#5MaNan SS:Dheere DheereLink To Thread6/PG1/31st-DEC - Page 56

Superb update
As always u left me speechless
The update was pure n the love of Manan is as pure as ur writings...
The surprise nandu made for manik left me awestruckits jus perfect
Har koyi wish kartha hai Aisa... N the way u wrote manik feelings r jus wow
It's jus wow yaar no words
N yup I knew it tiger is nandu bhai but u left in cliffhanger pls update soon can't wait

Lots of love
Pravallika aka PraNi

Wow ...

I so knew it. ... nandu hi tigar ka sister hai...😆

Awesome update

Wowww... That was totally awesome dear

Awesome surprise...love the bday surprise too

It was indeed a lovely update pls update soon ...

Awesome update
Mind blowing surprised
Love it
Nandini is tiger sister
Lovely update
Cont soon dear

Lo pair se 1000 watt ka smile on my face 😃
Mawara seriously it was an amazing update...I loved loved it so much...

Yar aaj toh Mohan aur uske wife Simi ne kamal kar dia...so nice people...hehe Simi was one of my friends in college...the rituals were sweet..Nandini tricked Manik to go to office for his birthday surprise...wow !!!! Hehe Nandini asked for salary in advance...Manik is surprised...but still man hi li Nandini ki baat.

Lo ji ho gayi villain ki entry...Manik's dad is so cheap ya...how can he say so cheapwords for Nandini...but Manik's words were lovely...I love it whenever Manik calls Nandini baby...aww so sweet...the birthday surprise was awesome.

The candles and the flowers were beautiful...but the tomatoes decoration was most beautiful and cute...par abhi tak Manik ki samajh nahi aaya it's for his birthday...u know Mawara there is a line in Manik's thought and I loved it very much.."Dad was asking me to leave the girl who gave me life..! Was he kidding..?" It was really awesome...total decoration of birthday surprise was so beautiful...the bed arrangement and Nandini's dress specially was beautiful.

The romance was awesome...but the fairy concept was so cute...Nandini is so innocent yar..man karta hai kha jau use...aur Manik...he too is so cute na...birthday cake was so beautiful...everything is red and white...and I loved it...the cream licking scene was lovely..but Manik complained for spoiling the romance...hehe majnu Manik..Nandini's gifts were really incredible...the chocolate greeting idea was really awesome...and the crystal heart was so beautiful...loved it

Ahem ahem the romance was terrific...Nandini took the lead...how sweetly Manik helped her...u know Mawara in ur writing MaNan romance is always so pure...nothing vulgar yet most passionate...only u can do this...hats off 👏

Sachhi har ek friend kamina hota hai...but they r life also...another party...oh so Nandini sach me Tiger ki sister hai...naya twist..new interest..lovely.
Eagerly waiting for next update..thanks for pm...please continue soon Mawara.