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Emotional one...

wow!!! though it ws emotional bt i jst luvd it
u penned it so beautifully
ol his emotions everythng ws jst amazing n song is one of my fvrtes n it ws apt fr dis story
im in luv wid ol ur wrks
update ur other stories soon n ol d bst fr ur xms
lots of love
sanaa 😊

Awesome & emotional os...

That was really beautiful..
Did dhruv planned it all to sepetate them..
Please make it a TS and reunite them..
It's a request..

Res

Unres

Omhg! OMHG OMHG!!!!
Mera name!!! Lol

Mein sochi jao ki why this idiot isnt sending pm.

He threw the beer bottle in anger which the very next shattered into pieces just like his hear

( this creaked me badly! Behena beer ne nahi chadhti... Hahahhahaa!! Remember ashna ko bhi nahi chadhi thi)

oon ..or 7 rupees na doon ..its your money for your hard work you should get it .." nandni was stucked on her point while the vendor sighed in annoyance

( lol! Now this is sth... See when we talked about it it was like a shitty lame idea and see how good it looks... But yeh this was honest nandini! Wah mere sher! Chha gaya tu)

Nice and beautifully weitten sunshine!

Ps- CONTINUE SOONISH! Lol!



PSs- orchids ke spelling sahi karle mein teko maar dalungi!!! Its orchids not orkets!!!

very emotional story

Great emotional update yaar,
loved it.

Nice and emotional os...

Awsum update dear

loved it

very emotional

thanks for the pm

nd cum soon we r really mission u a lot

anyways all the best for your exam

love you nd God bless you dear