MANAN- YOU ARE STILL THE ONE.(CHAPTER-38 on pg no.38)(15.1. 2017) - Page 15

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Bloody kamini Soha,
I just hate her a lot...
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Awesomee update
Soha ko ab bss manik wapis chahiye phle nandu se revenge bhi toh isse hi lena tha...agar nandu manik ki lyf se chli gyi toh manik toh toit jayega...aur ye soha ye hi manan ki lyf se chli jaye...lovd it...continue soon
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Awesome update...this soha I hate her... I hope manik will fix her...eagerly waiting ...soon plzzz
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CHAPTER -28

Manik dropped Nandini to her hostel and left to his home.

Nandini went to her room and changed her dress and came and sat infront of the mirror.

She looked at herself in the mirror and blushed remembering the moments spent with Manik.


Nandini went and lied on her bed lost in Manik's thoughts when her phone beeped.

It was a message from Manik.

Manik - Thinking about me????

Nandini smiled seeing the message.

Nandini typed the message - Yes...

But then deleted it and wrote - Nahi toh... Mai to sorahi thi...

Manik - Acha... Sorahi thi. Pehle Jo message type Kia wo send nahi Kia aur yeh message send kardiya.

Nandini looked here and there to check if Manik was present here.

She got confused as to how Manik came to know that she deleted the first message that she typed.

Nandini sat up straight on the bed and typed- Manik tumhe kaise pata ?

Manik - Bas pata chalgaya. That means I was right. To batao...

Nandini - Kya?

Manik - The first message that you typed. Missing me???

In the meantime Nandini's roommate who was sleeping got up and said - Nandini please switch off the lights. I am trying to sleep here.

Nandini - Ok . Sorry...

Saying this Nandini switched off the lights and messaged to Manik.

Nandini - Manik hum kal college me baat karenge. Bye. Good Night.

Manik - Arey Nandini but ... Ok Fine. Good Night.

With this Nandini kept the phone aside and went to sleep.

On the other hand,Manik kept looking at the messages of Nandini again and again and finally sleep overtook him.

Next morning Manik's house -

Manik got up early and got ready.

He called Nandini's number and said that he would be picking her up from the hostel in an hour.

But Nandini said that she had some work so she would be getting late .

She asked Manik not to pick her up and that she would directly meet him at college.

After a lot of convincing from Nandini, Finally Manik agreed half-heartedly.

Manik went down to have breakfast.

Unlike other days, Nyonika was also present at the breakfast table.

Nyonika - Good Morning Beta.

Manik - Good Morning.

Nyonika was surprised that Manik has replied to her greeting in a polite
manner. She felt happy inside.

She didn't dare to ask him anything as she knew about his mood swings.

But she kept on admiring her son. He looked so happy that day.

Nyonika prayed to God- God Please mere Bete ko hamesha aise hi Khush rakhna. Aur mujhe Kuch nahi chahiye.

Manik finished the breakfast and without Looking at Nyonika said bye and left to college.

That was something very unexpected. Nyonika - Ye Manik aaj suddenly itna Acha kyu behave kar raha hai mere sath? But Jo bhi ho wo Khush hai wahi kafi hai mere liye.

Manik reached college and went to attend the morning lecture.

After the class he went to Nandini's class and saw that Nandini wasn't there.

He asked some of her classmates. They said that Nandini still hasn't come.

So Manik dialled Nandini's number but it was not reachable.

He sent her a message as to where she was.

Then he went to the canteen.

There he saw Soha along with his friends.

Shaurya - Hey Manik... What's up buddy. Tu hai kaha itne dino se.

Manik - Hi guys... Kuch nahi yaar bas wo mai.

Jay- Bas wo kya yaar. Friends ko itni jaldi bhoolgaya tu. Hume rehne de but what about Soha how can you avoid her. You guys toh love each other na. Kya chal kya raha hai.

Manik looked at Soha and said- Listen Soha actually wo...

Soha looked at Manik and said- Manik don't you think tum ye bet ko Kuch zyada hi seriously le rahe ho. Just forget it na. Let's forget about the revenge and the bet.

Manik - Guys I wanted to say something. Mai actually yehi kehna chahta tha ki I am not continuing with the bet. Finish the chapter here.
Soch lo ki mai bet haar gaya.

Jay- Haar gaya???? No Manik you have won the bet . You had to make Nandini fall for you. And you have succeeded in it. She is head over heels in love with you. She is so stupid that she fell for you so easily without thinking twice.

And all Manik's friends started making fun of Nandini.

Manik in anger mode - Guys stop it. Don't say anything about Nandini .

Shaurya - Ok Ok. Don't get hyper. But tum maano ya na maano you have won the bet. Congratulations yaar.

All this was heard by Nandini who was standing at the door of the canteen.

Nandini couldn't believe what she heard.

Manik was just fooling her just for the sake of some bet.

Nandini wouldn't have believed about it if she had heard it from someone else but Manik himself was mentioning about the bet.

She had tears in her eyes.

Manik's back was facing towards Nandini so he couldn't see her.

Viren saw Nandini and signalled Manik to look back.

Manik looked back and his world froze to see Nandini standing there.

