The not so nice Mr. Vampire- A Manan ff Chp 4 Pg 16

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Adeeba

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Her inner goddess is so flattered at Harshad .
Wonder what would happen if she sees Manik . ;)

I like the progress of your story .
Thankyou for the message .
-God bless

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Dua Arafat

@dua_arafat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Just Read Chapter 1 and this comment is for ch 1

Well even if it's slow... i loved it...

I know it will progress slowly and will be more interesting...

So Nandini a bookworm👍🏼 really different concept

well the name of the story shows itself as a different story

lagta hai authorities ne paise kharach kr liye😆

Manik mila kia?? I really want to know how it will proceed😉

The chapter was good😊

The question- from where you got the name "Paradise Valley" ?

Take care

God bless

Love

Dua...

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Dua Arafat

@dua_arafat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Firstly after watching hershads picture I was like😡 iska kia role??😕

then reading that it was his voice😭 i thought he was Manik

and again reading that handsome word... I again confirmed from thw tittle that it's a manan FF na🤣🤣

Tumhain hershad bara pasand hai?? itni tareef?😆

Ek bat bolon?? I want Mnaik😭😭 jaldi jaldi... this hershad huh I hate him

he is just acting...🥱

asal vampire to Manik hai...

by the way chapter was nice... and well written...

I totally ok with short chapters as I hardly get time to read... short chapters I can read regularly😉

take care

stay blessed

Love

Dua...

Edited by dua_arafat - 9 years ago

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lovePANI

@lovePANI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

chap 1
Superb
nandu is quite cool
n about that gift thing or college lol..

thank u for ur regular pm
keep smiling
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nanoNikki

@nanoNikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Hey...well is Harshad ..im is he is a nice guy in this story...waiting for Manik's entry...continue soon waiting eagerly for next update take care

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Myrah

@AngelaDcruz555

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Ohhh its Harshad I thought its manik if nandini inner goddess gawk at Harshad then what will happen when she will meet manik as manik is 1000 percent more hotter than Harshad for sure...nice update..update soon