Hey hold on
I missed on some things..
I am really loving the bond between mukti,navya and ranbir...
Sure we all loved cabira but ranbir is also a treat to watch...
The way navya and mukti were horrified when they saw him to the way mukti broke down...it was so realistic and amazing and not to forget the way navya lashed out on him seeing mukti in that vulnerable state and the way he came on the airport...it was lovely
But i am just hating dhrulya...cant they ever get over their insecurities...its frustrating man...the way mukti had a outburst when they left was needed..
And when alya said to dhruv that no one cared when she was suffering from that eating disorder...well mukti was there with her...
I really wonder how manik used to tolerate her when they were in a relationship...HATS OFF TO MANIK...
But as you say old habits die hard...
And nyonika...she is so damn evil man...
But nevertheless loving ur story
And if u can please put some brains in the empty heads of dhrulya...
Fine i get it alya has some insecurities but what abt dhruv man???
Manik was always there with him , protecting him but no he thinks that manik was shadowing him...i mean what the hell...viase toh vo bohot sensible banta hai ab kya ho gaya ??!!!
But nevertheless loving ur story...
And yeah like someone suggested if you could also do something about the mystery of nandini's appa's pen ... I know it would be out of the blue thing in the ongoing track ...,but still if you could...
And yeah really loved the way mnaik said ohh thaaat...ROFL...
And seriously manik ...i mean THE MANIK MALHOTRA is jealous of navya ...hahahhhahahahahhaha...
Manan, navya, mukti and ranbir are really a treat to watch...
In love with them,this fanfic and your writing style...
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