MANAN SS - ALPHA AND HIS MATE (NEW THREAD LINK ON INDEX )16 FEB

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manan_truelove

@manan_truelove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#691

Wow!!!

Nice concept I just started reading

It as its really awesome...I loved it

Bas itna khena tha ki hosake toh those lambe

updates do plzz..

I loved ur story...just came across

It and loved it...read all the parts

In one goo...u write awesome

Plzz continue soon ...

And plzz update fast ...

Eagerly waiting

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sreesri

@sreesri

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#692

Amazing update...aryaman nandus bhai...luvd it...their 1st kiss ...it ws awesome...

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Coolgal_muskan

@Coolgal_muskan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#693

Wow yaar what an awesome update.

It was quite emotional though!!

Loved it totally!!

Eagerly waiting for the next update

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samreen

@Manansamkhan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#694

amazing nice update ..

monster will never change ..
possisiveness ...
love it ..

cont soon ...

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#695

Great update

Wow this Manik really can't handle anyone near nandani

Glad the mommy said give him a chance

Now I think nandani has no more family members that he hasn't met so that should mean that they can progress their relationship without Manik going kookoo and trying to kill someone :)

Loving how this story flows

Especially enjoyed the surprise kiss Nandani gave Manik when he was sleeping and he knew it so played with his words around her all smirky, could so imagine that scene

I like this impulsive Manik that led to a kiss and many more I'm sure

Thanks for a great read

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Sakshi_maheta

@Sakshi_maheta

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#696

Awesome update...
First kiss...😳😳
Waiting for the next part
Take care 😊

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navla

@navla

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#697

Awsum story...
new concept...read in one go...
loved it...
Alpha n mate...too gud...
nandini family is too gud...loved their bonding...
manik heard all she said...
manik is so possesive for his mate...
loved their fighting...
manik kissed her ...haw...
waiting for next part...
take cr...

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rimi

@elsaanna

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#698

different but awesome story.first kiss ...😉

waiting for the next chapter..plz plz plz...at least promo to de o

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diya

@diyaNarwal

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#699

PROMO-

Manik picked nandani in his arms...nandani glared at him and angrily said

Nandani angrily said : what the hell are you doing?

Manik looked at her and avoid it

Nandani :dekho abhi ke abhi mujhe niche utaro...

Manik looked at her with painfully eyes and said

Manik : why u wanna go? Going Away from me is not a solution...I know I did a mistake but please forgive me...

Nandani pushed manik hardly and angrily said

Nandani : forgive you...are you seriously asking for forgiveness...u knew what...do whatever you want...but am not going to forgive u...

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Manik : Please understand i didn't know I will ever find my mate...but luckily I found out...and trust me am not going to do this ever...it's just...I..I didn't know how...I...loose my control...

Nandani looked at him disgustingly and clapped

Nandani :wow ...kya baat ha ...u can't control...do u even f**king knew what u r saying...u knew what I waited for u ...and u ...u can't even control...such a bas**** u r...

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Hmmm...lagta ha something serious happened...socho socho kya hua hoga...and sorry guys am not updating my cousin wedding is on the way...a lot of preparations ...then study...aur phir work ...I couldn't get time...am really sorry I will update asap ...

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Love you

Diya ❤️

Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago