Kaise Mujhe...:The Perfect Mismatch-A Manan RomCom Ch21-A B(@119 122) - Page 29

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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter - 10

Manik stopped in front of a mobile shop.
M: Come...I have to get my Iphone repaired.
They went inside. The owner of the shop recieved a big shock as he was the same person to whom last night Manik has narrated his sad tale.
ShopOwner: Bhai u...Bhabhi also is here... Ur driver has just called me...I gave him my address.
M: Wo actually my cellphone is not working.
S: No problem sir. (he hands the phone to one of his staffs).
He noticed the caption on Manik's...read it allowed...and gave Manik a 'I really feel pity for u look' but unfortunately Nandini noticed it.
N: Do u hav any problem with the caption??
S: (He was really scared) No...no...no...Bhabhi u r really very beautiful.
M: Show me a brand new IPHONE.
S: Sir it will get repaired... no serious problem.
M: Its ok...but I hav to buy a new one.
S: Ok...IPhone 6 is the latest...which colour Bhaiya???
Manik looked at Nandini.
M: Which colour??
N: U decide...why r u asking me??
M: Now since u hav to use it...u only choose the colour.
N: U r buying that for me...please don't I am not having that huge some now.
M: Stop being so formal...u r my wife and I can do atleast this much for you.
N: No please...this is really not needed.
M: Please yaar...I insists.
(To the shopkeeper... Give me silver one).
N: No Golden.
M: This is good...I was telling na...don't be this formal...u can return my money with 1.5% intetest per hour later on...I won't mind...take as much time as u want.
N: Seriously... I m not going to return even a cent of it.
She takes her new IPhone and rushes out. Manik goes to the shopkeeper to pay the bill.
S: Sir you really love her...isn't it??? Even in her condition u r with het...tolerating her with love and care...taking all her tantrums.
M: Achhi hai buri h...jaisi bhi hai...meri patni...meri devta h.
S: I m proud of u sir...Please accept 30% discount from myside...please don't deny it.
After paying the bill and checking his phone... he returned to the car.
N: What took u this long?
M: Wo I wasn't getting the bill slip of my favorite colour.
N: Good man...the fruits of my company can be seen in u...I mean trying to be funny...Not Bad.
M: If u r done with ur praises...are u ready to meet nani...What u will do??
N: What do u mean by it??? What I must do??
M: Arre I told you na...she is really strict.
N: Help me na...what I must do??
M: Ok...listen to me carefully...1st of all cover ur face with the ghunghat...then as soon u see her bend into her knees and touch her feets...U know how to touch the feets...??
N: Whats the talent in touching feet...??
M: Everything needs a talent idiot... newly wedded don't touch the feets normally.
N: (panickly) How??
M: Jaan...whats the need to worry when u have a sarvagun sampan (who masters in everything) and caring hubby...don't panic... I will tell u but what's my benefit...being a businessman...I don't do anything just like this.
N: Ok what do u want??
M: Now...I don't know...ok...I will tell u later on...till then u write on this paper what u r saying... its a kind of deal...so that u cannot backout later on.

N: Ok done...now tell me.
M: Arre told u na...I will tell u later on what I want.
N: Idiot...tell me what I should do??
M: Bend in her legs...press it from toes to knee 5 times nicely.
N: Okay...( she was really nervous ).
M: Come lets go...we r at out destination.
Nandini quickly convered her face with her pallu. They got down... It was a beautiful mansion.
M: Come
Nandini starts moving in the other direction as her face was covered.
M: Are u not coming with me??
N: Man...why r u standing behind me??(she raised her ghunghat).
Manik held her hand and they entered the mansion... Nandini has again covered her face. What all she could see was a lady's infront of her. She bent down and started doing as Manik had taught her.
L: Who are u??? (she screamed).
Hearing which to more people entered.
M: (whispered in Nandini's ears) Nani is standing on the right of u.
Nandu bent down and took her blessings in the same ways.
D: Dhudho Nahao Phulo Phalo (May u get blessed with a child soon).
Nandini blushed for the reason unknown. Dadi removed her ghunghat...
D: U r so pretty...what's the need of hiding ur face.
Nandini noticed her Nani she was wearing a leggings and kurti.She gives an angry glare to Manik realizing that he was pulling her leg.
M: Nandini...I told u na...I Nani is super cool.
D: I know what u must have told her...so don't pretend now.
M: Hehe...(he takes her blessings and side hugs her) Jaan this my Nani...and Nani this is Nandini...my jaan.
Nandini this is Aliya and baby...
D: BABY...??
M: Baby nhi...bhabhi Kaliya Bhabhi this is Nandini.
A: What u just said...Kaliya????
Dhruv: Wow...bhai nice name...!!
A: Like seriously... u both r very bad...I won't talk to either of u.
Nandini turns to look at Dhruv.Dhruv comes running ang hugs her.Manik fumed...u know why??
Dh: Doraemon...uuu...here??
D: Yes bade...she is chote's wife.
Nandini was hell confused... Manik noticed it.
M: Arre...why r u judging by name...by seeing u can anyone tell that u r Mrs. Manik Malhotra...no right???
Similarly He (pointing at Dhruv) is Bade my elder cousin and I m chotte...I know it doesn't looks but it is.
M: Waise Alya u went to the doctor... everything normal. I was not expecting u here.
A: Ya everything normal... and man u called me 2 hrs ago...and don't know what took u so long to cover 20 minutes distance.
M: Wo...
D: U all will do all the conversation here only...come inside.
M: Dhruv u know her??

