Monster Manik Part:11ABCDpg-84&85(completed)21march

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Pravallika69

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Posted: 9 years ago

#551

Shit yaar I was literally waiting for dis update
I thought its ur story mcoz it looks like ur story only
Hope she continues writing
But tats okay I have ur stories may b I wnt miss this tat much reading ur stories
But jus hope she start writing again

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khurshidashaikh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#552

Plz mehk dnt stop I eagerly waiting for this stry plz

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Pari_mananholic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#553

Pls pls continue...

At least give a ending...

Pls pls...

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aarohi arora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#554

Hey i have started reading this ff today only... amd i loved it yaar...
Plz tell her to continue na... or atleasrt give a proper ending...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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lovePANI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#555

plzzz ask her to continue ..
i really really loved it..

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archu_asok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#556

Don't discontinue. This story was mindblowing.loved it. Ask her to rethink.if possible give us proper closure.

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Sakshi_maheta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#557

Please Don't stop...
Love this story very much...

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sneha_glamarous

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Posted: 9 years ago

#558

ohhh 😲 ...is it so...
that's very sad to know...

i guess u must have tried to make her agree to continue with the story...

why don't u continue the story further... by taking her permission to do so...

please do us know...!!!

eagerly n desperately wants to read the story...

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Mehaklovely

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part : 11A

both of them smiled remembering their first meet

manik- u have taken my heart only that day, I was eager to see you again, to talk to you , spend time with you... and finally (holding her hand) see that day has come, you are with me, you have accepted my love (kissed his knuckles) . I want to do some promise to you

Today, I Manik Malhotra promise Nandini Manik Malhotra that

I will never ever let you cry in life and agar kabhi hua then you are free to slap mee or hold my ears

i will never shout on you promise... by putting his hand on her head

I will never hurt you... not in your dreams too

I will always keep you happy...

I will always hold your hand and be with you with your all decision

I will always love you and you till my last breathe

And I will always and always KISS YOU everyday because I love your lipgloss(by winking her)

Nandini was overwhelmed by his words, she was herself on seventh sky while listening his promise

Nandini's pov

Promise to NANDINI MANIK MALHOTRA... I was red listening this only...and when he started his promise, I was touched and got emotional by his words but his last promise made me blush hard KISS ME everyday

While nandini was lost in his world, he snapped his finger in front of her to bring her back in trance

Manik- kya hua???

Nandani- nothing looking here and there as she know that she was blushing hard

Manik was happy seeing her happy

Manik- nothing... yeh kya yaar I have make so much promise and you will not say anything kya???

Nandini-(stammering) I ... promise

Manik- aur nhi toh kya...acha I will help you saying this he pulls her close to himself

I want only 3 promise from you

First promise that you will never ever cry...I just hate your tears

Second promise is that you will always love mee and mee only

Last but not least you will always give me reward when I will do something good

Nandini- (raising her eyebrow) reward aap ko kya chahiye???

Manik- the reward I want can only be given by you (winking her) I can give you demo of reward if you want

Nandini- at once nhi nhi I got understand

Manik smiled

Manik- kya baat hain nandini you hava become so intelligent

Nandini hugs him... Manik hugs her tooo

Manik's pov

Tomorrow I will propose you in front of everyone... tomorrow will be best day of my life...I am waiting for it eagerly

Nandini's pov

AIYAAPPA!!!!!! Plzzz ab sab kuch acha acha ho, but pta nhi alya diii kaise behave krengi when she will get to know about our relationship?????... I can't loose him plz AIYAPPA !!!!!! do some miracle...

Manik and nandini broke the hug

Manik take her in his arms and take her to bed and nandini also did not try to protest. She holds his shoulder

Manik make her sit on the bed. He also come and sit beside her

Manik- nandini tumne kuch nhi btaya apne baare main ya apni feelings k baare main... Wat do you think about meee????(looking at her)

Nandini- (stammering) mainnn...vooo...I mean... actually

Manik holds her hand and with one hand palm her face

Manik- jaan are u not comfortable speaking with mee??

Nandini- aisa nhi hain

Manik- then??

Nandini - nhi...voo naa aapka gussa

Manik smilingly

Manik- seriously tumhe mujhse I mean mere gusse se darr lagta hain...but u don't need to be...I know sometime I am too arrogant...morever I can not get angry with you...you are my princess and koi prince kabhi apni princess se angry hota hain kya???

Nandini was quietly listening her...

Manik- You know you are that person who can control my anger... and plzzz jaan I want to hear my name from you or you can call mee that monster tooo... Now toh I will love to become your monster

Nandini was looking here and there except manik

Manik - achaa okkk okkk...u can call mee anything except sirrr and I will wait for that day when you will call mee manik ...

Nandini smiled hearing him

Manik- chalo tum toh kuch bol nhi rhi ho then I should talk... ek minute are you feeling tired kya????

