.." a slap sound resonated across indicating that, it indeed landed on Shekar by a guard.



Dhruv accompanied by two guards reached to the place. One guard slapped Shekar and then the other one restricted his movements by arresting his hands. He turned to Nandini and said -



" Madam we will take care of him, hereafter"



Meanwhile I had observed something- Nandini glared at the photographer girl. She made a puppy face and pleaded pointing Dhruv. Dhruv moved his eyeballs as in signalling no. Though I ridiculed it as my imagination, but the tiny part of my brain wants to believe that they know each other.




Nandini sighed and turned to the photographer girl and said

"Navya, Chalo chalte hain!"


with that Nandini dragged Navya out of the lane to the Honda city and they had zoomed off within no time.



Even though they left, I am still occupied in her thoughts. Usually when a person helps us then the basic thing we do is to thank them. Neither Nandini nor Navya did that to Dhruv!! Do they know each other? If so then why didn't they exchanged a single word? If Shekar is not gay then why did he leave Nandini? Whatever, I had an eventful day. All in all, Nandini is cute and I am fascinated with her chubby cheeks. I just want to bite them like I bite an apple.





Even after few days, she was constantly in my mind. I felt like an adrenaline rush teenager, when the power is cut in the mid of watching world cup final cricket with India Vs Pakistan. I can't help but to use profanity. But I had enjoyed this phase. After sometime I had forgotten about her until that day when I met Dhruv again in a meeting...





So here it is! My fiction with the characters my favourite show, Kaisi yeh yaariyaan. Do wish me 😊.




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Index

Chapter 1 (above)
Chapter 2(below)
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this is so damn interesting..
I loved the part..
amazing concept..
excited for the next...
update soon..
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Sounds very interesting story. Like Manik, I'm curious to know about Nandani 😃

Hope you continue soon without keeping us waiting.

Thanks for this lovely story.
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Chapter 2




After sometime I had forgotten about her until that day, when I met Dhruv again in a meeting....



I am a passive member of Health Care Hospitals. The chairperson of that chain of hospitals is my maternal uncle, Dhruv's father, Gourav Vedant and the CEO is his best friend Abhinav Saxena. Like Malhotras, Vedants and Saxenas are among the influential families in India. Not with just money, but with magnanimous power inherited from ages. These are among the unofficial banking families who can lend money to nation and make them agree to their terms in return. Law is defined by them and for them. But the credentials of each person of this family is kept as a high priority secret. There are many dirty secrets of them as a matter of fact.




On a particular wednesday morning I had received a call from Abhinav uncle stating that he wants me to attend the New Plant Approval Meeting' at 8 AM as he is on a family vacation in Bahamas and Gourav uncle had an unscheduled appointment.



"Manik, you are given the required authority to sit in the chair for this meeting with that lawyers. I would have asked Dhruv, but you know him, he asked me not to bother him. Background information is mailed to you."




As usual Abhinav uncle is speech is crisp without any greetings, but then we are used to it. Unlike my dad, he atleast speaks something with me. I sighed, my dad is altogether a different story.



We, in our families, are harshly trained to be strong. Waking up early under any circumstances is one among them. For the meeting at 8 AM, I do not need to take an extra effort. On the way to Health Care administrative head office I read all the details required for the meeting. The moment I entered in the conference room, I found Dhruv that too in the Chair'!!




WHAAT THE HELL! Why am I called here then? Why is Dhruv suddenly interested in the meeting? When he care a damn about Health Care'.



As I entered the meeting hall, Dhruv's eyes met mine. His eyes widened first and then with a smile he stood up from the chair and offered that to me. I am surprised is an understatement! This eye talk had again reminded me about Nandu, that is what I call her now a days in my thoughts. After this meeting I wanted to ask him about Nandu and Navya. As far as I know Dhruv he does not give in easily. Well, let's try!!




The meeting is about the land details for new branches and the approvals necessary. Dhruv and I both know it is our waste of time as, the meeting will be reconducted with the main heads again and they will personally approve. I am atleast trying to give suggestions when there is a choice. But Dhruv is constantly watching the phone with utmost concentration. I had tilted my profile slightly and tried to see his screen. Its maps or precisely GPS of someone's movements. Now, This is weird. Suddenly a question distracted me.. And I am again immersed in the meeting.


