Manan dark SS: lord of underworld. ch-6 @ pg17

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello there
M here with my first story on our dear Manan


Prologue

Manik: is everything prepared??

Cabir: yes, as per our plan everything is under control don't worry buddy.

Manik: I don't want any single scratch on her body Cabir. Be careful about that. You know me I will not tolerate that Cabir.

aryaman: Manik don't worry we will be careful about that nothing will go wrong. Everything is planned when Nandini will land in India our people will kidnap her from airport only. There is no way she can escape from our people.

Manik: okie then. Go as per plan and Cabir please send a bedmate for me and this time some more hotness should be there haan.

Cabir: winking at Manik, I know what do you mean.

Manik: haan to ja na Lhasa kya hai??



So here it is..
Let me know if u liked or not??
Should I continue this or not??
Jaldi Bata dena re deva.. 😛



Charecters scratch : pg-2
Chapter 1: page 3

Chapter 2: page 5
chapter 3: page 8
Chapter 4: page 10
Chapter 5: page 13.
Chapter6: page 17
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting concept
Would love to read more...
Do cont soon...
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Keep smiling always 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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. Manik kidnapping nandu... Dark manan ...looking forward for next
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nice concept wating for update
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nyc concept. ..
plsss do continue. ...
update jaldi jaldi... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Do continue soon..I love dark ffs
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Omg..dark ff..i jz lv to read it...plzzz continue soon
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plz cont soon...pm me plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Charecter scratch:

Manik Malhotra: King of underworld. No one dares to mess with him. Gets what wants any way. Have 2 best friend and bodyguard. Spends every night with new hook up. No girl can got pleasure from him the girl will be lucky who will get from him.

Nandini murthy:bubbly chulbully girl. Hot and sexy word made for her only. coming India for music study.
Have brother and grandfather as family. Parents died in accident.


Cabir and aaryaman: best friend of Manik and bodyguards of him. Cares about Manik a lot. Stands by his side always.

Rishabh: Nandini's brother. Don of under world.

Mr.murthy: grand father of Nandini and Rishabh. Don of underworld. Wants to be a king and hates Manik a lot.


Further charecters will be disclosure in story as it will proceed.

Till then Tata take care bye bye
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing c.s...
Sounds interesting...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

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