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Kavyashree pradhan

@Kavyashree22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

I always love the title you give to your stories... but m gonna read this story later... waiting for devil update..
Love you..

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manik11

@manik11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Hiii dear...Thanks for pm...Awesome update...Song was very beautiful...This was a very beautiful story... Ending amazing... Loved it... Take care... Keep writing...

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lovePANI

@lovePANI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

I loved it when he said I can feel her pain as she is my soulmate.. Aww that touched my heart..

Manik awesome...

N that pic was cute..
Thank u
Keep smiling

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mehak_ahuja

@mehak_ahuja

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Just found this amazing TS... The story was so heart touching... Loved it...

Beautifully penned...

Thank u for sharing this mind blowing story...

😊

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ky2manan

@ky2manan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Such a fabulous story
Manik fell in love with her at first sight
She was so scared
Loved all the manan moments
She confessed
Their daughter is so cute ...aww
Family moment was amazing

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nandininiti

@nandininiti

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#86

sorry for late comment
but this was beautiful
it was emotional as well as cute ts
the way manik protect her show her his love
he fought with his frnds for her
And the last part where they forcefully take nandu
I was like oh shit! ab kya hoga
but manik came and saved her
And manan cute daughter
their family moment was so adorable
it was really amazing
do come up with more ts like this

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Heema Somani

@heemasomani

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Amazing update

manik is a spoil brat
nandu is a prostitute
her father is bad

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Sree

@Sreeja_babu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Firstly vry vry sry dear 4 late commenting...
Really nice TS..Loved it so much...
So emotional one...It ws really suprb...
Thnks so much dear 4 d pm...

Pyar kbhi bhi khi pe bhi ho jatha he...
Manan meet was extraordinary,,...
Nandu's past was so shcking..Poor soul suffered a lot...
Manik fall in luv vid her..Flashbck scene was awesum...
Really vry hpy dat it ended in a hpy note...
While started reading, i thought it will b end as tragedy...
I will bcum emotional vry soon..😉😉Hhaahaa
Acha hua sb teek tha...Awesum dear...

Lvd d way manik handled nandu...He made nandu agn live her lyf..
Nandu finally started trusting him...Manik's love s so deep..
It was fabulous dear..U nailed it very well...👏👏
Manik singing 4 nandu..Dat was fantastic...
D patience level of manik wa commendable...
He s ready 2 wait till d tym nandu accpts him her own...
Lvd his determination n confidence in his Love..
Manan cute momnts was so suprbb..Manan dancing...
Manik making nandu comfortable...Really awesum...

OMG!! Nandu in danger..Manik ke hote hue Nandu kaise pblm mein aa skthi?
Manik saved nandu fron all evils...Fabulous dear..
Last portion was so unxpctd n cute..Niharika s so cute..
Nandu s also safe..Feelin vry happy...
Manan n thier small family..Lvd it so much...
It was indeed an awesum stry dear..Do continue ur wrks dear...