#7MaNan SS:Dheere Dheere LinkToThread8/Pg1 - Page 17

First toh, congrates for another thread mawara.. Update was..eeeh! What to say ekdum painful meri v dil phat jata agar thodi dair aur painful dialogues marti toh.. But trust me that 'aurat ki taqaat' na that brought smile ting wali and i gasped you name MAWARA.. Hehehe.. Wait, one thing kab se bolne wali thi but bhul gayi.. I just can't keep it so.. YOU JUST CHANGED GENDER AND NAME NA IN THE STORY i.e jack aka mawara..??? Please jhoot mat boliyo merese.. Anyways, that heaven wali baat..sometimes when my nose bleeding cross its peak i get fainted, but just once i got fainted when i was in 1styear of college and i guess its just a dream no heaven and hell.. During that time, trust me so many people asked me this story and mostly i get irritated.. THERE WAS BIG OCEAN WITH NO END AND ONE MAN IN A BOAT WEARING WHITE DRESS WAS WAITING FOR PEOPLE BUT I WAS THE ONLY ONE WHOM HE SAID NO.. Trust me it was just crazy hehe.. That man disappear at the edge of ocean and i was left alone there.. That time i don't remember when i gained my consciousness.. But trust me its like a dream.. So yeah, i believe these kind of dreams.. Anyways update was ekdum mawara style..

omg awsum update

simply amazing

Loved the update
nandini and Mr.Malhotra faceoff was superb.
Update was emotional.
U wrote nandini feelings so well.
Finally manik is safe now
waiting for next update
all the best for ur result.

nice update.
such an emotional update.
nice to see nandani as tigress.
jack is so cute.
he cannot see his jaglii bili cry.
nandani is so much scared because of this incident.
let's see what will manik and fan 5 now.
waiting for next part.
continue soon.

Awesome update.way u penned it was commendable. Hats off. Tiger's state was well penned. His protective words for his friends were mindblowing. Nandini's convo with manik's dad was well penned.cabir and jack's words for manik dad was mindblowing. Tiger and nandini's part was phenomenal. Cabir and nandini's part was mindblowing.Way tiger consoled nandini was phenomenal.loved it.manik's pov was well written. Way he consoled nandini was mindblowing. Jack's words for nandini was amazing and funny. Love their bond. If possible show more of their bond. Totally an beautifully update.loved it.eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.this story is getting interesting day by day. Love to read more

Awesome update...

awsmmm

superbbb

mindblowinggg

amazinggg

loved it very much

or emontional also