MANAN FS : MY POSSESSIVE HUSBAND (UPDATE ON PG.44 + NOTE ON PG.52)21/3 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

Wow superb prologue loved it interesting one update soon thanks for pm👍🏼

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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Angelic_Doll

Awesum prologue different frm the previous one

Thank you and yup it's different 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART -1 {A}




Nandani was lying on the bed...she was sleeping peacefully due to the effect of medicines ...manik was holding her hand and looking at her without blinking...cabir came and patted his shoulder ...manik looked at cabir surprisingly...cabir hugged manik tightly to which he to hugged him back...after sometime manik broke the hug and said

Manik : cabir tu ...tu yaha kya kar raha ha...tu toh Australia main tha naa ...toh Phir

Cabir : kyu nahi bataya manik...

Manik looked here and there for avoiding and said

Manik :tu kya... bol raha ha ...mujhe kuch ...samajh nahi aa raha ...

Cabir :manik tu jaanta ha main kya bol raha hu...

Manik :cabir please yaar abhi nahi...tu abhi aaya ha toh tu rest kar le...

Cabir :ha ha jaanta hu kyu bhaga raha ha Apni kishmish ke saath romance jo karna hoga naa😉

Manik irritatingly said : cabir please


Cabir looked at manik but manik looked away...cabir silently left from there...manik sit on the bed and closed his eyes ...a lone tear fell from his eyes

Manik Pov :

Kaise batau main cabir jab mujhe khud kuch samajh nahi aa raha...esa lagta ha jaise kal hi ko baat ho ...we are so happy...phir kyu...kyu hua esa mere saath...am I not worthy of anyone love...kyu kiya aapne esa Bhawan jii...kyu...how ...how can I...how can I lost my temper...how...main kaise bhul gaya...kaise...doc. ne kaha tha ..phir main ese kaise kar sakta hu...how can I shout on my kishmish...

Manik opened his eyes and looked at nandani...he caresses her cheeks and said

Manik :mujhe aaj bhi voh din yaad ha kishmish kaash maine tumhe rok Liya hota...kaash maine tumhari baat nahi maanI hoti...kaash...tumhe pata ha mujhe aaj bhi voh din yaad ha...the most dreadful day...when I lost u ...when I lost my kishmish...



Flashback -



Manik was sitting on his chair and doing his work on his laptop...he was so engrossed in his work didn't realise his phone which is continually vibrating...
suddenly a guy entered in his cabin...


Guy : Manik sir ...voh jo saxena's ki file mil nahi rahi ha...


That was it manik shut his laptop and looked at the guy angrily to while guy gulped his saliva...

Manik angrily said : what do u mean by nahi mil rahi ha ...


Manik shouted so loudly...guy was literally shivering...


Guy scaredly said : sir voh hamne har jagah dhudhi per file nahi


Before he could complete manik get up with a thud...


Manik angrily said : How can u be so irresponsible...didn't I tell u ...how much it is important


Guy : sir actually maine voh sambhal kar hi rakkhi thi par pata nahi kaha...


Manik shoutedly said : what do you mean by pata nahi ...dhudho usse ...par nahi ha jo apne aap hi kahi chali jaye...ek kaam bhi thik se nahi kar sakte tum log...


Guy : sorry sir


Manik : kya karu main tumhari iss sorry ka haaa ...kya tumhari uss sorry se file vapas mil jaayegi...nahi naa ...go and find the file ...aur agar file nahi mili ...toh tum bhi iss office main dubara mat aana samjhe...


Guy looked at manik in shock before he could say anything...door opened with a thud...both were looked at the direction...manik looked at the guy and said


Manik : jao aur dhundho file ko...


Guy :jii sir


With in a second guy literally run from manik's cabin...manik looked at the person who was staring at him angrily...manik gulped his saliva and said


Manik stammeringly said:voh...umm...actually...main...vo...


Girl raised her eyes brows and placed her hands around her chast


Girl scarcastically said : voh main kya MR. TEDDY BEAR MALHOTRA...bolo...bolo ...bolo naa...am listening


Manik nervously said : kishmish actually voh kaam tha...toh...