PRECAP
D: Finally ur dream of becoming Mrs. Malhotra has been fulfilled...Congratulations.
N: Please don't dig my pain.
Hit like and comment if want an update tomorrow!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: abhilashaS

hey used my idea tooo ...thanx for that ...😳

luv u
your reader,
abhilasha


Thanks for the beautiful name...it was worth using. 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Prachi55


Thanks for the beautiful name...it was worth using. 😊 😊


most well i am happy that u considered it...😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey there... I love the update... Dadi was so cool manik was pulling nandu leg ...love the bade chote concept... Dhruv n nandu knows each other... Aaliya is dhruv wife means manik bhabhi...
Update soon eagerly waiting for the next part

Eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sandhya098

Hey there... I love the update... Dadi was so cool manik was pulling nandu leg ...love the bade chote concept... Dhruv n nandu knows each other... Aaliya is dhruv wife means manik bhabhi...

Update soon eagerly waiting for the next part

Eagerly waiting...


Yup!! Aliya is Manik's bhabhi...bechari Nandini faltu ka pareshan ho rhi thi.
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Posted: 9 years ago
I read your ff often whenever I get time dea I am hell busy now adays with exams and I too have to complete my own stories in meantime so thats why I necer got the time to read comfortably but whenever I got time its just limited not manage to comment and I can understand your situation being a writer, when we guys work hard taking our time from our busy schedule but never got a proper response it pissed at hell..if I am saying pissed..i mean it girl...and I think its first time I am comnenting its really a nice story and I really love dadi mas character..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shaperai22

I read your ff often whenever I get time dea I am hell busy now adays with exams and I too have to complete my own stories in meantime so thats why I necer got the time to read comfortably but whenever I got time its just limited not manage to comment and I can understand your situation being a writer, when we guys work hard taking our time from our busy schedule but never got a proper response it pissed at hell..if I am saying pissed..i mean it girl...and I think its first time I am comnenting its really a nice story and I really love dadi mas character..


I know ek writer ka dard ek writer hi smajh skta h.
😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

awsome...loved it ...superb update and yaar maine toh humesha comment kiya hai 😕😕par phir bhi sorry...😊😊

S: No problem sir. (he hands the phone to one of his staffs).
He noticed the caption on Manik's...read it allowed...and gave Manik a 'I really feel pity for u look' but unfortunately Nandini noticed it.
N: Do u hav any problem with the caption??
S: (He was really scared) No...no...no...Bhabhi u r really very beautiful.


omgg... aise lagraha tha abhi nandini uspe jhapte gi aur usse cook kar ke kha jaye gi...🤣.aur bichara manik kita embaressed feel karraha hoga...manme soch raha hoga "kyun??why me??aapko mein hi mila tha duniya ke saare paatniyon ko baadla leene ke liye jop isse mere gale tang diya..."🤣

N: No Golden.
M: This is good...I was telling na...don't be this formal...u can return my money with 1.5% intetest per hour later on...I won't mind...take as much time as u want.
N: Seriously... I m not going to return even a cent of it.

hayeee...mein sacchi bole rahi hun prachi tum mujhe sacchi mein heart attack de dogi i mean yeh manik to banks se bhi bereham nikla...i mean 1.5% intetest per hour ...like seriously...are shakshat kubeer bhi itna interest nahi chuka payenge...😉😉🤣

