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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice continue ... 😊 ...waiting take care 😊 ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Samthanian_

Maine padha ni hai but i know apne likha hai so acha hi hogaaa...


kaisi UE khushfehimyaan palne lagi ho ??😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow beautiful one...
Waiting for nxt part...
Thnx for pm..
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome want to read it more. please update soon.
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super amazing...plz continue soon...loved it ..like totally..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: paarsaa


kaisi UE khushfehimyaan palne lagi ho ??😆

Hawww...Inna mast likha hai apne...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome.. but confusion hai?? manik maafi kyun mang raha tha after d dream sequence??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waiting for next update...
plzzz continue soon...
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COMPLETE PART


Nandini was firstly shocked on sudden kiss she was not in her senses !! what was happenining with her? she couldn't understand ...she was not responding him then he bite her lips but nandini remains numb she didn't knew what to do ?? Manik was like a hungry bird kissing him like don't know from how many years he was craving for this ...he broke the kiss coz nandini was struggling to breath ...but he didn't left her he started kissing her neck then nandini came into her sense and pushed him away ...her sudden push also brought manik in reality he realised their position and apart from her he was not looking at her and nandini was feeling shy ,blood was coming from her lips bcoz of manik's wild kiss ...

" Why didn't u stop me???" manik asked her ...

"what? " nandini was shocked on this sudden question ...like seriously he was like an animal kissing her and he himself was saying that why she didn't stopped him ...her heart again broke ...it was her first kiss but...

" Now what are u doing here ?? go " he ordered her and she too without waiting for anyone left from their crying...

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Nandini was silently crying standing in the corner when she saw cabir was approaching her she wiped her tears and with great difficulty smiled ...

" What are u doing here alone??" he asked her ..

" Nothing !! just wanted to be alone for some times ..

" What happened to ur lips ? its bleeding "?? and nandini had no answer ...

" WO ..." she left her sentense in middle ...

"What are u guys doing here ?? " Manik came and asked them ..he looked at nandini but she looked away ...

" No bhai !! nothing I was just asking nandini that what happened to her lip its bleeding ..."on which manik also looked at her ...

" May be she was trying to bite something to cut gaya hoga " Manik said looking at the guest ...someone called cabir so he excused himself from there ...As soon as cabir left from there Manik dragged nandini with himself in the room near corner ...


" Manik what are u doing ??" nandini asked him with fear ...

" What m I doing what are u doing with cabir what were u saying him " ?? his finger digged in nandini waist she felt pain ...

" Manik leave me its hurting plzz " she tried to push him but he was so strong ...he held her hand and through her on the bed ...nandini got really scared ...

" Manik what are u doing? please leave me I was just chatting with cabir please manik " she hit the wall manik came top of her ...he removed her glaces and slowly slowly caressed her both cheeks and lips ..

" Ur eyes are so beautiful nandini ,ur lips everything " ...And nandini was like is ko kya hua ?? kahin ghum to nhi gaya ? but she was happy also at least manik praised her ...

" Thankkk u " she said smilingly ...

" Tch..tch ...u are so dumb!! u really took thus as ur tareef ahh nanduni u are too innocent but u know na I am monster I want u now ..." manik said with smirk..and again something broke inside nandini his many time he will hurt her ...

" And I know tum cabir se kya baat karti ho listen nandini I know u loves me no Infact tumhe mujhse ishq hain but I don't love u so please don't expect anything from me " he warned her and nandini was shocked how he knew that she loves him? she never told him ..

" " What are u thinking ?? yahi na me how I came to know about this ? oh come on nandu I saw u growing since ur childhood I know the meaning of every change in u ...and thus biggest change is related to me to mujhse kaise chup sakta hain ye sab ...he said playing with her hair strend ..nandini was still in his arms ...tears were rolling from her eyes ...she was crying on her fate !! don't know what her destiny wanted from her she loves him he was aware of it but she can't get him ..she can't make her place in his heart but still she had no hurt feeling because for her most important thing is that she loves him and that was enough for her



" If u don't like me then why u kissed me manik or agar mai tumhe push na karti then u would have crosse all ur limits" she wanted to know the reason that why manik kissed her ...