Nandani loudly said : kaam... kaam... kaam... hamesha... kaam...do you even know i was waiting for you...2 ghante se vaha par wait kar rahi thi...didn't u supposed to be reached over there...now don't tell me ki tum bhul gaye thee ...


Manik Pov :

Ab kya bolu aur kaise ki main toh Sach mein bhul gaya tha..stupid gadha kahi ka. ...agar voh file naa gumta toh main iss vakt main Apni kishmish ko pick kar chukka hotta...huh...ab kya karu ...


Manik :Arre nahi ...umm...esa nahi ...


Nandani angrily said :essa hi ha u forgot to pick me up...didn't u...aur jhuth toh bolna hi mat


Nandani looked at him angrily and manik gulped his saliva and mumbled

Manik mumbled said :Mar gaya manik ab toh Sach bolna hi padega...


Manik : sorry naa kishmish voh ek file nahi mil rahi thi bus ussi ke chakkar main bhul gaya...am really very sorry


Nandani :kya karu tumhari sorry kaa haa ...u r the one who makes plan ...and u r the one who ditched me ...WAAH!!! WAAH!!!...jab aana hi nahi hota toh plan banate hi kyu ho ...


Manik mumbled said : main sabki leta hu aur Yeh meri le rahi ha...bachalo Bhawan jii...


Nandani clicked her fingers in front of him and said


Nandani : idher dekho aaj toh Bhawan jii bhi tumhe nahi bacha paayege...


Manik holds her hand and lovingly said


Manik :kishmish please naa maaf kardo naa...I promise aaj ke baad kabhi nahi bhulunga...


Nandani looked at him while manik makes some cute cute faces...


Nandani :umm ...thik ha...but I want something


Manik smilingly said : anything my kishmish...just said


Nandani :so Mr. Teddy bear Malhotra u r going to give me permission for going to my friends wedding


Manik looked at nandani shockingly and said


Manik :no never am not going to give you any kind of permission...u knew naa...that was a hilly area...aur phir tum akeli jaana chahti ho ...how am I supposed to be live without u...


Nandani pulled manik's cheeks and said


Nandani :Arre mere pyare hubby malhotra...main SIRF ek din ke liye jaa rahi hamesha ke liye thodi naa...


Manik looked at her and said


Manik : voh jo bhi ho tum kahi nahi jaa rahi ho and that's final ...


Nandani : No am going And this is ur punishment


Manik confusingly said :Punishment konsi punishment


Nandani : for not coming...


Manik cutely said :Arre par Yeh toh galat ha...


Nandani smilingly said : kuch galat nahi ha ...ab tum jaao apna kaam karo aur main bhi tayar ho jaati hu ...


Manik :kishmish


Manik holds her by her waist to which nandani tried to get off from his grip and said


Nandani :manik...dekho chodo mujhe...


Manik smirkingly said :nope


Nandani :soch lo


Manik smirkingly said :soch Liya


Nandani smirkingly said :toh thik ha phir...from now on u will sleep on the couch...and that means no cuddle no kissi...


Manik looked at her in open mouth and said


Manik: no u can't do this


Nandani smilingly said :I can and u know me...


Nandani smirkingly left from there leaving Manik who was sad...



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Nandani was getting ready in her room...she was wearing her earings suddenly manik came and back hugged her

NANDANI'S ATTIRE -





Nandani :Manik


Manik kissed her shoulder and said


Manik :u look beautiful kishmish


Nandani smilingly said :thank you 😳


Manik smirkingly said :umm...thank you aur voh bhi itna rukha sukha...not fair

Nandani turned to which manik holds her by her waist...nandani smiled and said


Nandani :accha jii


Manik holds her waist more tightlyand bring her closer and said


Manik: haa jii


Manik placed his lips with her to which she immediately respond...he sucked her lower lip and Nandani was sucking his upper lip...both were sucking each other lips...manik hands were on her waist...while nandani hands were on his hair's...manik was asking for entrance but nandani smirks and didn't give in to which manik frown...and bitted her lip and entered her mouth ...there toungues were mingled with each other...both were fighting for dominance...to which manik won...both were exploring each and every corner of mouth...they deepened the kiss soon the kiss became passionate...wild...and full of love ...after sometime both were breatheless...manik broke the kiss...and looked at nandani who was so close to him...he kissed her nose lovingly





nandani opened her eyes and looked at him...and pushed him a little ...but manik holds her hand...nandani looked at him and said



Nandani : manik please chodo naa mujhe jaana ha...


