I love you for all that you are ... Chap 5 pg 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys
I am up with my first ff
"I love you for all that you are"
This is my first try
It's on manan


This story is about a damaged and imperfect girl
Who does not know how to live life
Who is different from all

And a popular guy
Who is looking for a perfect gift
And has his own check list for his girl

Let see how they meet and fall in love
PROLOGUE:page 1
Character :pg 1
Note : pg 2
chapter 1 :pg 2
Chapter 2. Pg 2
Chapter 3: pg 3
chapter 4 : pg 3
Chapter 5: pg 4
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Guys I am very upset
With you all
I got no response
But still I won't give up
here is




PROLOGUE:

It's was the first day of space
New Academic year with new students .Space was good in music, dance, science .As it was the first day
Fab5 were ragging and bullying all new students in space And when manik was passing by he was a new girl with lots of booking in her hand and wereing glass he thought of a evil plan a discuss with fab5.
Fab5 went to her.

Manik: hey you
The girl just ignored them
Seeing this fab5 got angry
And cabir and muki blocked her
Girl: hey ,move away
Cabir: NO... wat will you do
The girl just push cabir and he fell down. Before anyone could react she went away. .. . .
The girl went a bit far and turn and said
Girl : I do this every time if you come in my way... So be aware
Saying this she left
Seeing this fab5 was angry
Guy please comment
Please

Edited by rachitad - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
Interesting prologue...
Wud luv 2 read more...
Plz continue soon...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4

nandini murthy :18 year old ...smart ,stubborn, lonely girl... studying science in space...has a bitter past but still didn't gave up ,always ready to fight...craving for love but scared to be loved or to love... dose not talk much and always into her books...never shares her felling to anyone or also can say has no one to share ...has no friends and only family is her 13 year old brother rishabh who can't speak and had some wired disorder...her past doesn't leave her but keep rishabh away for it... She used to live in USA but now came to Mumbai for rishabh treatment and her studies...she has a grandmother whom she used to call amms but after her parents death she left 8 year old nandini and 3 year old rishabh to USA and went to old age ashram in Mangalore...she use send money for them but that was not enough, they need love and care which they never got... as nandini is now 18 she thougt that now she does not need to depend on her amms so came to Mumbai and earns for her and rishabh...

Manik malhotra: 19 year old...handsome popular guy son of rich businessman but stays with his mom whom his call by name...does not consider them as family...foe him his family is fab 5 cabir his bro, dhruv his buddy, mukti his tom boy sis and alya his besty ... bullies people cause he is in darkness and broken but does not know that other are also damaged like him or maybe more... hate his mom ... believe in give and take relationship... music is his life and love plays guitar...want a perfect girlfrind...



MUKTI VARDHAN... Mukti vardhan: a tomboyish girl with hot sexy personality! She is not lyk alya who will once slap boys for messing with her.. she will make sure to make them suffer. She has too much pain in her heart She is open only to Fab 5 her. Music is her love. Plays electric guitar


Alya saxena: hot, sexy stylish diva of SPACE ACADEMY she is arrogant and rude for the world she is a barbie doll half of the clg boys had a slap from her but still they rome around her just to impress he. Soul sis of mukti.plays piano


Dhruv vedant: the cutest guy with sweet personality buddy of manik He is lil naughty but not compare to rest of his frnds along with music he loves dancing too. plays guitar

Cabir dhawan aka cabira: handsome n the noutorist of all and big prankster n evil twin of mukti n mirror version of manik before manik can realize his own feelings cabir realizes it. A big time foodie.plays drums. and is a gay

Edited by rachitad - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Note

Hello friends
I am very upset With all of you here...
Here I am putting so much effort for this ff but I get hardly 1 reply ... I puts me down. ...
Guys please comment please
I motivates me
And if you wish I should not continue with this ff please tell me and I stop. ...cause I am writing this ff for u all readers and it you all don't like my story no use of writing it...
So please comment so I know if you like it or not

And soon I'll be up with part 1 of the story
Please read and comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Hey I try to add pic
But cont please help me
How to do it
Edited by rachitad - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7

Fab 5 were really angry

mukti: how could she .

manik: she will have to pay for what she did.

dhruv: but will we do

manik smiled evilly and looking and that said

cabir:i can sense something evil. and it's going to be fun

alya :not fun cabir but supper fun

...