" Oh really? u think that I don't have control on myself ?? agar mai or tum ik room mai lock bhi ho jayen to bhi I won't touch u ...get that honey !!! " he patted her cheeks ...

" I don't think so manik man only wants one thing from women's " she said lowering her eyes ...

" So u think that I am also amongs those ??" he asked with anger she didn't know what to answer ...


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Nandini was returning home after college when a car stopped near her and some one pulled her inside ...it was manik ...

" Manik where are u taking me ??" she was continuously asking this but he was not getting her any answer ...he stopped his car in front of his farmhouse ...

" Why u brought me in ur farm house ?? please say something manik " she was restless ...

" Because u are going to live with me here till I want !! " he said and dragged her inside ...

" What ?? what are saying manik ?? mammu papa won't allow me to live here please let's go from here .." she pleaded to him

" Who will tell our parents ??they think that I m out of country they will never come to know that u are Here with me " he said ..

" But manik they will worry for me what m going to tell them ? please let's go manik why are u doing this manik why ? " she started crying

" Ye tumhe pehle sichna chahiye thaa ..now I will show that how much control I have on myself " he said pulling her towards himself

" Manik u took all wrong I was not talking about u ...I love u manik how can u think that ke mai tumhare bare me aisa sochti hun u know me only this much ??!!!" she made her look in to her eyes ..

" Sorry baby ur tears not gonna work on me " he patted her cheeks

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It was almost one week they both were leaving in manik's farm house ...in this period manik hugged her ,kisse her but didn't cross his limits ...that night also they both were sleeping besides each other manik was fast asleep but nadini was awake ...she was thinking that what will she tell her parents ...
She looked at manik ...he was looking so inocent in his sleep she remembered years back she asked him question that " Manik if I die someday then will u be cry?? and a smil appeared on her lips remembering his answer she knew that if she will ask him again then he will give her same answers ( as writer I just know question answer I myself don't know so pardon me ciz I don't know what can be its answer 😊...nandini sighed and drifted into sleep ..

Next morning when she was preparing their breakfast manik came and informed her that they are going home ..Nandini was so much happy finally she will see her parents ...

as soon as she entered her house she heared the voice ...

" Get out from here" she saw her step mother standing in the middle of the room ...( her real mother was died in her childhood )

" What ??mom I will explain u everything please " she started pleading she saw her father she went to him

" Papa !! papa please tell mummy that ..." words left her way ...

" Beta where were u? u know na ur papa loves u so much ? I was so worried for u " her father hugged her and she lose her control and cried in his embarrass

" What are u doing? apki beti he kalik pooch di hain sab me mu pe and u are taking her side "?? her mother asked her

" Just shut up !! I trust my daughter don't u dare to say anything against her " her father warned her mother and nadini cried more on his fathers blind trust and love on her ...

" Nandini !!! beta how are u ??" she looked at the owner of the to voice and found nyinika she went towards her nyonika took her in motherly hugged and kissed her madly all were there including manik after that cabir also hugged her ...she looked at manik with teary eyes but he gave her evil smile ...

" Just ask her that with whom she was ?? " her mother intrupted again ...but no one was interested to listen to her all were happy that finally their nandu was safe...

" Okk don't ask her I will search some boy and will do her marriage" she said

" Iski zaroorat nhi hain coz tomorrow Manik and nandini ki shadi hain " manik's father informed all and all left shock there ..

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It was almost two months of their marriage but nothing changed ...Manik was like same but nandini took extra care of him he never paid attention to her ...

It was almost midnight but manik didn't came yet and nandini was alone in the house she was worried for him and finally she heared door opened she went to him and hugged him ...

