#5//The Ex's At War//Ch17 on Pg 126 n Link for Thread 6 on Pg 1

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Priya980

@Priya980

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Posted: 9 years ago

#741

Nice update ...continue soon ''

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zara

@zarak004

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Posted: 9 years ago

#742

Awesome n mind blowing update...

I really admire u as a writer..

Ur really amazing writer...

I just love to read ur updates again n again

N will never have enough of it...

Thank u so much for writing for us so

beautifully n giving attention to every little details

In d update... i was a silent reader untill now

But after reading ur updates i couldnt hold back

myself from commenting...

Thank u once again n pls update soon again with

evn more long chapters as i said i can never have

enough of ur writing...

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anum85228601

@anum85228601

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Posted: 9 years ago

#743

OMG such an amazing update
Mind blowing
Ufff Manan kub smjhe ge yeh dono k yeh chahte kya hai
Awww cutieee manini ne dada ko shave kra
Hahahahaha good job manini bilkul Theak kra rose k sath
Hayeee I love jealous manik
Phir fight pr seriously mujhe inki fight bhi buhat achi lagti hai
Hmmm mr malhotra k rights koi Nhi stop kr skta
Awesome dialogue superb update

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pinkrose90

@pinkrose90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#744

Amazing update. Loved it. Love Manik nandini and Maninis family bonding.

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Shruti240

@Shruti240

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Posted: 9 years ago

#745

nice update...

I thought there has been some romantic encounter...

but it was nice update though...

update soon...

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pinky

@kimnana

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#746

awesome update ...manan is love ..she can't see him with rewa ..

he can't see her with mitin ...possessive manik he caught hold of nandani from the pool can't see her with anyone ...at the end she speaks n he listened to her

ty for pm ..manini is such a sweet heart shaving scene was nice

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twenkling

@twenkling

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Posted: 9 years ago

#747

amazing update...
manik is seriously a big stupid...
he till doesn't understand why nandu is angry with him...
thanks for pm...
last part was so aggresive...
continue soon...
stay blessed nd keep smiling...

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Dashreyaa

@Dashreyaa

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#748

First of all sorry for being late as I don't want to give u response in hurry...

So to start with the update was mind blowing that I felt every moment in the update...

Morning nandini ignoring manik and manini want to help manik shaving...Omg manik's dialogue..." I need to live long and I have a bet to win really crack me yaar...

Then, like how angry nandini with him still when the situation like today he injure his face nandini is the first one to freak out...

Next the rewa😡...always love to come between manan and really loved how manini wipe her oily hand on her dress...

Then, comes swimming pool...oh god really loved how manini finish all the lotion on the pool and rose head...I can completely imagine rose face whe she realised...

when nandini was called by nitin into pool and the first person to interfere is manik!!! Nandini decided no to go in pool just to stop the fight...

Then she get annoyed with manik's already winning face so she decided to come into pool...then manik is really pissed out with it and drag her out and bring her to the room...

Nandini was hurt and angry with manik and manik on the other hand did nt understand why she is angry...

One thing is clear that manik wasn't interested in rewa but then there is something he haven tell nandini about rewa...

This rewa mystery is the solution to their problem...

Nandini know how to deal him that her one sentence is enough to pissed him...But then manik malohtra will never just let her win...so here comes forceful kiss just make her aware hs rights on her I guess...

The entire update was superb and now waiting for next weekend more eagerly to know more...