#8//The Ex's At War//Ch24 Pg 126 & LINK FOR THREAD #9 ON PG 1 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Promo. promo.
About transition, make it permanent this time.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
best of luck for new thread :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Sujal Congratzzz for the new thread and once again thank you for giving us such a wonder ful story.
I didnt new regarding the new thread tats y i m reposing ma comment🤣🤣🤣.

Y did you edit it the previous one was very good😭😭😭😭 i liked the first one.

Coming to the update first i liked the reunion of manan coz it was perfect according to the time it was not too early nor too lagging. was missing manini anyway the chapter it self was ex's make love which was perfect as always. In future updates i want manans family🤣🤣🤣🤣 time like manik nandini and our own manini. I m not saying that before there was nothing like that, its just that i felt like it would more fruitful with these three alone.

Loved the chapter to the core👏👏👏👏. Manini wala big kisshey and huggie🤗🤗🤗 to you for giving the lovely update. The more i learn the chpters the more i m falling in love with your story just loving it to the core.

Keep updating. want a promo for the next part pleashhh😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Sujal Plz continue with the story it is k with chotu drifts and rifts coz real life is also something like tat. So basically i feel it is good to continue plz pleash dont end it i cant live without manini and your story in chotu sa time it has become a part of our life so pleash dont end it continue with the rollar coaster ride.😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Hey conczzz. ...for new thread...and thanku for all the lovely updates...I am really hokked bokked and cooked by ur story🤣...I want u 2 continue ur story I know it will be nt bed of roses bt it will be interesting 2 see hw will they overcome wach situation and be together forever...
U can use certain things to continue ur story if u want to...
1...some romantic moment and ofcause manini interpting them embarrassing them
2...rewa some evil plan against manan
3...manik tit for tat for rewa
4...nandni's mother discorage nandini for being with manik...she doesn't want them togther so she will emotional blackmail nandni...
5...manik sassumaa mannaoo act start
6...nandini again try 2 make manik parents closer
7...manik forgiving her mother
8...manik want there parents together
9...u can add some new characters in the story. ...like some guy name ------ nandini's childhood friend with whom nandini's mother want to hook her...we can get 2 see jealous manik
10...there can be many difficulty of living together again after 6 month there life hav change
11...nandni wants 2 do work bt again her pride has come in btw and she doesn't want 2 work with manik to avoid previous problem bcoz of job...bt manik disagreement in it
12...nandini again should get pregnant
13...manik extra care for nandini boz he doesn't want ro loose baby...that will irrited nandini

U can use any thing u r so gud writer u must hav many more ideas...bt just continue this story. ...my sunday is nt like sunday without ur stories😉 we can manage this chotu rifts bt in end ever thing should be ok they should be together forever and ever
Edited by Nainasadhwani - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
congratsss dear ... you deserve it..
yeah you should continue .. we are waiting to read manini baby.. n manan embaressing moments.. :p
nd thankgod ldl epilouge is yet to come.. pleasee manik ko zinda krdoo... pls
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
U can give a happy ending if u want par it a treat to read the problem they will face together as manan in growing up are cute little manini n dont separated them Abe they are meant to be together forever n if u want u can end on happy note that is okay but with a promise from u to start a new story with happy ending one
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
new thread😳
congrats😃
finally manan are toghther
what🤢🤢heading towards ending...A BIG NO
please itni jaldi end mat karo yaar😕
no separation track
baki kuch bhi chalega
send the trio to macau❤️


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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Hey gal congrats for ur new n much deserved thread. N pl don't end d story soo sooon. I mean not dat u need to show romance always but wht I like more is d situations coming up in their lives n d way thy handle it,for or against each other. M sure u can add more to d story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
u r such an awesome writer ...
this is an amazing story why do u want to end it ...
first let's see some good moments of manan n off course their princess manini
plz dont end it so soon akeeady u hav ended lips do die
now plz dont end this story ...
it's a request

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