" where were u manik? u know how much worried I was ? u know how many hours in a day? how many minutes in hour? how many seconds in minutes? how many moments in seconds?? dekh lena aisa hi koi ik moment ayega that my heart will stop beating " she said and punched him in his chest ..manik took hold of her hands and tied behind her head ..

" Why didn't u refused to our marriage why didn't u tell everyone that I took I with me why ??" he asked her angrily ...

" Because I love so much manik that I don't want Amy one to think bad about u I don't want to spoil ur tears image in front of everyone ...no ways manik I won't tell anyone ever " she said smilingly and they both shared an eyelock ...he was loosing his control on himself he gently lead her towards the bed and came top of her he started giving kisses all over her body that time only lust and desire in his eyes and she claimed her his he gave nandini the right of his wife ...

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Next morning both were still sleeping in each others arms manik was first one to wake up he realised their positions and got shocked later nandini also opened her eyes shyly ...

" Good morning " she greeted him but he stared her blankly ...

" It was just a mistake nandini just mistake of week moment " he said ...

" U troubles me bcoz I love u so much haina ?? dekh Lena ik din aap mujhe yaad karke bht roage but I won't be here to wiped ur tears " she said sadly

" come on nandini !! agar tum mar bhi jaaona to shayad meri aankh se aansoo bhi na nikle " he didn't knew what he said and left her numb ..

Nandini became very week after check up she got to know that she was pregnant and her happiness had no bounds she will carry manik child the thought made her beyond happy ...
Manik didn't reacted to this he became silent something was happening with him

In night when nandini was in terrace he came from behind nandini looked at him ..

" Nandini I want to give chance to our relation " and nandini had tears of joy in her eyes ..but manik next sentense made her shattered


" But plzz abort this we will start fresh !!please" and nandini slapped him

"How could to say this?? listenen manik I know u are not happy with me but this child is my life bcoz it is the most precious gift of urs ...u want me to leave u na okk I will leave but after the birth if my child bcoz I want him or her to be born in safest place " saying this she left from there leaving manik shock behind ...

he also entered in room and saw nandini was sleeping he came close to her and carassed her tummy ..

" Papa is too bad !! how can I tell this about u?,u are my part I love u " he kissed her tummy...

The date of delivery came close nandini felt pain and he took her to the hospital where doctors informed him that nandini 's condition was very critical and aftert hearing this she hugged cabir cryingly

" Cant please pray ke wo bach jaye " first time he cried for her he realised his love for her may be her love was always inside him but he never showed her ...

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He was reading books in study room last might he didn't saw that dream he was thinking something when two lil hands closed his eyes he smiled ...

" And papa ki Japan is here " she pick Arayna na kissed her all over her face ...on which she giggled she was just like her mother ...

" Papa shee cabil chachu Dave me wallonsh " his daughter showed him balloons which she was holding in her hand ...she was four years old and mamik's only world ...

" papa last night mummy came in my dleam and she told me that tell ul papa that don't hide ul eysh it's show beautiful and tell him to shmile ..." And manik was shocked he thought destiny smiled on him just like aryna also used to see dreams about nandini hut in her nandini never told about him anything ...but now yesterday night he also didn't saw that dream and now in arayna dreams she said that he became very happy first time in those four years ...yes its four years Nandini died giving birth to arayna ...

" Maine kaha tha k shayad tum mar jao to bhi meri aankh she aansoo bhi na nikle Lenin bad kisnati Delhi tumhe yaad jarke Rona chahta hu to aansio bhi mera nhi deta bcoz all of me hates me I love u nandini I love u and I know u forgave me " he kiised aryna and hugged her with nandini's photo phrame ...


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DONT KILL ME FOR THE END
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohhh so amazing n emotional story.
Nandu ne kitnaa kuch kiya..
but manik never realized.
nandu chali gyi...
How he knows he loves her..
but vo kh bhi nhi paya us se..

Their daughter is cute.
ending is really emotional. .

but nice one...

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