MaNan TS: A Run Away Bride [final part/pg-17] 21/12/15 - Page 12

bth shock nd surprze

Awesome ...amazing

Originally posted by: manikmalhotra2

Awesome ...amazing

Im surprised and shocked both

But love it

Thanks fro the pm

Thanks for loving it..

Originally posted by: thamannamanan

seriously extra cheese pizza n chocolates on first night topic wow

😛

Originally posted by: hs77

hahahahahaha!

loved both the parts!

your story is sooo different

like some fresh air...such feel good story

loved all the dialogs...nandu's obsession with food and manik's explanation of how he felt when he saw her with her food!!😃

keep writing and keeep up the humour quotient!
we need more of these!

😛

Thank you so much for loving this...

Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic

Wow awesome...

Nandu loved food...Nandu turned out to be like manik foody...

Manan played a prank indirectly on every one...

Manan loved each other...

Wow luved ending...

Luved it...

thnx for pm..

Update soon...

Thank you so much for ur precious comments.

Originally posted by: sri_valli

awesome TS dear...funny and romantic Ts this is...nandu's first love is food...that is unique. .

manan convo at ngt was hillarious...

And writer pov after their make out part was so correct and funny too...

Cabir as pandit was ROFL...

Waiting for some more stories of these type from U...

Thanks for ur precious comments.
I will try to wrote more this of type stories...

Very funny and chilled out story! Made me laugh a lot! Thank you so much for this two shot! Esp where you mentioned the writers PoV regarding not to do what nandu did during first night! That was epic 👏
Keep writing! 😊

Amazingg
Fab update
Thnx for pm me
Enjoyed a lot...frst nyt mein kon choclat aur pizza ki baatein krta hai nandu hahahaha...lovd it...plzz continue

Shocked and surprise dono bhi bade zor se lage