other side the girl was sitting some corner of taress and reading her novel

fab 5 got split and stared finding her

alya ,mukti and dhruv went towards canteen and ground

and manki and cabir towards class room and auditorium

after almost 1/2 hr manik and cabir found her on taress

manik: hey you

but the girl dint reply. seeing this manik got angry and snatched her book and threw it away

girl: how dare you

manik: how dare I? how dare you push my friend, push cabir a member of fab 5

girl: cause he deserves it.

manik :youuu

and hold her arms tight with full frose and pulled her near the edge of taress

girl: you monster leave me

as she said that manik left her arms and she was about to fall but at end time he hold her hand

cabir: awww poor girl . manik she let me fall and you helping her.

manik: ooo come on for that she will tell sorry, right

and the girl just looked away.

cabir :hey you so much ego not good for you

just then manik notice her bag and eyed cabir . cabir went looked inside and found many books her id card

cabir :manik

manik was still holding her hand not letting sand nor letting her fall

manik: what

cabir: found something.

and showed the id card. manik pull her back

manik :ahhh what's your name nandini ,

reading the id card . nandini try to take it back but could not

cabir: now this will stay with us till you don't say sorry to us

saying this they disappear before nandini could react


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plz coment

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
Chapter 2
Hey guys see what we got" said cabir showing the id card
"And what will we do with this" mukti asked
Manik:We'll get her info with the help of this, and she won't get her id back untill tells sorry to us
Alya: so whats the plan?
Manik: smiple[and smiles evely]
he tells them the Plan
Mukti: that Sounds gr8.
Dhruv : But don't you think it's bit too much
cabir: come on Dhruv don't you know everthing is fair in love and war
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and other side nandini was burning with angry
How dare they l wont leave them
they have called hell for themself
they want me to tell them sorry. SORRY MY FOOT
Now you face real nandini and you will regret it
I hate you fab 5
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Cabir was in the college office and trying to find nandin info
And only thing he got to know is her name "Nandini Murty" and that she was since student and was on scholarship nothing more he could get
Manik: this is more that enough
Alya: guy she is scholarship student so it's going to be even more fun
Mukit: and I wait for it

Now manik was following Nandini without her notice




Guy please coment
I know its small update but i promise you give long update in this week

Edited by rachitad - 9 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#10
chap:3

manik was fowling nandini and she didn't notice him. nandini 1st went to library, but she was not allowed without id card, same happened when she tried to attend lecture. manik saw all this and was happy about his plan being successful and that when nandini notice him

nandini: so you did this

manik: hmmm yes, we did it.btw you are pretty smart hhnnaa. and before you ask why we did all this let me tell , cause you dint say sorry, tell us sorry and everything will be ok.

nandin: don't you think you speak a lot. I and sorry that to, to fab 5 no way

manik: ooo so sad if you don't say sorry you won't get your id card. tut tut tut poor girl will not able to go library and attend her classes. I feel so saw for you, but you what I can do anything till you tell us sorry.

nandini: you know what, go to hell

manik: and you know what, we'll break this ego of your in 2 days just in 42 hr and then you yourself will come begging for forgiveness. now you see the real fab 5

nandini: and i am dyeing to see fab 5

manik: that to you see in this 2 days, and mind you hate it

nandini: we'll see

**************************************************

soon the day end and everyone left for home.

nandin was leaving and there a big black car in front of her.

and fab 5 came out.

cabir: hey miss murty , need lift

nandini: no

mukti: come on we are not that bad, we are just trying to help you out

nandini: yeah right , and your car can fly

manik; what are you mad ,car and flying

nandini: you and helping me out is equal to cars flying, which is imposable get that , now move

and nandin went away

alya: she is smart, I don't think we'll able break her down

manik: don't worry tomorrow she will do whatever we say

dhruv: buddy what have you done

manik : just wait and watch

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nandini goes to one office

nandini: mr. shukla, I had talked about part time job for me.

mr.shukla: yeah ,I found one its managers job

nandini: manager?

mr.shukla: yeah , there's a upcoming singer, you have to manage him and his band

nandini: but I need part time job, not full time

mr.s: this is part time only , the band member are also studying so when are in college you can also go to your college

nan: whats the band name

mr.s: I forget, but think this will be best for you as they will pay you a good amount. they are ready to pay 5000 per day. and i don't think so let this chance go

nan: ok

mr.s: so ready

nan: yes

mr.s: ok this are papers you need to sing

nandini sing those paper goes. once she left mr.shukla call some one

person: is the work done.

mr.s:yes

p:ok you'll get your money

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guys plz comment and like my story

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