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ArSha_ManNan

@ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Woww
It was absolutely amazing...
Loved the storyline...
Manik bursting on his baby ...
The hurtful things she said...
Nandu calming manik... He did all that becoz of a reason...
Now nandu is gonna knock sme sense into her...
Very well written
Thnkz 4 the pm

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pinkrose90

@pinkrose90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Aww such a cute and emotional story. Update soon. Great job.

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ChocolatePie14

@ChocolatePie14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

I WILL SURELY DO THAT... THANKS FOR THE BEAUTIFUL STORY... LOVE YOU MISH... PLEASE UPDATE SOON...

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Sm0405

@Sm0405

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Heyyy ... I very much loved this update ... It shows how a father loves his child bt often Hume samajh nhi aata ... Aur kabhi kabhi hum samajh k bhi samajhna nhi chahte ... Bt he loves us a lottt ...

I seriously dnt know what to say abt this story ... Manik was so shattered listening those harsh words frm his baby ... His hurt was clearly seen in his face ...

Im waiting for the next part to know what Nandini will do now ...

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Kuushi

@Kuushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Awesome story...beautifully penned chapter...it depicts parents love for their kids and their protectiveness towards them...but sometimes the kids fail to understand... same happened with muskaan as she just witnessed the anger of her father but didn't understand there was a reason for his outburst and he is just trying to protect her...and her mother reacted that way because she has hurt her father with her words but nandini will definitely make her understand and realize her mistake...waiting for the next update please continue soon and thanku for the pm :)

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aliyaangel

@aliyaangel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

mishie pie.. I just couldn't stop myself from commenting on this one.
no idea about the future plot but one things for sure it's going to be superbly awesome..
THOSE WORD'S by You.. they we're heart touching.. literally.. true n deep..
we as kids never think what our mom dad goes through in such situations.. we suffer so do they.. mothers still show their feeling but father's.. they are something beyond..

I didn't know I'm in for a such a heart touching piece of ur writing when u asked me to give it a shot..
I LOVED it.. beautiful.. n thank uuu..

looking forward for this one eagerly.. :)

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Arunima

@jesse93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Like it a lot,
continue soon.

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Sonalmanan

@Sonalmanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Awesome!! This was so emotional n very beautiful... Even I wish to hv someone like my dad..A.Girl is always very close to her father becoz she knows that there is only him who will never hurt her... Thanks for the pm... Pls continue soon... Waiting for the next part... 😊 😊

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sameeksha

@mini_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

U always bring such intense topics or words which instantly melted me..
This time too..
About a father daughter duo..speechless..
My bonding wid my father is not like a daddy and princess..but still he is like a mentor..which every time teach a new lesson for a lifetime..
Loved it
Cont soon.