MaNan FF-Teri Meri Kahani (Part 2-page 20)

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kriti094

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Looks interesting

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Originally posted by: firefly09angel
Interesting concept...
Loved it...
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awesome hai yarr bht acha hai jaldi sa lambha sara update day do janu

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

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when are you updating
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anaita arora

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Posted: 9 years ago

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u r a wonderful writr
awesomee introoo
mr.malhotra ki love life padne m maza aagaya
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Thoshna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Omg Maisha!! Another new story!! Congrats yaar!! Altogether 4 stories now!! All the best for the management :D
The concept is nice.. MaNan version dekhe toh the concept it new.. Loved ke though baba manik's thoughts clash bigtime they love each other a lot!!
Aww u brought in armaan n shilpa.. Nice move ;)
Mukti again manik's sissy.. V love them as bro-sis na..
Cabira n dhruv his best frnz.. Hmm nice.. So alya hai??
Until SHE came into my life..
And i relate to manik somewhat.. That seeing his mom suffer coz of his dad's family.. Ditto what i heard by my mom!
Intro was very cute..
Hoping that the FF is in manik's POV.. :)
Waiting for nandu's intro by manik only :D
Thnx a lot fr d PMs.. Though i dont cmnt u PM me.. Thats really sweet of u.. Thnx agn :)

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Maisha007

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Hey guys, tomorrow I'm going to hostel for three months so im sorry in advance as my updates will be a late but i'll try to update faster. please pray for me and my studies and till then enjoy this one TongueSmile

Part 1

A sunny morning in Mumbai city.
The camera focuses on a big mansion with the name plate of "Malhotra's". a girl in found inside the house , sitting in front of the mandir and arranging all the things for the arti. suddenly a woman rebukes at her from behind. she is buadadi
buadadi=ese ahista hath chalaogi toa kaise hoga shilpa, arti ka time horaha ha jaldi jaldi karo.
shilpa quickly lowers her gaze and nods her head in the affirmative.
ny=buaji.. bass sabkuch hogaya hain. shilpa bass pooja keliye phool rakh rahiha.
buadadi=toa abhi humari shakal kya dekhrahiho? jakar sabko bulake law, arti ka samay horaha hain.
within sometime everyone gathers in the mandir. the women were looking at each other for reassurance whether there was any lacking or not. Baba came to the mandir and looked at everyone's face. Like every other day, he looked at shilpa who understood what he meant and she quickly went upstairs to wake him up
sh=yeh ladka kabhi nahi sudhrega, khud daat khata hain aur apne sath sath mujhe bhi khilata hain, kya karu main manik ka
she entered his room constantly blablabering to herself. the room was as big as a suit & like other bachelors messy too.
sh=as usual, abhitak soraha hain , Manikkk
she opened the curtains and sun rays hit his face.
m=bhabi not again
he pulled the quilt over his face but shilpa pulled it off. he looked at her with an irritating look
m=what yar bhabi..not again
sh=yes mr guitarist, not again. arti ka time horaha hain, sirf 5 minute baki hain. fresh hokar abhi ke abhi tum mujhe neeche dekhne chahiye
m=par..
sh=manik no ifs no buts.. just 5 minutes
Here downstairs, raj was fuming in anger and baba was looking at his wrist watch constantly. he took the arti platter and was about to start the pooja when manik came and stood beside him , his regular place. armaan and manik used to stand beside on each side of baba during the arti. nyonika sighed a relief as like other days today also manik managed to join everyone for the arti. baba smiled and began the pooja.

