MANAN FF- COLORS OF LUV CH-2 PG-5 21st Feb 2016 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER-1 A GLIMPSE AFTER LONG TYM

2 DAYS AFTER DATE

A tall handsome guy who s no less than Greek God ws furiously waiting for someone ...just thn he got a cal

Guy: hello

Person: are u at temple

Guy: yes am in temple waiting for her

Person: okay good even she started

Guy: n how do I recognise her I have not seen her picture too

Person: okay wait let me find out

House:

A girl who s no less than angel s getting ready for meet her Mr. Right
She wore a yellow color saree with a backless blouse exposing her milky white skin n the saree is perfectly showing her curves n she s going to be someone's death today

Lady: doll abhi taak ready nahi hui abhi uska ka call aya hai

Girl: bhabhi am almost ready jus a min...

Lady: Dekho he s calling again

Person: madam actually ladka reached temple n unhone ladki ka photo nahi dekha

Lady: oh shit aab kaise ek Kaam karo ladke ko bolo ki humari ladki yellow color saree pehenka ayegi
Person: ha okay madam

Lady: nandu aab jaldhi ready hojavo ladka dint see UR picture itseems n yaha pata nahi tumhara bhai ne photo kaha rakha nahi mil raha hai

Nandini: it's okay bhabhi no pblm photo se kya karna hai mujhe naam tho acha laga waha jake dekthe hai

Guy: Sanju s doll ready
Sanjana: yes arya she s
Nandini: okay bhaiya am leaving

N girl reach temple

Broker: beta ladki nikal gayi n unhone aapka photo nahi dekha aur woh yellow saree pehenke aa Rahi hai

Guy: acha okay tel her dat am in black shirt n blue jeans

Broker: acha okay take care n make sure evrything goes as planned

Guy: ya ya dnt worry il make sure

Temple:
New guy: hi marriage looks

Guy: ya they have arranged it in temple so that things goes well

New guy: okay hi am Shahid

Guy: Oh Hi M Manik Malhotra

Meantime girl reach the temple n her family members inform her dat guy s in black shirt n blue jeans

Manik: okay great

Shahid: I have come back from US I have got H1 visa so evn am here to get married

Manik: okay fine great(irritated face)

Shahid: so wat u do

Manik: I work as news reader n ya am getting late so catch UR later

Manik searches for a girl n he find only one girl in yellow saree he see her n walks towards n as soon as he see her from far

Manik: W*F is her shit shit hope she does not see me
N start running away

Nandini: arey yaar wr s he n suddenly sees a guy from n recognise him n runs behind him

Both run after each other
N suddenly nandu stop the guy facing his back to her

Nandini keeps her hand on his shoulder

The person turn

Nandini: TUM


Now whom did Nandini see? Y is Manik running away seeing Nandini? N Why Nandini like Manik name n wats the connection btwn all this? To know all dis stay tuned

Hope u guys will like it... If u do pls comment n vote n it really means a lot guys... N am sorry for being late stuck wid few personal pblms... M still having few pblms but am jus here to update for u guys as I can't keep u waiting for so long... Sorry n hope u understand


Happy reading :))


MY WORKS:

1) TWIST WALA LOVE

2) AWAKEN DESTINY

3) THE PRINCESS BRIDE

4) COLORS OF LUV

Love

Pravallika aka PraNi :))
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Hehe why did manik run away??

Wats d matter??

Update jldi

Ty fr pm

Lots of love
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update...
why did manik run away??
pls continue soon..
Tiara115 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.. Nyc. .
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
sreesri thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update...thnkz 4 d pm..is it flash bk...bfr maddy scene..??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing update ...what is happening ..
ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys,

Am actually very disappointed with the response am getting... I agree am not regular but agar mujhe response NA mile I dnt evn feel like writing... My mom met wid accident n my sis wid whom I write dis story s also having exams still in all dis v gave update in return I dnt evn get 10 comments n likes... So I thought il skip writing aab... I dnt wanna continue anymore coz I dnt find any motivation to continue... Agar next time I write any update also I would only PM to the one who commented...

I kw am rude but can't help we take so much efforts to write n in return I dnt evn get a comment it actually hurts... I thought from Monday il b regular in giving all updates but seems like no one s intrstd in reading my stories... Okthanksbye

Sorry if am rude... Thanks a lot for my regular readers who always drop a comment it actually means a lot n love u guys...

Lots of love
Pravallika aka PraNi :((
sreesri thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey yaar.i am waiting 4 ur nxt update eagerly...plz dnt end it..plz...
Tiara115 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Hey don't end all ur stories.
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pls don't stop writing... I love ur stories so.much..

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