2//FRIENDS TO SOULMATES { LAST CHAPTER (PART B & C) ON PAGE - 54} - Page 24

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cute_Inaya


Take a bow diya...
Seriously Am so glad that u penned this harsh reality...
Seriously log sirf tamasha dekhte hai... pr koi help nhi krta ...
But still humanity exist...
The way uh penned the whole update... was superb... simply fabulous yrrr..
Love it...

opppsss... 50 missed calls... 80 msgs... poor manik...
He must be hell scared...
Now let see...

I really miss uh dear... but its okay...
Am so happy that u r back...

Thanks for pm..
Continue soonish...
Keep smiling...
stay bless...
lots of love...

Thank you inaya
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sreeja_babu

Awesum update dear...

Lvd it so much...Thnks so much dear 4 d pm...
Update was really suprb...
Nandu s such a kind hearted person..
She tuk dat guy 2 hospital..👏👏👏
Bechri inn sb ke chakkar mein Manik ke surprise bhul gya...
OMg!! 50 misssed calls n 80 msgs...
Pakka manik will b hell worried...
Waitin 2 knw manik's reaction..
Do continue dear..

Updating dear 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveIsManan

I really don't understand our hypocrite society..

At one place they talk about humanity and on other places they do such things..
It was really nice of Nandini to help that guy..
No want to know Manik's reaction..
Update as soon as possible...

Thanks yaar and updating
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vandyandy

Hey diya

Thks for the PM dear

Shocking update tha .
Reality of life in India to be precise .
The humanity is totally lost somewhere.
One can see the person dying but wouldn't help him/ her to get first aid which atmost necessary.

SHIIT !!!!! 50 missed calls of Manik , Nandu u r dead.
He must be reaching to her.

Finally like finally u updated thighs one
Cont soon the nx part

Thank you and updating yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lovePANI

hmmm
grt chappy
n ya so true yaa in India after everything is over damn police will come..
it's better if we call pizza delivery home they r faster than anyone lol..

uuuiii nandu screwed hahaha

thank u
keep smiling

Am glad you like it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: eppie99

Awesum update
Hats off to u for such an update
Its gud to know that u r spreading awareness through ur ff
Actually i also dont understand this ki logo ki problem kya hai agar kahi pe halla machana hota hai to sab log pahunch jate hai hai n at that te kisi ko police ki koi chinta nhi rhti bt when such cases cum then they are afraid
This stupid mentality of people na its getting on my nerves
Awesum update
Continue soon
Ps-hey diya, i m srry for commenting late bt my entrance exams are approaching thats why i m really busy now a days

It's okay and thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello guys, see another story updated...u all want it right...chalo next story jo bhi chahiye bata dena...till then ENJOY THE UPDATE😛



PART -13 (C)




IN FLIGHT -


Manik Pov :


Am so happy...finally I can see her...I can hug her...it's being two months since we are in long distance relationship...I knew she was scared...if it works or not...but I knew it ...it will definitely work...bcz I love her...and trust her...and for any relationship these two things are important ...which is in our relationship...these two months is like hell for me...these two months remind me those yrs. when she went US ...that makes me feel sad so many times...but I knew this was important...important for her carrier...for her future...this thoughts makes me to come out of my Sadness...bcz I can't show her...I knew if she get to know... she will come back without even thinking which I don't want...it want her to fly...I want her to fulfill every of her dream...I want to be her strength not her weakness...but again the thought of...I can see her...I can talk to her but I can't hold her ...I can't hug her...kiss her ...makes me feel like hell...but now the first thing which I want to do was hug her as tightly as I can...I knew she must be very angry on me...I didn't pick up her calls but how can I picked up when I knew she will spit out the surprise from my mouth in some mere seconds...trust me ... she has that ability...and I can't lie to her...so I thought to avoid it ...am here...it's not a surprise...she already guessed it...I knew...but when she saw my surprise her anger flew away...I just can't wait for the moment...