After the meeting, I had conveniently slipped to the side of Dhruv and asked him-




"Yaar! After long time. Kaisa hain tu? Aur tu yahan Kaise? If you are interested in this meeting ek phone to karlete, I would have stayed at my home."




"Manik. Main to theek hu. I am not surprised ki tum yaha ho. Dad and Abhinav uncle believe in you and Harshad. It's just in the morning dad ko kuch aur kaam mein jaana pada. He had asked me to attend it. It may be his another plot to involve me in Health care. If my guess is not wrong tumko Abhinav uncle ne call kiya hoga, because Harshad unke saath vacation mein hain. And thanks to you, for saving me from that chair."





Is this our Dhruv? My buddy, what happened to him? Why is he so formal to me? How much we used to enjoy! He used to be our Mr. Dreamy, hamesha khayalon mein khote rahate the. His dream always is to go away from the rules of our families and to marry the love of his life. Is Gourav uncle pressurizing him so much that he has closed himself from everyone. No, I can't let this happen!! He is my best friend, Period.




"Tumhe us chair se kya problem hain?" I couldn't help but asking him.




He is lost and turned to chair, with an expression of loathing and said,




"That bloody chair picks its occupant and I don't want to give it that satisfaction by participating in the competition."




This is so not our Dhruv. Finally did he accept the affairs of our families. He don't look like it. God, please help him.




"Chodo na Dhruv, chalte hain. For our old times sake, lets go to our jamming place and kuch gaana bajate hain. What say? Hamara group ko maine already inform kardiya."





Jamming place (Outskirts of the city)


All of our friends- Cabir Dhawan, Mukti Dhawan, Alia Saxena, Dhruv Vedant and I had reached our Jamming place.




Dhawan siblings are twins and extended relatives of our families. They are not very close to Malhotras, Vedants and Saxenas. Though they didn't receive the same kind of upbringing as us, still they have an idea about it. We had practically grown up together, same school, same college till our MBA. It is been three years after that. I can feel the change we are not the same. Cabir had started a music company, FAB5, in the name our group and cherishing it. He is the Jaan of our group. He is the most lively person I had seen till date and the most sensible too. Alia Saxena and Mukti Dhawan had started their own boutique with their designed clothes. But, I will often see Mukti in Cabir's music company FAB5. I had always treated Mukti and Alia as the sisters I never had. After our schooling Alia declared herself as my girlfriend. Even I had been shocked from that. But, I can't say anything. Reason- I love FAB5 too much. I cannot allow a crack in it, allowing our friends to take sides. FAB5 is my solace, I can bear anything to keep it intact. I thought, in due time Alia will understand her infatuation, owing to my reluctance and stiffness with her. But Alas! No! She is still under the same impression that she is my girl friend. Cabir and Dhruv share my views but Mukti thinks that we can all be together forever with us. Irony! Nobody asked my opinion!




After few songs and partying we settled by poolside. Alia and Mukti called it a day and went inside. Cabir, Dhruv and I are still at pool. Painful silence between us. We three can feel it is not same with FAB5, unlike Alia and Mukti. Not that we had fights, but simply we drifted apart, in the course of these three years!




It is 3 AM! Still Dhruv is viewing his phone screen with utmost concentration. I had observed him do the same few times in the evening also. I didn't ask him, But Cabir is Cabir-





"Abey! Itna kya ghoor raha hai screen ko?"




Instead of Dhruv I replied "Kisi ko stalk kar raha hain. He is following his/her every activity

through GPS "




Though I know Dhruv do not react, but tiny bit of me expected him to be shocked. Alas! No he just smiled and continued to look into his phone screen. That is my buddy, he cannot and will not lie to FAB5, but he never says full truth also. He just says some content needed for the situation. People who don't know his this nature will term him as shy. I know better. But the one, Thoroughly, shocked was Cabir!




