#2 VIVAH MANAN FF PART 12/PG 130 nt on pg 144 - Page 20

Superb update yaar

bada hi shaandar part tha yar..thoda mazaqiya hogya ary its really nice part plz come soon next part...

Awesome update...
It was full on emotional update, but I like the way you showed Manik and Nandini's point of view... I think she was trying a lot to make their relationship work after engagement but now it's Manik's turn... I hope things get sorted soon...
Nandini such a good soul but I she misunderstood things and past incidents of Manik (ignoring her, talking rudely to her) instigated her to make this decision...
Looking foward for their vacation.. Plzz show some youngsters time and fun (if possible) plzzz update soon
Waiting eagerly...

Awsm

Superbbb

Brilliant

Fantastic

Plzzz continue soon

Kindly update nxt chapter soon

Pretty plzzz

wow what an update.. i really liked the nuances you brought out which actually happen in most arrange marriages.
Nandini did give her 100% to the relationship but as they say that taali ek hath se nahi bajti... similarly manik also has to give equal time n effort to their relationship else things wud just get messier.
i totally agree with nandini that to trust a person u need to spend quality time with that person.
Now its all upto Manik on how he can salvage the relation before its too late.
i think nandini shudnt doubt her decision to be with manik n give him a chance. if still there is no improvement then may b she shud think once again abr the relation but don't think that will hapoen. M sure manik will pacify nandini.

awaiting the family vacation... hope things sort out soon

Wow
This is some good story
I read it in one go
I really liked it you did a goo job
Keep it up and keep writing
You have good writing skills.

Stay blessed
Thank you

Too good !! Can't wait to see what Manik does to trust her decision about marrying him !!

Okey, please update next chappie thoda jaldi next time.. And yeah, nandini should not forgive him easily haan as even m the worst at giving second chances so i think nandini's decision was correct but this story is bout manan so..

Emotional update

Superb update ya.