#4 MANANSS: OUR WILD LOVE (Link to next thread PG-1) - Page 57

Awesome

Poor Rishab 😕

Awww Manik proposed Nandini that too in the hospital onlyonly 😃 😉

Liked the part

Updt soon

Wow.. nyc..

Omg.. So much in one part.. Awesome part..

Hello I'm back sorry for not commenting earlier exams are going on so i don't have much time for forums anyways lets come to the update all over it was nice "At a blink of an eye, it could all end... Someday our hearts will stop and our breath will cease... I was crumbling thinking how fragile life was, how easily someone could be taken away from you... That you could be holding the person you love one moment and she could be gone the next.

I loved Nandini and she loved me... All my life, I knew I had waited for her, longed for her... I had known loved and had been blessed by it...Who knew when the end would come along and sweep us away? I closed my eyes" i like this lines it shows the depth of your writing and skills.
And two three positive points i have seen in your writing would love to mention
1 The dialogoue delivery is too good, conversation part really sounds good they doesn't sounds like cheesy or extra emotional something type which i hate the most so yeah dialogues are awesome.

2 It is about the character's sheds i haven't seen any villain in your fiction and that's a good thing every person has little goodness inside them, people are in gray sheds even in real life. So i like the way you handled shreya, aryamann and rishab character's. Specially shreya !
So again it shows your maturity, how mature you're when it comes to writing, its a good thing every person has some reason behind there deeds and you should not blame one person for everything. So that was all i like about your writing. So all over good job
Keep writing
Stay blessed

Nice update dear...loved it very much...so he gave the ring also... Will be waiting fr next... Cont. Soon...

Wow awesome amazing update...
Rishab went to coma...
All were soo sad...
Manan were soo cute Manik proposed her aww...
Nandu was soo happy...
Jst hope everything goes well..
Luved it...
Waiting for nxt..
Thnx for pm...
Update soon..

Awww such a cuty update...
Manan nd der beautiful love for each other...
Manik's proposal...

Plz wake up rishab i so want rishab also happy plz wake him up soon


Plzzz update new part soon

ahhh. rishab ka accident. shit. so unexpected na. Poor rishab. ohh he is in coma. Ria is seriously love him.. Oh .. Manik n nandini ki individual rishab se baate is just mindblowing. I so loved it. Ohh..manik proposed nandu. yeye. That's amazing. manik proposal is great.. Ohho ria Is divorced . ohh wow.. she is always there for rishab... Amazing update. waiting for next update eagerly. thanks for pm. Stay blessed. keep smiling .

Awesome update I hope Nandhini dad agree on Manik proposal abt marriage.