Cabir chocked his drink and exclaimed




"WHAAT!! Dhruv and stalking? Beta tu kab sudhar gaya hain? Koun hain ye ladiki?"




"Hain koi!" Dhruv replied calmly.




Now its my turn to get shocked!! Did dhruv accept that he is stalking a girl.. I mean a GIRL!! Who is it? Is it Nandini? I want to find out.




"Bolo, kab tum hame Nandini ka intro karva rahe ho?" I tried my luck





"Nandini??" Both Cabir and Dhruv said in unision. Ok, Cabir I can understand but, for Dhruv, did he get shocked because I get to know about his Nandini no scratch that, just Nandini. Or he got shocked because she is not the girl he is stalking. I sincerely prayed for the second option. But then Cabir has to jump in to spoil my plan.




"Yeh Nandini koun hain Manik, aur tum use kaise jante ho?" Cabir asked.





I can't help myself from calling him gadha' in my mind and narrated the scene, I witnessed in D&D bar. Ofcourse assessing Dhruv's rection along. But damn, he didn't give away anything. Clearly I can feel his tension. Come on, I am his other half whom he is trying to fool but failing. My doubt has strengthened. After narrating the whole incident Dhruv said-




"The girls are again ready to create a scene there. You know the middle class girls, self blame and all. I don't want a scene on the first day of my disc. As their eyes met with me, I had nodded No' . They took it as a cue and left from there."




Bingo! Here came the slip from Dhruv. Dhruv and I both know that we don't categorize people based on class'. Even though Alia keeps saying such things, I never agreed with her. Dhruv knows about that. We both had seen them going away in Honda City. Then where did this middle class come into existence? Is the slip of tongue deliberate from Dhruv asking me to analyze further? Every sentence is subtly hinting that he know. One minute are they the secret friends of Dhruv? Because apart from us they are his most treasured people. Let's try again!





Cabir is blabbering about something, but Dhruv's attention is on me. I had asked-






"So how are your secret friends, Dhruv?"





His face lit up and a teasing smile from the corner of his mouth, almost conveying that I hit the target. I beamed up.





"They are good." was his reply. Indirectly conveying me end of discussion.




I took the hint and went inside calling it a night. But, sleep is far away. One question is nagging me- "Am I Imagining things, because I wanted to see them this way?"




In the early morning, when I had to leave, I found Dhruv's phone beside swimming pool. I know his password and first I checked Contacts' , there is no Nandini nor Navya. Infact there is not contact saved and no messages nothing!! Strange the phone is empty!!! Unbelievable!! There is an app that caught my attention. It is the same one which he is using yesterday for stalking. I found the address the person reached, early morning. I glanced at it. I have got a photographic memory, so noting down is not needed.





There has to be a start somewhere, If the address be the one then so be it. If it is Nandini, then I will be happy, some part of mystery solved. If not... Oh! No! I don't want to think in that direction. Atleast not now.





With that thought, I had called my private investigator and ordered to give me the personal and professional details of the residents in the house. I cut the call and about to leave the house then I had seen reflection of Dhruv in the water standing on the rooftop. So he wants me to find his phone. Interesting!! He is giving me hints and leading me on. Let's see where it goes. Giving a nod to the reflection in water I proceeded to exit. I am sure my consent is understood by Dhruv.





At that time, I thought, I will get her address and proceed to next step. But then I met her again in the same day afternoon beside me waiting at the traffic signal. Every incident with her is a roller coaster ride. Still half an hour to go, for her to come. I have a feeling that something big is going to happen. Let's see!!










Note *: Thank you for your response😊. I am overwhelmed. I will be posting an Interlude in the flashback 2 tomorrow. If everything goes well I will be posting Chapter 3 also tomorrow😊. Discussion between Cabir and Dhruv after Manik left.



Note**: The idea of these kind of families is from the book 'The Billionaire Banker' by Georgia Le Carre. Its just the idea of the families, but the story is completely different.

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interesting update
dhruv is a mystery
navni r his secret friends ?
why he was leading manik on?
cont soon
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this is so interesting .. i'm loving it..
what is dhruv upto...
waiting for the next...

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