Nandini- nooo

Manik - good so can I sleep on your lap plzzz...(making a cute face)

How can nandini resitate this cute saa face...

she nodded as yes

Manik at once put his head on her lap

Manik was holding her hand

Manik- pta hain nandini jab you reject my love and ask mee to marry alya, I was shocked with that how can you ask meee to marry alya when you know that I love you... I can't forget that bad day

Nandini holds his hand

Nandini- sorry I have hurt you very much naaa that day...

Manik- hmmm main tumhe propose karne aaya tha and tum mere liye alya kaa proposal lekar aayi thi... Par koi nhi ab sab kuch aacha hoga and you will never ever leave mee naaa

Nandini- hmmm

Manik talked to nandini and in between his talk he sleeps holding her hand

Nandini sees him and don't disturb his sleep so she too sleep in that position

Scene - 3 am in night

Manik wakes up and then sees his position how he was sleeping on her lap while nandini was sleeping in that position only

Manik at once sits up

Manik's pov

Man how can you sleep like that and nandini ne bhi mujhe nhi jagaya ... Her legs may b hurting..he make her sleep on the bed properly. he kissed her forehead and sleeps holding her waist...

.nandini was in deep sleep she too snuggled in his chest and sleeps holding him

while manik was happy to see her sleeping close to him

NEXT MORNING

Nandini wakes up and sees that how close she is sleeping with him snuggling in his chest holding his waist...but she was feeling peaceful in his embrace

Nandini's pov

AIYAPPA!!!!plzzz ab I don't want to be sad...amma, apppa k jaane ke baad this is the first time I am feeling so good and peaceful pr inhe mere baare main kuch nhi pta hain... kya he will leave mee after knowing the truth???? Will he love meee or not when he will get to know about my past...pta nhi sab react kaise krenge when they will get to know about us???

While she was busy in thinking this manik wake up and see her in same position... he thought she may be sleeping and he hold her more tightly by his waist and brings her more closer to him such that air cannot pass

Nandini at once come back from her thought feeling manik's touch

Nandini sees him

Manik- when did you wake up??

Nandini- jab aap so rhe the

Manik-(smirkingly) then also you were holding mee so tightly...hmmm

Nandini didn't know what to say

Manik- vaise I love that...I want my every morning to start like this...and now

Nandini- now??

Manik- good morning wish nhi krogi

Nandini- gud mornin g

Manik- aisa nhi nandini...gud morning kiss k bina kaise morning good hogi

Nandini- gud morning kiss???

Manik- you talk too much sometime... chalo abhi toh I am leaving you but after marriage you will always wish me morning with your sweet kiss

Nandini now try to wake up

Manik holds her and push her on him

Now nandini was landing on her chest and manik was holding her back

Manik- where do you think you are going???

Nandini- fresh hone

Manik- miss murthy...you can't wish mee that doesn t mean that I will also not wish you gud morning

Manik- good morning jaan and kiss her on her cheeks

Manik then change their position..now manik was on top of nandini

Manik - gud morning soon to be wifey and with that he take her lips for a sweet kiss and kissed her forehead

Nandini was closing her eyes

Manik- nandini I think tum fresh ho gyi...hmmm

Nandini blushed hard and she pushed him and run into washroom and closed the door

Manik- oh god!!!! How much she run from meee...(smirkingly ) koi nhi after marriage kha jaogi miss murthy???

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Mehaklovely

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part : 11B

While nandini was in washroom, Manik switched on his cell and he see so many missed calls from kabir and alya

Manik's pov

Kabirrr, thank god I have switched off my mobile nhi toh ye meri romance ki pakka watt laga dete, kabab main haddi kahi ka and ye Alya kitna avoid krta hu phir bhi yeh ladki koi nhi aaj main iska chapter bhi THE END kr k rhunga...hmmm

While he was thinking his cell ring and by seeing the caller name he was hell irritated

Manik picks the call

Manik- (in angry tone) kya hain??? Subah subah call kyun kar rha hain???

Cabir- kya hua ??? maine tere romance disturb kar diya kya jo itna angry man bna hua hain( in teasing way)

Manik- tune isliye call kiya tha kya??

Cabir- nhi vo toh main teri luv story k baare main confirm kar rha tha...ki whether vo track par aayi hain ya phir nhi...

Manik smiled hearing that

Cabir- I think soo love story track par aa gyi hain...toh phir kal raat main kya kya kra????(in teasing manner)

Manik- cabirr

Cabir- kya yaar, maine teri itni help ki and now tu muijhe attitude dikha rha hain...(in fake sad tone)

Manik- band kar aapna drama...vaise seriously yaar thanx

Cabir- band kar nhi toh main emotional ho jaunga...achaa leave this engagement ka kya karna hain??

Manik- kya karna hain???

Cabir- bhai nandini k baare main uncle aunty ko bta de nhi toh it will be too late

Manik- haa yaar, I will tell them after reaching there

Cabir- chal rkhtu hu... tu apna romantic session continue krle(in laughing way)

Before Manik could speak Cabir cut the call

Manik's pov

Aaj I will propose nandini in front of everyone, I will tell her that how much she is special for mee and he smile ruffling his hair with one hand and with another hand he was seeing nandu pic in his cell

While nandini was in washroom

Nandini's pov

AIYAPPA!!!! Why my heartbeat starts racing rapidly when he is close to mee??? I feel so protective in his embrace, when he is close to mee it seems my every problem will be solved. Out of the world I feel that there is someone who cares and love mee, THANX AIYAPPA!!!

