One Night Stand With A Stranger Manan ss Chapter 10,on 130 pms later - Page 18

Originally posted by: Natashaaa

hayeee lou u bae ...u won my heart ...muahhh update soon

arreee hot hot scenes aur manan romance toh nats ka fav h...!! *wink* :P

nice concept

Namaste !!! hello i love your writing and i just love the way you express yourself ...you write amazing ...awesome and fab !!! if this is what you are expecting me to say then a not so heartily sorry to you !!!
Your write pathetically disgusting ..by reading your writing i can clearly see and have easily came to a conclusion that your hormones are not in control ...and believe me they really ...really aren't ..you need to consult a gyniiee ...
I know i am sounding as a basher but i have no ...like no intension to bash you ...but its just that you are badly getting on my nerves ...aww don't be proud of yourself that you can get on someones nerves but ...its not your writing its your pathetic thoughts ..!!! writing all useless emotional crap in your story ...and yeah the insane and disgusting make outs ..!!!! don't you get tired ????
i am here to show my concern for the teen ppl who are reading your insane story and appreciating it ...girl one thing i need to tell you is that a writing is a medium used to share our thoughts ...and i really found your thoughts disgusting ...horny ...and harmful for the sane ppl ..!!! And writing style is so horrible that i feel like breaking the head of writer... Makeouts every one writes i. Forum but what u write is vulgar, illogical an stupid.
I know reading this you will create another note or maybe a thread to tell ppl how i bashed you ...so go ahead coz i am saying the tight thing and i also know that your readers will also bash me on this ...so ...to them too i wannna say that guyz mko is bandi se kuch lena dena nhi h ...but you ppl specially the below 15 dont have any idea what stuff you are reading ... But if you are so interested in it them jai ram ji ki!!! I am not at all conservative but you really show ugly vulgarity which make me feel puckish!! And if you say its a dark story then sorry sweetheart! This is crap!!! There is no intensity or dark story but sheer vulgarity and your twisted thoughts
I know we have developed that much to understand about things and sex education should be here ...we have the right and its not bad to talk openly about sex but ...itnaaa development i dont think is good or necessary!!!
So girl when you can write ..atleast think before writing ... It reflects what u are... U come here and take ur frustration out here!!
Because ppl are reading you ...and to spoilt there views is definetly not a writers work ..!!!!
Wont be waiting for your bashing ...!!!!! Coz deep down u know i am right and many will do a happy dance who are nit able to do so!!
Ps-: soochna jan hit mein jari ..!!

Happy New Year dear
An awesome writer specially POV r jus awesome
Lovely update
Navni bond is jus wow I love their bond too kuch
Nandu can't get over manik so soon
Superb n true maddy is an asshole
Awesome nandu punch superb it felt when she punched him
Awesome superb lovely
Awww manik busy searching nandu
Hope he find her soon n explain n sort out things
Waiting for next part
Awesome story as always
God bless n may u get more than wat u deserve

Lots of love
Pravallika aka PraNi

Awesome update finally Nandhini broke her relation with Maddy because he doesn't deserve Nandu. Instead of supporting her he insult her

Wowww superb
Fabulousss update
Kya punch diya nandu maddy jhi desrvd krta tha...ek ke baad ek...lovd it...continue soon

Res

awesome