#4 Vivah MaNan FF/PART 23A-PG 118/ Thread 5 link PG 1 - Page 5

Awww... Indeed it was a naughty update...

NOT ONLY NAUGHTY BUT ALSO BOLD BHI HOE GAYA NANDINI...
MANIK KO BARAYA WO KITNA TRUST KARTI HA...
HOPE SAB THIK HOE...
NEXT PART PLZ ASAP

Awesome..like always
👏 👏

Originally posted by: assuuu

Cngrats fr the new thred dr...
Happy to see bold nd
mature nandini...
responsible manik..
everything is perfect...
awesome update...
manan moments r cute..
Nd beautiful. ..
nandini is so understanding...
Manik tooo...
Waiting fr the special firsts of der lyf...
Cntinue soon. ..
Y r u nt pm the updates...

Nxt tym se plzz pm...

Thank you so much..
And dear this time i didnt semd any PM as i was busy...
Sorry for that

congo fr new thread

It was So effing NICE..like seriously..!! Bahot refreshing type episode tha..& yess CONGRATULATIONS for your new thread...i just want to read more of you..!!

Starting with it...That morning scene when manik woke up & said this abt nandu tht "koi dekh lega toh" this cracked me up..haha..!! Then after tht...in dinind table scene..when nandu was admiring manik..like a love struck teenager...the details & discription...i felt like you r admiring parth instead...hehe..! Coz even i admire him tht way sometimes.. Sorry if u felt bad but i dont intend to..!! AND they Returning back..my babies r gonnna miss each other so much aww..!!

Anyways.., story has to move on for them to become one..one day..!! Then Tht Backyard Scene...Kaise likh leti ho aise dialogs... Haeee..It was So Romanticc..!! I was imagining my kyy wala MaNan in tht...!! Dialogs one after the other...So beautiful it was..!! And Manik will tell about his first kiss to his children haha..!! I wanted a backyard kiss.. & i love Manin tht he is so sincere about his responsilities for nandini..warna aise ladke aaj ki date mein at this age...very few.. !

Mujhe backward ke dialogs bahot achhe lage..!! UPDATE SOONN..!!
God Bless U

Originally posted by: Boomchelesa

It was So effing NICE..like seriously..!! Bahot refreshing type episode tha..& yess CONGRATULATIONS for your new thread...i just want to read more of you..!!

Starting with it...That morning scene when manik woke up & said this abt nandu tht "koi dekh lega toh" this cracked me up..haha..!! Then after tht...in dinind table scene..when nandu was admiring manik..like a love struck teenager...the details & discription...i felt like you r admiring parth instead...hehe..! Coz even i admire him tht way sometimes.. Sorry if u felt bad but i dont intend to..!! AND they Returning back..my babies r gonnna miss each other so much aww..!!

Anyways.., story has to move on for them to become one..one day..!! Then Tht Backyard Scene...Kaise likh leti ho aise dialogs... Haeee..It was So Romanticc..!! I was imagining my kyy wala MaNan in tht...!! Dialogs one after the other...So beautiful it was..!! And Manik will tell about his first kiss to his children haha..!! I wanted a backyard kiss.. & i love Manin tht he is so sincere about his responsilities for nandini..warna aise ladke aaj ki date mein at this age...very few.. !

Mujhe backward ke dialogs bahot achhe lage..!! UPDATE SOONN..!!
God Bless U

Awww... 😳
Thank you so much dear...
Appreciate your comments and views..
And yes about admiring Manik.. I think i thought of parth only...
😉 😆
He is the inspiration..

Awesome update

congo fo the new thread
u deserve much more
coming to the update,lyk always it was very gud
really liked how nandini handled manik
and they both r so cute
waiting for the next update
continue soon 😊

Iss first time ka toh hume bhi intezaar rahega,
awesome girl,
love it and congratulations for this new thread, another success, yess...