Nandini had tears in her eyes.

Manik - Nandini listen it's not what you are thinking. I can explain.

Shaurya - Kyu jhoot bol raha hai yaar. Bata de use ki it was just a bet and she means nothing to you.

Manik - Shaurya just shut up.

Jay- No Manik we won't shut up. Tum kya samjhana chahte ho usey. She means nothing to you but Soha does. Why do you even care for Nandini and what she feels. You should care about Soha coz you love her.

Nandini got another shock that Soha was Manik's girlfriend.

She looked into Manik's eyes and asked - Manik is it true?

Soha -Ofcourse it is true.

Agar tumhe yakeen nahi aata to see these pictures.

Soha showed her pictures with Manik.

Nandini looked at Manik but he couldn't meet her eyes.

Nandini - So she is right. How could you do this Manik? I trusted you but you... you broke my trust.

She was crying her heart out.

Manik's mind went blank. He didn't know how to react.

Nandini couldn't take it longer and ran from there crying.

Soha smirked and looked at Jay and Shaurya who in turn signalled a thumbs up to Soha as their plan was successful.

Done with another update.

Hope you guys liked it.

Ignore the typos if any .

I guess I have justified the prologue. If not then please feel free to let me know.

Waiting for your response.


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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update.
You write it beautifully. Feeling sad for manan. Hate soha and his friends. nandu is really hurt and I hope he win back her trust...
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Posted: 9 years ago
prologue se better tha update

atleast manik didnt make fun of her here

so painful..

poor nandu..

and still the dance competition is on, rt? so they gonna perform with their hate or he will sort out the mater? i m excited for this

plz update fastly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Bohat bura hua manan k sath...😭😭
Hate soha and his frnds...😡
Cont soon.
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Emotional update
Nandu ko sach pta chl gea...cabir mukti kahan hai unhe nhi pta kisi bhi bet ke baare mein...iss soha ko toh...bss ab manik soha ko hi chod de tb pta chlega use...lovd it...continue soon
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Finally the prologue is here,
can't wait for the next part.
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CHAPTER -28

Nandini couldn't take it longer and ran from there crying.

Soha smirked and looked at Jay and Shaurya who in turn signalled a thumbs up to Soha as their plan was successful.

Manik tried to go behind Nandini but Soha stopped her.

Soha to Manik- Manik kaha jarahe ho tum? Us Nandini ke paas.Kyu? Ab sab khatm hogaya hai na. Usey bet ke baare me pata chal chuka hai. Ab act karne ki kya zarurat hai Uske samne. Just forget her.

Manik - Soha just shut up. Mujhe tumse Kuch baat nahi karni.

Then he turned towards his friends and said- Aur tum log... Tumhe to mai baad me dekhunga. First I need to talk to Nandini.

Saying this Manik jerked Soha's hand with which she had held his hand.

Then he went in search of Nandini.

In the meantime,

Nandini ran to the garden at the back of the college and sat on the bench and was crying continuously.

Nandini -

Why Manik???

Why did you do this to me?

Maine to tumhe sache dil se chaha tha but tum ... tum ye sab sirf ek bet ke liye kar rahe the.

How could you do this to me?

I trusted you but you... you broke my trust.

I will never forgive you for this. Never I my life...

After a few minutes,Nandini felt a hand on her shoulder.

Nandini thought that it was Manik.

Nandini - Jao yahan se. Mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni. I said just leave...

Nandini jerked the hand and turned to see that it was Dhruv .

Nandini wiped her tears and said- I m sorry Dhruv. Actually mujhe Laga ki...Khair leave it. Tum yahan...

Dhruv-

Haan mai to aksar yahan aata hoon to spend some time whenever there is a free period but tumhe Pehle kabhi nahi Dekha yahan pe.

Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho? Aur tum ro kyu rahi thi? Koi problem hai kya?

Nandini - Nahi koi problem nahi hai. It's just that...

Dhruv - It's Ok. Agar tum batana nahi chahti to I won't force you. But ek baat kahu???

Nandini nodded.

Dhruv - Kabhi bhi life me koi bhi problem aajaye Hume haar nahi maan ni chahiye. Uska samna karna chahiye bravely. So stop crying and face the situation whatever it is.

Nandini - I think you are right. I won't fall weak. I will face the situation strongly. I won't let anything or anyone affect me.

Dhruv smiled.

Nandini - Thanks Dhruv.

Dhruv - Don't thank me. We are friends now so it's completely fine.

Nandini - Yeah. Right

Dhruv - Waise Nandini the Inter college competition is just few days away. Don't you think we should start our preparation.Already a lot of time is wasted.

Nandini selfthought - I think Dhruv is right. Why should I cry for Manik when he doesn't care for me. I won't let Manik affect me.

Nandini to Dhruv- Yes Dhruv you are right. I think we should start our preparation. Let's go.

Dhruv- Ok.

Both of them got up to go to the library to study but Manik came infront of them.

Manik - Nandini we need to talk. Come with me.

Saying this Manik held her hand but Nandini jerked his hand and said- Mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni leave my hand.

Nandini to Dhruv - Let's go Dhruv.

Saying this she took Dhruv with her leaving Manik behind.

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any.

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