Soon the flight got landed...am tired but not that much...my excitement take all my tiredness...am sure...now i have a never ending smile on my face...I knew people will think am mad ...but I don't care...this moment...I just care was about her...and ...her only...



I took a cab And went to meet my love of life...I just love her when she calls me love...it makes me feel so special...it's like am the one luckiest guy on the earth...



It's around 9 in night...this city is very beautiful at night...I knew she must be back from her work...well mostly she came back around 7 o' clock ...after that she takes half an hour nap ...then she freshen up...And do a lot of masti with uncle aunty...she loves to tease them ...and..the smile on her face that moment was a treat to watch...but...I always makes sure not to feel her uncomfortable...or feels suffocated by my presence or my calls ...I gave her enough space...so that she can live her life like the way she wants...she never had her dinner on time...that was the only thing which I don't like about her ... she is very careless about her health...I always get worried about that...but then I told aunty to take care of her diet...I still remember she was so mad at me...bcz I told aunty...but that was expected by me ...I don't want her to get sick...so after a lot of pleading she finally agreed...I always makes sure she never got late for office...she loves her beauty sleep...and waking her up is a big task...but I always managed...



So now am standing in front of her house...am excited to see the reaction of her face...I rang the bell...in a minute door opened...aunty opened the door...I smiled at her to which...she smiled nervously which makes me conscious...but I chuckle and touch her feet...and took the blessing



Manik : Pari pona aunty ...kaise ho aap ... ( pari pona means 'namaste' ...it's punjabI language )



Aunty : main acchi hu beta tum kaise ho ...aur yaha achaanak...mera matlab



I smiled at her well that was expected...I wonder innka yeh reaction ha toh meri princess ka kya reaction hoga...that makes me excited...



Manik : actually aunty that was a surprise...tell me where is she...


I was so excited to see her...hold her...but the look which aunty was giving doesn't seems normal...


Aunty stammeringly said : umm ...beta voh...umm ...



Aunty was stammering that makes me worried like hell...I hope she was fine ...



Manik : voh kya aunty tell me where is she? Is she okay naa?



I was worried like hell and aunty was not making eye contact... she was playing with her fingers...she looked tense...that makes me more worried...



Manik : Aunty please bataiye where is she? Is she OK right?



Aunty: I don't know beta is she okay or not? Voh abhi tak ghar nahi aayi ...or naa hi phone utha rahi ha...am scared beta...am ...scared...



She was crying while my condition was not less...I was too in urge of cry but I can't be weak...she must be fine...yaah...she must be...I looked at the time it's 10 ...I don't know where can she go...she didn't go for party...if she went she definitely told me...then were she can be? I looked at aunty she was crying...I feel so bad for her ... aunty uncle treats her like their own daughter...their daughter was died when she was 18 ...she went for the party and when she was coming back...she was drunk...and got hitted by truck ...and died...I knew that's the reason...she was scared for her...but nothing is going to be happen with my princess...I knew she must be stuck somewhere ...but right now I had to console her ...


Manik : don't worry aunty ...she must be fine...aati hi hogi...raaste main hogi...maybe traffic main phas gayi ho ...



She looked at me then nodded her head and wiped her tears...and I signed a relief...


Aunty : tum thik keh rahe ho aaj kal vaise bhi traffic kitna hota ha...voh aati hi hogi...



I smiled at her and said " yaah now u go and sleep...it's not good for you to wake up so late...aapki tabiyat karan ho jaayegi...



Aunty : par beta nandani



Manik : don't worry about her ...voh jaise hi aayegI...I will inform you...



She nodded her head and left from there ...



Now the only thing which was in my mind was her well - being ...I just hope she was fine ...I removed my cell phone from my pocket and dialled her number...but she is not peaking...damn ...I tried again...again...and again...but no answer...




It's around midnight...I was continuously calling her messaging her...but she is not peaking...not even replying...dammit...now am hell worried...I just don't know what to do...thousands of thoughts running in my mind...what if something happened to her?...what If she was in trouble? ...what if?...God these thoughts makes me feel like so helpless...i tried one last time...if she didn't pick up now...I'll go and search for her...yaah...