Once the arti was done shilpa started to distribute prashad and manik walked out of the place. he reached the stairs and without looking back
m=ap sab mujhe ese mat dekhiye, ab agar main prashad lene jaunga toa buadadi tokh dengi mujhe ke maine shower nahi kia aur prashad kharaha hu thats why main khudsehi upar jarahahu as im not interested to hear the same old taunts of buadadi.
manik went upstairs with a cold attitude
buadadi=yeh ladka toa din ke din hathse nikalta jaraha hain
baba=saraswati..bass karo.
ny=shilpa, mukti ajaw breakfast laganeme madat kardo.
...
The camera focuses to another house. a woman was serving breakfast to her husband, another old woman, a young boy. suddenly they heard a girl calling the lady. "mummy, mera dupatta nahi milraha hain"
"yeh ladki bhi na, ek bhi cheeze theekse nahi rakhti hain. nandu, rukh jaa main ati hu"
the lady went inside the bedroom and saw a girl was looking for something inside her cupboard.
"nandu" the lady called her daughter, she helplessly looked at her mother
n=maa, mera dupatta, woh mera favourite dupatta hain.
her mother anjali murthy glared at nandini and moved her aside
an=tera kuch nahi hosakta, aj college ka pehla din hain aur tu aj late hone wali hain. maine sabkuch acchese sametke rakha tha aur tune kya haal banake rakha hain nandu
nandini quickly tied her hair in a ponytail and packed her books
n=maa jaldi karo na
an=tu jakar breakfast karle, main tera dupatta dhund deti hu.
nandini was about to go out but before that she came in front of the mirror and smiled to herself
"My self Nandini murthy, meri mummy ko toa ap logone dekh liya ha. abhi thora gusseme hain kyuki humesha ki tarah mujhe kuch na kuch nahi milraha hain.. but meri maa bohot sweet hain just like my papa. Mere papa, Deepak murthy. Woh ICICI bank me job karte hain. "
nandini comes to the dining area and hugs her papa from back. then she takes blessings from her dadi and snatches the sandwich from her brother , Rishab's hands. both started to hit each other playfully. Anjali comes in between and gives nandini her dupatta. nandini quickly finishes her breakfast and prays in front of her bhagwanji
n(to herself)=bhagwanji aj college me mera pehla college hain. Manglore se door, yaha mumbai me aj pehli bar college jarahihu, mere sath rehna aur mujhe himmat dena. aj subhah se kuch ajeeb lagraha hain, lagraha jaise ajka din mere lie kuch naya lekar ayega. please meri umeed to tuttne mat dena aur meri himmat baradena. thank u
d=nandu, chalo beta tujjhe college chorkar mujhe rishab ko school bhi chorne jana hain.
nandini hugs her maa and dadi and goes to college
...
Manik was in his room getting ready for college when armaan comes.
m=bhai.. ap abtak office nahi gaye?
ar=bass jane wala tha, socha tujhe drop karta hua chalo
m=great, bass mera hogaya do minute
ar=tu esa kyu karta hain manik???
manik smirked while wearing his wrist watch
m=apko mom ne bheja hain na mujhe samjhaneko ???
ar=dekh.. we love u
m=and i love u too. but please bhai, dont expect ke just to make buadadi happy main unke isharope nachne lagunga. jabse main is duniya me aya hu, jabse cheezoko samajhne laga hu bass yehi dekha ha ke woh sabpar hukum chalati hain. bachpan se jeena mushkil karke rakha ha ... sirf baba ki wajase main chup rehta hu warna..
ar=manik, woh bari hain humse
m=exactly toa behave bhi wasehi karna chahiye. naki har waqt sabko tana marna chahiye
shilpa comes there too
sh=manik please, tum ese gussa karte ho isiliye dad tumpar naraz rehte hain
m=lol bhabi tell me ke kab woh naraz nahi rehte??? anyways, aj college ka new term start horaha hain and i really dont want ke in sab faltu topics ke wajase main late se pouchu. so bhai lets go.
manik takes his glasses and jacket and goes out. shilpa and armaan helplessly look at eachother. this was one of the regular scenarios of Malhotra Mansion.