Manik cutely said :TUSSI JAA RAHE HO...TUSI NAA JAO ...


Nandani smiled and kissed his cheek and said


Nandani lovingly said : aww...mera baby I'll be back soon pakka...


Manik left her hand and nodded his head...nandani smiled and left from there ...



Manik came to his office and starteddoing his work suddenly his phone started ringing...he smiled looking at the phone screen


Manik lovingly said : kya kar raha ha mera kishmish baby


Guy :dekhiye jinka Yeh phone tha unka accident ho gaya ha...main unhe hospital le kar jaa raha hu aap bhi jaldi aa jaaiye...


After listening this manik hurriedly left from there came to the hospital...where nandani was operated...after 10 hours ago doc came...manik hurriedly came towards them


Manik cryingly said : doc. how's my wife...voh thik toh haina ...usse kuch hua toh nahi naa...aap bol kyu nahi rahe please boliye naa ...


Doc.:Mr. Malhotra we are very sorry...humne aapki wife ko toh bacha liya but aapke baby ko nahi bacha paye

Manik shockingly said :baby

Doc.:yes Mr. malhotra ur wife was three weeks pregnant...aur

Manik :Aur kya doc

Doc.:Aur due to head injury she lost her memory also...

Manik :what?

Doc. Patted his shoulder and left from there...and manik sit on his knees and cried


FLASHBACK END'S

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Manik eyes were filled with tears...he kissed her forehead and said


Manik : the day I didn't loose u kishmish...I loose our baby too...please kishmish come back to ur manik...ur Teddy bear needs you kishmish...today when you said naa am nothing to u ...I felt like everything ends...please kishmish don't do that don't give me such punishment...please don't...believe me kishmish please believe me...I will fight for us kishmish...I will make u remember everything...I will make u fall for me...I will bcz ISHQ HA MUJHE TUMSE ...


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So how's it guys...well I know first part was little santy but Yeh jarruri tha taaki aap logo ko story ka track samajh main aa jaye...next waale main cabir ki masti...manik ki possessivenessaur nandani kI feelings...sab kuch milega...in short full package hoga and yes please I want you all to pray for my grandmom...she is unwell ...and abhi little serious please pray for her...
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Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Wow awesome update..
So nandu lost her memory..
Manik was soo upset...
They even lost thr baby..
Luved it..
Cant wait for nxt update..
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Wow.. awesome update. ..
Omg nandini lost her memory and their baby also ..
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Amazing awesome superb outstanding mind blowing fantastic lovely update tysm dear fr the update vry happy continue soon plzzz plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
actually interesting.

nandini lost her memory..
n baby alsoo.

I just love it..
Itsss soo awesome ..
So amazing. .just love to the core. ..

Soo .fantastic. ...

Keep updating. ..

U r such a beautiful writer...
Update soon..
Waiting for next update eagerly ..
Thanks for this update
.
Thanks for pm too. ..


Stay blessed

Love Geet
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Awesome update. Manik's state was well penned.hats off. Flashback part was mindblowing and blissful. Haha manik was scared of nandini. Manan's convos and moments were beautifully penned. Omg nandini lost her memory and baby.manik's words atlast part was phenomenal. Loved it to core. Totally an mindblowing update. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm
Keep writing
Stay blessed😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Hey it's awsome n sad update though. I tried to understand your Hindi dialogues as much as I can, bec I don't speak hindi.
But still reading it 😆

So take care and update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Nice update dear
wating fir next part

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