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Nandani was sitting and looking at the cell phone...



Nandani Pov :


What should I do now? I knew he must be worried like hell now...but I can't take his call until he will come...


She cut the call...and typed a message...



I knew love u r worried for me...but please don't worry...am absolutely fine...I'll be home with in a hour...just stuck with something important ...till the time I reach please try not to be mad at me...once I reach I will tell you...and yes once I reach home I want my smilly manik whom I love the most...not this worried manik who is just look like someone throw up on him ...hehe...i'll be back soon:)

Love you jaan❤️



I sent the message...hope now he will be relax...I knew he is really angry on me bcz of this kind of behaviour...but I knew...he is understanding...he will understand me...


I was thinking all this my mobile beep it's message...



Thank god u r fine...and ...Love you too my Cara - Mia...and am not mad at u... just worried for u...I knew something was really important bcz of that u couldn't inform us...I understand...and yes u will get ur smilly manik not that saddy manik...but please back soon jaana ...Am waiting for u,... :)



Yes this is my manik...he always understand my unsaid words...well u can say this was our bounding...after all we are

FRIENDS TO SOULMATES ...I love him so much when he used to call me with such a lovey Dovey names...I wonder where he found out...see like kitne naam ha mere PRINCESS...MUCHKINN...PUMPKIN...JAANA...SHONA...DOLL

...And here am getting a new name CARA-MIA ...it's Italian word...



Suddenly someone knocked at the mirror...I looked at the person and get out of the car...



Guy rudely said :why did you call me? Aur kuch bacha ha kya voh bhi suna do...



Scriously this guy is like a pain in my ass...I just want to slap him so hard...it's like common sense toh ha hi nahi...I took a deep breath and calm myself and said



Nandani : Aryaman...maine tumhe yaha koi sunane ke liye nahi bulaya...I need ur help...



Aryaman mockingly said : wow finally u need my help...


I so wanted to punch this guy so hard naa...he will remember...but nandani u have to calm...calm...calm...calm...I somehow calmed myself and said


Nandani :yes I need ur help...ab apne iss so called ego ko side main karo aur meri baat suno ...



Finally this idiot brings a scrious face...so I told him about the whole incidence...I wonder he was listening to me actually with scriousness...that was really something which is new...I finished my story...


Nandani :so now you have to stay here till morning...are u?


Aryaman nodded his head as yes which really surprised me ...but then he said


Aryaman :I just want to ask one question who is he to u?why are you protecting him?



Nandani : I don't know him aryaman...I just meet him and about protecting him is...u knew naa how law's are ...if police found out this was not an accident case...it's a suicide case...they will take actions against him...suicide is crime now...I just want to save a life...I knew jo bhi usne kiya voh galat tha...but am sure the reasons must be strong...no one wants to ended up their life just like that...so yaah...



He nodded his head and I signed a relief...finally I can go home ...I smiled and left to meet my love of life...




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So how's it...guys I want ur love nothing else...so please do as much as comments and likes u can...and my b'day is on the way so I will thik of giving you guys os as a gift...hope you guys like that too ...

Love you all

Keep loving

Keep smiling

And

Keep shining For Ur loved ones

Love

Diya❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
First! yippiee
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unres...

Awesome update dear..
Aww their bonding is so strong... glad that Manik didn't enter his monster mode 😆
Was expecting their meet in this update but no problem loved it anyways 😳

Haha Aryaman and his no nonsense attitude 😃
Nice update dear...
Edited by musicismylife - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wowww beautiful update
Manan so cute
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome one..
Manik so so understanding...
The biggest asset for a girl is that her guy wants to see her flt high and never stop her..
And this is exactly what Manik is doing for Nandini...

I just love Manik man, he is so understanding..
And Nandini is also so thoughtful to help the guy..
Will be waiting for some manan moment now..
I hope you updated soon...

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