SPACE ACADEMY
armaan parks the car and manik gets down
m=thanks for the lift bhai..
ar=anytime aur ha, mukti manik its for both of u.. iss term mujhe koi complain nahi chahiye specially mukti tere against
mukti smiles and nods
mu=koshish karungi bhai.
armaan smiles as he knew his siblings are just impossible. manik and mukti entered the college and saw their friends were already there
m=kya hua? tum sab yaha kyu khare ho?
mu=watchman ki duty karraheho ??
cabir gestures at alya and navya
m=what?? in donoko kya hua??
c=hona kya ha? inki koi friend aj college join karrahiha so both of them are damn excited
m=hold on..tum donoki konsi friend??
na=are yaar woh humari best friend hain
al=when we were kids, toa hum teeno sath me manglore me rehte the, phir dad ne apna business yaha shift karliya aur ek saal baad navya ki bhi family yahi shift hogayi..
na=but humari dosti nahi tuti..we kept in touch
al=and now finally she is here in mumbai and joining SPACE ACADEMY
manik rolled his eyes
m=whatever.. main music room me jarahahu. cabir druv chale???
the boys left the girls over there
mu=wase, yeh tum donoki friend whats her name??
na & al=nandini murthy.
...
nandini gets down from the car and takes a deep breathe
n=thanks papa...
de=wish u all the best beta aur hae ek baat yad rakhna, tumhare mummy papa tumpar pura trust karte hain aur iss trust ko kabhi torna mat
n=yes papa mujhe pata ha and I promise i'll not let you down. abhi main jau?? alya aur navya toa mera wait karrahiha
de=theek ha, class ke bad main tumhe lene ajaunga
n=okay papa..bye
nandini looks around the huge compund. girls & boys walking like couples which made her a bit embaressed. she saw the dresses of the the girls, all were wearing shorts on minnie skirts and nandini looked at herself who was wearing a kurti with jeans and dupatta with a ponytail. she was feeling a bit awkward to go inside all alone when she heard her name being screamed her besties. alya and navya came running all the way hugged her.
n=are main gir jaungi...
al=god.. nandu I still cant believe you're finally in mumbai
na=humhe bhi na.. bilkul vishwas nahi horaha hain, matlab how come ams agreed to come to mumbai??
n=guys.. relax take a deep breathe aur ams kuch dinokeliye hain yahapar. phir unhe wapas jana hain, unka school jo hain wahapar.
al=accha yeh sab chor.. finally tu ab mumbai me hain humare sath so now we are gonna have a blast together
na=nandu..yeh hain mukti humari friend.
nandini smiled
n=hii
mu=nice to meet u, aj subhah se yeh dono tumhare lie pagaloki tarah wait karraheha. accha laga tumse milkar
n=same goes for u too
al=accha nandini chalo pehle andar chalo.. cabir druv aur manik se bhi milna hain tumhe.
while roaming around the college nandini saw alya's clothes
n=alya..tumhari dress.
al=nice na??? druv gifted me
n=ha nice toa hain par tum kabse yeh sab..
al=nandu..chill aur main samajhti hu ke yeh environment tumhare lie new hoga but trust me yeh college bohoot accha hain, aur yahapar dress code it doesnt make any sense . what important is ke tumhara maan kaisa hai, aur wasebhi im used to of all these clothes but dont worry tum humesha ki tarah sweet and elegant lagrahiho
n=thanks alya.. ab jakar mujhe thora better feel hua warna sabko ese dresses me dekkar mujhe ghabrahat horahithi
na=nandini tu bilkul bhi nahi badli na..
n=tum dono bhi utna nahi badle..
al=accha come on guys ,music room chalte hain. druv is continuously calling and calling
n=yeh druv kaun hain??
alya blushed
na=yeh jo ha na humari alya, iska one year purana boyfriend
n=alya??? tu kabse??
al=chill chill..bass ek saal hua hain
n=thats great.. mujhe bhi milna hain but usse pehle I need to meet the principal
na=hum nandini ko lekar jate hain, alya tum baki sabko lekar canteen ajaw.
al=okay
...
MUSIC ROOM
they were practising music suddenly manik stopped
m=guys this is just not the correct one. without the keyboard, alya kaha ha?? navya kaha ha???
mu=woh unki friend ayi hain usse college dikha raheha, shes a sweet girl
m=tu mili usse??
mu=ya..kya name hain yes nandini
c=manik, something cracked in my head
m=kya hua??
c=yeh ladki, navya alya ki friend, she is new here aur we have harshad with us..
