ff fab5 vs manan(part 6 -page 32)

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sreesri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Wow diff stry...wat hppnd nandu shes hidng relation..plz pm me..

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NiyaJaiswal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

fab4 n der erong tymng...hehe...
loved it...
pls update d nxt part soon...

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1d_kisses

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Posted: 9 years ago

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promo for chapter 5 BR]
manik got up at midnight to find his angel sleeping peacefully in his arms ...
He felt his throat dry ...he looked at table to find the water bottlr empty ...

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"MANIK"he heard her scream ...

"Nandini "he yelled her name and went upstairs ...
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A dark figure entered his room ...the light were dim ...

The room was full of pictures ...pictures of a beautiful girl ...

"Kitni mohobat hai tumse humme ,tumhe kabar tak nahi "he said with a evil smile ...

"I am coming to u ...wait fr me ..NANDINI ..."he laughed. ...

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OK so I can't upload today so will update chapter tomorrow 😊

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1d_kisses

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Do read and comment ...and yeah tell me who r u gonna imagine as that guy. Pls

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Sumaiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

lo agate villain...
manan ki life mae villain na hoe aisa toe hoe nahi shakta...
toe wlcm karo villain ka...
aliya kya kam thi??!!!

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Urvi Saini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Nandini has got an obsessive stalker!

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mounicareddyc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Omg wat is dis twist nw. N who is dis man..!! Gosh shud keep guessing

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ruchi116

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Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Nice promo fab4 to the hi manan ki love story k villain an naya bhi as gaya waiting for update

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aarohi arora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Amazing update...
Very well written...
Loved it to the core...
Cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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1d_kisses

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Posted: 9 years ago

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part 5-when past haunts u

"ye log na nai sudrenge ...humesha wrong timing"manik cursed his friends as he was coming downstairs fixing his shirt (you all know why 😉)

"Oh so finally ...aa gaya tu ..."dhruv taunted him who was sitting on sofa

"What do u mean ???" manik asked ..

"Tera phone kaha h manik ...just check humne kitne calls kiye h tujhe" cabir said ...

"Mera phone "he checked his pokect and realize that his phone is not with him ...after putting little pressure he realized that he forgot her phone in car. ...he slapped his head ...

"Are u ignoring us "alya asked her with her eyes full of questions ...manik looked at her and then ignored her ...

"Mera phone mein car mein bhul gaya tha ...sorry guys "manik apologized ...

"What sorry ..." Mukti was about to start ranting when alya cut short her in between ...

"Where is ur 'FRIEND'...nandini right ...where does she lives " alya asked stressing the word friend...

"Here "he said glaring at alya who was shocked ...

"She will be living with u " alya asked again ...

"Yes . .sunne mein problem h kya " he asked giving her 'I wanna ignore u 'look ...

Till then nandini came down after changing into a comfortable simple knee length white casual dress ...

"Hii"she said cutely with a sweet smile ...

"Hii"cabir and dhruv replied but muklya looked least interested ...

Manan looked at each other and there was an awkward silence between all of them when they heard dhruvs voice ..

"Manik what is this ..?"dhruv asked looking at pool side which was in front of hall ...

Fab4 went to that direction and entered pool side ..manan gave each other "we r dead "look ...

Manik dragged nandini there ...

"Manik cake decorations ...what is this ..."alya asked ...

"Whats happening tell us "cabir asked ..

"Ahhh vo vo "nandini murmured ...

"What vo vo tell us what's going on" mukti asked her temper getting high

"Anniversary "manik said quickly ..nandini looked at him shocked ...

"Kisi anniversary"alya asked doubting manik ...

"Ahhh vo kaka ki ..."he said pointing at kaka who just came to pool area for offering water to fab4 ...

Kaka looked at him in shock...so did nandini and fab4 ...

"Baba ap ye kya bol rahe ho ...mere patni ke marre 10 saal ho Gaye h "kaka told manik in a low voice ..

"Kaka pls na adjust karlo for me pls ..."manik pleaded him ...and being ladla of everyone kaka smiled and agreed ..

"Really manik ...are u serious "dhruv asked ...

"Arre sacchi ...mein kabhi zhut bolta hu kya "manik said and nandini giggled to it ...

"Ohh tho kaka apki wife kaha h ...him wish kardenge unko bhi ...bulaiye " cabir said with a smirk ...

"Chali gayi ...ghar chali gai "manik said quickly ..."ap bhi ghar jao kaka ..jao"manik said and quickly pushed kaka out after murmering 'sorry' in kaka's ears ...

"Manik u have lost it ..."mukti said in anger and walked out ...

Alya gave him looks and followed mukti out of mansion .. So did cabir and dhruv ...

Manik followed them but they were already gone ...manik closed the main road ...and went back to nandini ...

He saw her sobbing ...

"Ohh god ab kya hua ...y r u crying shona "manik asked and hugged her

"Its all because of me ..ur friends r angry with u ...I am sorry ..."she cried resting her head on his chest ...

"Nandini ...tum na pagal hi bilkul ...Chup ho jao ...unka gussa 2 minute ka h ...mein unne jaldi mana lunga ..."manik cheered her up ...he picked her in his arms ...and added "bohat raat hogai h ...so jate h ..hmmm"

"Hmmm"she murmured and wiped her tears ...he took her to room ..and made her sit on bed ...

"Good night "she said ..

"What good night ...nandu khana nahi khaya humne "manik said and told her to wait a second he went down and took plate full of food ...

They feed each other ...wished each other good night ... And of course had a deep kiss before sleeping. ...

...somewhere in pune...

A Audi stopped in front of a farmhouse ...that guy entered inside the house ...

The house looked dark and scary his face was not clear ...he directly went to the room ...opened the room and went inside ...the room was lighted dimly with lights ...

There were many big pics of a girl ...the pics were randomly taken ...it looked like the girl have no idea about this ...
He touched the photo in front of him in which the girl was pouting on something ...

He smiled and said "beautiful ..."..

He sat in front of that wall and stared at pic for some time ...

Suddenly he laid on floor and looked up on roof ..the roof was actually a big picture of the same girl ...

" ab tujhko yaad kar liya h aayad ki tarah, ab tera zikar hoga ibadat ki tarah " he murmured ...

"I am coming to u ...wait for me nandini ...I will be with u soon ...ab aur dur nai reh sakta tumse" he said and smirked ...

...malhotra mansion ...
Manik woke up in midnight... he looked at his lady love sleeping peacefully in his arms ...she had a smile on her face ...

"Again dreaming "he said and kissed his forehead ...
He looked at side table of bed to find water bottle empty ...

He felt his throat dry ...he made nandini sleep properly on bed and got up took bottle ..and went downstairs to kitchen ...he filled the bottle ...

"MANIK.."he heard nandini yelling ...

"Nandini "he threw bottle right there and ran upstairs ...

He reach the room to find nandini sitting on bed crying like hell ...

"Baby kya hua "manik asked and ran to her ...

"Manik " she quickly hugged him ...

"Kya hua" manik asked hugging her back ...

"Manik he will come to me ...woh ..he ...he ..he will separate us ..."nandini said digging her face in his chest ...

" baby it must be a nightmare ...Kuch nai hoga ..mein hu na " manik said and hugged her tightly ...
"Nai vo ..vo."he felt her voice getting faint ...he looked at her to find her unconscious ...

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Phewww ..hogaya ye chapter..pls do comment and like ...don't just say nice awesome ..kya accha laga kya burra laga vo bhi bata Dena ...will update soon if got good response ... 😊

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