MANAN TS : YAHIN HOON MAIN CH 5 PG 88 EPILOGUE PG 98 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Awesome
but manik???
is he dead??
thnx.for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Wow.. Nyc concept. ..
Aww little manan ...
Will manik be back...
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Ayoyoyoyoyo prologue itself was so emotional .. congratulations for New story .. do continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Lobed the prologue. Its amazing.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I cant believe it...!! The moment she got up frm the dream... Tears filled my eyes... To the fact tht... Tht thunderstom sound was bomb blast...n manik would hv been injured in tht...n never retuned back.. It gave me jitters ya... It was perfectly fit... 18+ Ka toh pata ni... But this was first tym.. I gt tears while reading any update... Though it was few lines but it just simply stole my heart... I cried.. Both nandi n his son hv been living alone since 6 years...! This is such a long tym...
Do continue...donno how to write more... This prologue simply blew me... No wonder m such a big fan of ur writing...
God Bless U
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting start

Major Manik Malhotra

junior Malhotra

I am excited to see what gonna happen

continu soon

take care

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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Interesting! Loved the concept! Something different & new!
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38


Thanks for pm.dear

I just loved it. .

Very beautiful and different concept. .

Please continue. .

Looking forward to seeing more.


Stay blessed dear.




Thanks.





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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Nice and interesting prologue
Looking forward to read it


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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Sounds quite interesting..
Will be like looking forward to the update..

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