#4//Lips Do Lie//Epilogue Pg 118 n THANKYOU NOTE ON Pg 146 on 15/3/16 - Page 71

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Posted: 9 years ago
It's true that you can't control the events around you...all you can do is not get affected by them...you are blessed with such an amazing talent...don't get discouraged due to some people...believe me...your story is one amoung the best stories I have read so far...I think you have done justice to the tiltle..."lips do lie"...the way manik lied to her even when he was dying...that part ...even though it felt incomplete...but somehow that was everything...!!! Please don't get discouraged...stay positive...😊...!!!👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
Okay sorry but I read the chapter just now..and your note too..yes I understand it's pretty discouraging..n I understand what u must be feeling..
But here I would like to say something.! Don't think that am saying this because of that note..
I would really like to applaud youu..because I have read your work..! And personally I love your ideas your thoughts! All are different from another!! Storyline of all stories has been amazing!!! U should be proud of yourself that u are so versatile! When it comes to writing! They say na that if one hates a villain in a movie na then that villain excels in his job! The same way your storyline was such which made people to dislike u..I won't say to hate u! Coz it's a manan story after all..!but This means you did an amazing job!!!!! So you should really be proud of your self!
And yes You are my favourite writer!! Coz just like we watch videos on repeat na the same way I read your previous chapters again and again! And your stories just drive me crazy! So keep writing keep shining..!😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey seriously nobodys intentions were to hurt u ...atleast from my side...a big no... the thing is you have potrayed the charecters so lively that they have actually become real for us readers ...though they dont exist in reality...and manik and nandini...they r the main charecters of the story so if anyone of them also is hurt we readers actually feel it ,feel their pain and u know each time i read any emotional update of your after reading it i find my cheeks drenched with tears ...this is how i am attached with your stories...we readers have been reading your stories for so long that now we r attached to some charecters so much that we dont want loose them...and here in LDL u actually made the lead die in the end ...which we readers didnot want...that is why people not able to control their emotions reacted in such a way ...i am not saying it correct as it is not but...as being a writer you yourself can understand right that when a persone is attached to someone though it exists or not...it becomes so close ones heart and mind that we r reluctant to loose it under any circumstances...that resulted in the form of adverse reactions and bashing which actually was not the intention ...so plz dont feel bad ...and i myself am sorry...hope u will forgive us😔
your reader,

abhilasha

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey...I didn't comment yet coz I wanted to read epilogue.. I have faith in you...you can never...I say..never disappoint me... I m waiting eagerly for epilogue.. !! Just one request...post it sooonish
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sneha_glamarous

Everything was going good...bit y did u killed him...
U made me cry...

Nandu was soo helpless to see manik..Marte marte bhi he lied...

Nandu was all broken...


And yes want an epilogue and ho sake to ekta ban kar
manik ko zinda kar dena please..

as u haven't write it that he died...it just that u created d auroma like that...but i think hospital part can b shown n miracle cn b there...

n plzzz do write epilogue n sequel too...plzzz



hey i think in my comment i just said u made me cry...which i meant was by reading d story i was crying bciz it was very emotional scene...

i don't know if u will hv hurted by this or not...

but my intentions were not to do so...if i had hurted u...I'm very sorry...

but i love ur stories veryyy much n i don't hate ur stories... do keep on writing...

N WAITING FOR EPILOGUE
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Plz don't stop ur ff
I am waiting for the next part
Plz plz plz plz Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
I would still say d same here . still upset over the way story shaped up.! And sadly wouldn't hv read it if i knew it in d beginning.! We all knw how it feels to not hv any of them in d story we faced similar situation in ky2 when manik was shwn almost dead in dat bomb blast. Sorry if it hurt you but i guess as a reader u would relate who have been reading this syory for months now. As a writer its still not that hurtful bcs its you who writes it n knws whats gonna happen but for those who have been reading it for months it's really disappointing..! Way too much :(
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hy love u r stories ... plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
u wrote down beautifullyyy...phenomenal...
it touched...
aiyooo when Nandu was begging him not to close his eyes n kissed damnnn it was so so kya kahun...
true love yaaa...
just amaze me...

they both were madly irrevocably insensibly love each other...

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Posted: 9 years ago
hey mene aisa nhi kha k muje story pdhake bura lga ya fir i hate you ...


i only says dnt do that ... & jo log ye sb kr rhe h vo sb tumhari koi bhi story pdhne k lyk nhi h ... coz its ur work tumhe jo shi lge tum kro ... i love pliz sad mat hona lyf me kbhi khushi to kbhi gum ... tera sath na chodenge hum

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