nandini and navya were walking towards the principals college when some boys stopped their way.
na=kya chahiye tumhe harshad??
navya said with an irritated look. nandini was confused watching all these
h=relax navya, mujhe tumse kuch nahi chahiye but yes, new student, first day at college so ragging to must ha right??
na=dekho harshad, please.. meri friend ko in sabme mat ghasito samjhe??
h=chill yar navya, I can very well see that ke tumhari yeh friend is a behenji after all so usse usiki class ka koi ragging dunga and u cant stop me. Ragging sabko face karna parta hain, maine bhi kiya tha, tumne bhi sabko karna parta hain
n=navya yeh kya bolraha ha? ragging matlab..
na=nandu.. woh actually
h=are tum ghabraw mat its nothing tuff. tum chalo main batata hu
meanwhile alya mukti and others were looking for navya and nandini.
al=I should have known ke yeh harshad zarur nandini ko ragging keliye leke jayega
mu=aur navya akele harshad ko tackle nahi kar paegi.
al=we should check the basketball court cause most of the time harshad wahipar raggings karte hain.
Everybody were laughing and shouting in the court. nandini had to walk over a table which was not so much wide holding a bunch of heavy books and that too wearing pencil heel sandles. all these things were new for her mostly because she was not used to wearing heels. navya was trying to help nandini get down but some of the bimbos which used to be with harshad had block navya's way holding her hands.
na=harshad please..esa mat karo.. woh gir jayegi..
h=come on nandini u can do it..
nandini wanted to run from there but she knew it was not the solution so agreed for this dare. the table was long but not so wide , moreover she couldnt see infront properly as she had to hold a bunch of heavy books. her hands were aching and legs were shaking because of those heels. harshad smiled wickedly and gestured one of the boys standing on the other side of the table. the boy nodded and poured a bit water on some of the points of the table.
na=nandu sambhalke..
n(to herself)=ayippa..please help me. please bachalo.
the voices around her was making her even more confused and at one point her her foot slipped and the voices around her began to shout even more
na=nandu..
nandini palmed her face, she didnt want to feel the pain of falling down and all those teases by the students around her. But to her surprise there was complete silence around her and she didnt also feel hitting the ground. she slowly moved her hands and opened her eyes.. to her surprise her eyes met the most attractive eyes she had ever seen. The boy was greek god she thought, his eyes were also fixed on her with no emotion. Both of them stared at eachother without any blink for sometime. after sometime nandini moved her gaze and the boy helped her get down. navya and alya took her from there as both of them now it was time for harshad to get a lesson and nandini should not winess all these on her very first day. while going from there nandini turned around and saw the boy was still looking at her.
Maniks POV
I was walking with cabir druv mukti alya when we heard screams from the basketball court. as soon as I reached there, god I should have known it.. Harshad and his ragging and this girl..what the this jerk is making her walk on the table.. shit she is about to fall but thank god I caught her on right time. Her face is covered with her hands. but she is so tiny. I must say she has very beautiful hair, hey yeh apne hath hata rahi hain.. and finally she looks at me. There is something different in her eyes.. she is scared, confused, nervous.. but those big eyes, chubby cheeks. we stare at eachother I dont know for how long.. but then what came into my mind I put her down and within a moment alya and navya took her along with them.
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Edited by MaNan_KaShian - 9 years ago

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@samiamalhotra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Wow awesome update...

Finally manan meet...

Love nandus family...

Love the binding of NanNavAly...

Waiting for your next update...

Please don't take so so so much time ...dear...

We eagerly waiting for updates...

Continue soon...