S: Sir you really love her...isn't it??? Even in her condition u r with het...tolerating her with love and care...taking all her tantrums.
M: Achhi hai buri h...jaisi bhi hai...meri patni...meri devta h.
S: I m proud of u sir...Please accept 30% discount from myside...please don't deny it.

ha ha ha ha...🤣🤣omg...this part totally suits the line "tedhe hai par mere hai"


Nandu bent down and took her blessings in the same ways.
D: Dhudho Nahao Phulo Phalo (May u get blessed with a child soon).
Nandini blushed for the reason unknown. Dadi removed her ghunghat...
D: U r so pretty...what's the need of hiding ur face.
Nandini noticed her Nani she was wearing a leggings and kurti.She gives an angry glare to Manik realizing that he was pulling her leg.
M: Nandini...I told u na...I Nani is super cool.
D: I know what u must have told her...so don't pretend now.
M: Hehe...(he takes her blessings and side hugs her) Jaan this my Nani...and Nani this is


manik kaBHI nahi sudhar skta ...ha ha ha...🤣🤣usne nandu ka popat hi banadala...total syappa!!!


ok ...now i will only like to say never stop writing dusron ke liye na sahi but plz mere liye ...i just love your story to the core sachhi...!!abhilasha promise ...waiting for your next update ...


your reader,
abhilasha

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: abhilashaS


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">awsome...loved it ...superb update and yaar maine toh humesha comment kiya hai 😕😕par phir bhi sorry...😊😊</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">S: No problem sir. (he hands the phone to one of his staffs).
He noticed the caption on Manik's...read it allowed...and gave Manik a 'I really feel pity for u look' but unfortunately Nandini noticed it.
N: Do u hav any problem with the caption??
S: (He was really scared) No...no...no...Bhabhi u r really very beautiful.</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">omgg... aise lagraha tha abhi nandini uspe jhapte gi aur usse cook kar ke kha jaye gi...🤣.aur bichara manik kita embaressed feel karraha hoga...manme soch raha hoga "kyun??why me??aapko mein hi mila tha duniya ke saare paatniyon ko baadla leene ke liye jop isse mere gale tang diya..."🤣</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">N: No Golden.
M: This is good...I was telling na...don't be this formal...u can return my money with 1.5% intetest per hour later on...I won't mind...take as much time as u want.
N: Seriously... I m not going to return even a cent of it.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">hayeee...mein sacchi bole rahi hun prachi tum mujhe sacchi mein heart attack de dogi i mean yeh manik to banks se bhi bereham nikla...i mean1.5% intetest per hour ...like seriously...are shakshat kubeer bhi itna interest nahi chuka payenge...😉😉🤣</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">S: Sir you really love her...isn't it??? Even in her condition u r with het...tolerating her with love and care...taking all her tantrums.
M: Achhi hai buri h...jaisi bhi hai...meri patni...meri devta h.
S: I m proud of u sir...Please accept 30% discount from myside...please don't deny it.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">ha ha ha ha...🤣🤣omg...this part totally suits the line "tedhe hai par mere hai"</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Nandu bent down and took her blessings in the same ways.
D: Dhudho Nahao Phulo Phalo (May u get blessed with a child soon).
Nandini blushed for the reason unknown. Dadi removed her ghunghat...
D: U r so pretty...what's the need of hiding ur face.
Nandini noticed her Nani she was wearing a leggings and kurti.She gives an angry glare to Manik realizing that he was pulling her leg.
M: Nandini...I told u na...I Nani is super cool.
D: I know what u must have told her...so don't pretend now.
M: Hehe...(he takes her blessings and side hugs her) Jaan this my Nani...and Nani this is</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">manik kaBHI nahi sudhar skta ...ha ha ha...🤣🤣usne nandu ka popat hi banadala...total syappa!!!</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">ok ...now i will only like to say never stop writing dusron ke liye na sahi but plz mere liye ...i just love your story to the core sachhi...!!abhilasha promise ...waiting for your next update ...</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">your reader,</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">abhilasha</font>

Hey...my note was not at all for u.
Love u yaar.
U never fails to make me feel special by ur comments.
Thanks...u really inspire me.
With Love,
Prachi
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Prachi55

Hey...my note was not at all for u.
Love u yaar.
U never fails to make me feel special by ur comments.
Thanks...u really inspire me.
With Love,
Prachi



luv u too loads...😳😳😳

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