While nandini was in washroom, manik orders the breakfast

Nandini- AIYAPPA!!! I forget to bring dress ab kya karu???

Manik's pov

Damn god nandini dress le kar toh gyi nhi aur bolegi bhi nhi vo ladki...

he makes a call and arrange dress for her

while Nandini was thinking what to do, manik knocks the door

nandini's pov

SHIT!!!! Ab kya karu, Wat to do AIYAPPA????

Manik- nandini don't worry I have kept the dress on the bed and I am going outside... You can come outside and change the dress, With this Manik went outside the room and shut the door

Nandini after some second peep through the door and after feeling no one's presence

She comes outside wrapping the towel and sees the dress on the bed

Nandini smiled and take the dress from the bed and wore it

While nandini was combing her hairs manik comes inside the room. He see her making ponytail and goes beside her

Nandini see him through the mirror

Nandini was turning towards him but he stopped her

Manik take out rubberband from her hair and back hug her keeping his hands on her waist

Manik- nandini plzz never ever tie your hairs, I love your open hairs

Manik gives her kiss on her hairs

Manik- you will b hungry naa... and holds her hand and make her sit on the bed

Manik- sit and start the breakfast, okkk

Nandini - aap

Manik- I am going to washroom, you start your breakfast

Nandini nods

Manik goes to washroom

After few minutes he come outside the washroom holding the towel ruffling his hairs

He was not wearing his shirt...

Nandini sees him and after seeing him bare chest, she at once turns her head

Manik sees her and smirk

Nandini- (stammering) vooo actually... I am gooo gooing out side

Manik- (in teasing manner) nandini sit here, vaise bhi make it a habit you know naa in future you have to see meee like this only

Nandini blushed hearing that

Manik was facing her back...Manik noticed that she hasn't started his breakfast

Manik- nandini why haven't you started breakfast???? I have said naaa to start

Nandini- I was waiting for you

Manik wears his shirt and comes near her. He sits beside her

Manik- chalo den start now and feed mee

Nandini make him eat while manik also makes her eat..

After feeding each other manik asked her that they have to leave now...

Manik was driving the seat while nandini was looking outside the window.

Manik- nandini

Nandini- hmmm and looks towards him

Manik- This shimla trip was awsome for mee

Nandini- I have to asked u something, can I??

Manik- Yes Nandini you can ask anything

Nandini- Do you trust meee???

Manik sees towards her and says I trust you more than meee

Nandini- I have to tell you about my past

Manik- Kya hua Nandini???any problem, Why are you talking like that???

Manik holds her hand

Manik- I don't care about your past, I care only about our present and future because we are together now and will be together in future. If you have any bad past then leave it off and only focus on your present and future...

Nandini smiles after listening him

Manik's cell ring, he picks it up

Manik- yess dad

Dad- beta where are you??? We have reached to ceremony hall, you remember naa you have your engagement today

Manik- engagement (and looks towards nandini), don't worry dad I will reach on time

Dad- okk beta, come fast

Nandini- Wat will you do now???

Manik- don't worry Nandini, I have planned everything

They reached the ceremony hall

Manik holds nandini hands and comes inside the hall

Nyonika- beta you are late, chalo come fast

Aliya also comes there and sees manik is holding Nandini's hand, she gets pissed off

Aliya hugs Manik

Aliya- manik chalo we are getting late for engagement ceremony and holds his hand to take him to stage but manik jerked her hands

Manik- Aliya I am not doing this engagement

Nyonika looks at him in shock

Aliya- what are you saying Manik, you are cracking joke naa listen this is not the time for joke

Manik- seriously you are thinking that I am cracking joke so I will clear alll your doubt

Manik comes to stage and take the mike

Manik- hello everyone, you will be surprised to know but this engagement is cancelled now

All the family members are shocked

Cabir's pov

OH GOD!!!!! ab koi drama naa ho, koi problem naa create ho

Manik's dad - manik What are you saying???

Manik- dad I don't love aliya, I love some one else

Aliya anger reach to its peak, she turned back towards nandini

Aliya- (clapped her hands )you have done what you want, I have asked you not to come between manik and mee, but you don't listen naa

Nandini didn't knew what to say and tears brimmed in her eyes

Aliya- speak up dammit kaha tha naa manik se distance maintain rkhne ke liye, phir kyun. I always knew that you will do like this karogi bhi kyun nhi akhir meri real sister toh ho hi nhi tum

Now this was shocking to all malhotra's family

Aliya- tum jaise cheap, characterless ladki

Manik - keep your mouth shut aliya, he comes near nandini

Manik- don't say a word to nandini

Aliya- WOW!!!!great miss Nandini tumne manik ko bhi apni side kar liya, I know tum aisa kuch hi karogi that's why see kaun aaya hain and she takes a side

The person comes near Nandini and she was shocked to see the person

The person comes near her and slapped tight on her cheeks