#3:MaNanSS: The Mafia and His Shimmer Epilogue(Last)/PG79/25th-June

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prathyushaeluri

@prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#481

superb one

loved it a lot

best one till now

it was awesome

amazing

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archu_asok

@archu_asok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#482

Awesome update. Manan's moments were amazing. Way manik consoled nandini was superb. Well penned. U nailed it. Wow nandini got her eyes back.nandini's pov was superb. Hats off. Nandini's situation after getting back eye sight was well written. Wow manik on his knees. Eagerly waiting to read further. Continue soon

Keep writing

Stay blessed😊

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twenkling

@twenkling

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Posted: 9 years ago

#483

fantastic update...

finally nandu can be able to see her prince charming, her love of live...

awww...the moment nandu was restless to remove the bandage and saw everyone first time, that moment was priceless...

manik nd rishabh teaching nandu part was superb...

I think the surprise is manik propose nandu for marry him...

eagerly waiting for next update...

cont soon...

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Kaanika

@Kaanika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#484

Thanks for updating

Really enjoyed the update..

Finally nandu got her eyes backn she is able to see her prince charming...

Nandu was soo eager open her eyes...

Manik was always supporting her so that she does not looses hope..

Manik never leaves a chance to romance...desperate soul also started in hospital..

Manan moments were lovely..

Manik worries was clearly visible on his face for nandini..

Both were soo happy

Nandini was cribbing like a baby in front of doctors to see his manik face..

The way nandini examined manik face and his features was soo lovely..

Manik teaching nadini about things it was soo cute..

Really liked the update..

Keep it up.

Well done..

And in last u said about the suprise i think manik is gonna ask her out for marriage.

Will be waiting for next update

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aahanaK

@aahanaK

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Posted: 9 years ago

#485

beautiful update

manik was just trying to be

strong but he wasn't

nandu was so scared n happy

operation got successful

loved the way nandu was seeing manik

nandu is irritated coz of manik not saying

I LOVE U to her

but he is gonna compensate it soon n beautifully I guess

thnks for pm in advance

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fireflies333

@fireflies333

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#486

it was really a beautiful and superb update!!!

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LUCKYRICKLY

@LUCKYRICKLY

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Posted: 9 years ago

#487

Ab tak mai shy wali nandu ko dekha!!saari stories mai
But is story mai nandu bahut bold hai 😉
I like this type of nandu 😉
😆 😆
O operations wali moments,,and
Manik hospital bed or hi 😆

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Urvi Saini

@urvisaini

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#488

Wow!

This was a beautiful chapter

She could see finally!

The desperation and anxiety shown was the very well written

It was like I was also experiencing the same

Loved it

And I can't wait for Manik's surprise

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

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lissy16

@lissy16

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#489

superb update
manik and rishus teaching section was cute
nandu is such a baby
finally she can see her manik

it was a amazing story
some part made me cry
some part made me laugh
some part made me blush

you are a amazing writer
continue writing story's
i like evary story of yours.

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manik11

@manik11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#490

Hiii baby... srry for late comment... awsm update...first look off nandni wowww...You describe it so well.. ... ... very beautifully...I just loved the scenes when she was so impassioned to see Manik... .She was looking his lips when he spoke aww...that scene was amazing... loved it... continue soon...

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