Halves of the whole-A Manan FF Ch 2 Pg 10

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nandininiti

@nandininiti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

that was amazing
the sister bond was way too adorable
And aryamann comment was too good
poor mukhbhi were he'll nervous to meet each other
manik is so obsessed for nandu
the way he was counting time I kinda felt that he was some psycho... LOL just kidding
nandu already started hating malhotra
don't judge them nandu it will be ur future samurai
so nandu collided with hard wall
And lost in Brown eyes...
who he could be of course our manik
I loved ur this story too vats
update soon
And don't think of stopping it

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Sofiafarooq

@Sofiafarooq

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

It's amazing start of story.
And dear don't be upset I'm sure as story will progress ur readers also will increase.
Bcz ur story have guts to attract them.
So don't be sad and come with next update.
I'm sure just manan met in last update and now when manan will be around in story then readers will show their interest.
Trust me u r writing amazing.
Next part soon plz.

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@navk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

wow
beautiful update
loved it

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parimala94

@parimala94

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

love ths nandini-mukti bond!!...infact all four r so close!!...i really started liking ths story

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LUCKYRICKLY

@LUCKYRICKLY

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

mujhe aur bada waala post chahiye

mujhe eh chota laga,, aur achha bhi laga

next part juldy

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piyu008

@piyu008

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#86

mera MaNan finally mil he gye😛 isk cheesy na 😆

loved the bonding between nandu n mukti..

m falling for manik ka confidence ...manna pdega bande nu..

but he is kinda selfish to not think about his own brother .😕

anyways ..still I loved the chappy..

update soonish with loads of MaNan😃

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Sukanya

@Sukanyadhar12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Lovely part .

Continue soon .

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ky2manan

@ky2manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Amazing update
Loved it
Update soon

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etu

@etuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

hi, this story is also my res list... !!!!
& can you give me ur index link????
actually I started reading ur story slowly slowly... :(

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Sandhya098

@Sandhya098

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Posted: 9 years ago

#90

Hey dear... Sorry for commenting late... I was out of town... The update was super sweet... Love the sister bond... Muku was so nervous... Manik pov was superb...

Finally manan meet... So many questions did nandu know manik... How manik know nandu etc etc...

Please continue...

May be the story is just started that's why the response is not good but please wait... N write love to read more...

Thanks for the pm...

Continue soon...