I hope you guys are able to feel Manik's excitement.I tried my best to show the emotions at their best.
Part 3 a-
Next morning was one of the most beautiful and special mornings for the two beautiful souls sleeping so close..that their hearts mingled...unaware of all that was on their way.But did they care! No I guess...atleast not at this moment.
Manik was the first one to wake up. He had never smiled so wide as he did now...seeing Nandini..his Half Heart lying so close cuddled to him.Her heartbeat was so soothing he thought...her even breaths and ever so serene face made her look like a baby. He cuddled her more in himself and she comforted herself there. He blushed like a teenager seeing this.
Manik's POV-
What has happened to me. I have never felt so happy..so contented. My heart bursts of happiness when I am with her. Her innocence..her child like heart..her beauty...everything...everything attracts me to her.. so close that I cannot believe my destiny that I found her.What have I done so good! After Soha...I never thought of falling in love. But eureka...Manik Malhotra you are in LOVE!!'
He was so so so damn happy...he gave numerable kisses on her forehead..her cheeks n just could not get over it that he was in love. His new found love smiled in her sleep feeling his warmth. That was it for him he couldn't wait...he had go share or else he would just burst with love.He took his phone slowly not moving much that he disturbs her. He immediately called Cabir..
M-Bro I'm in LOVE dude!!' he said with excitement before Cabir could tell anything.
Cabir smiled on his friends excitement who knew nothing of what was to come..'Bro keep her happy always!!'
M-I know I will' he said caressing her hair.
C- Manik just be with her no matter what may come. My sister is very sensitive and she needs you.
M-Bro all is good right!!' He sensed his tension.
C-Nai yaar gadbad ho gayi hai..
M-Anything serious...
C-It's Nyonika.Nandu will be hurt if what she has planned happens. Be with her Manik..(Nyonika is Nandu n Cabir's Mom)
M-Bro I will not let anything happen to her.Kuch nai hoga..' he said determined. He knew Nyonika and he would not let anything happen to her.
C-Hmm...I hope so. Waise Nandu kahan hai.
M-So rahi hai..' he said caressing her cheek smiling at her.
C-Meri behen bohot soti hai..Uthale. Tum log ka subha tak ka hi time tha na.' He chuckles.
M-Hmm..
C-Chal ab main rakhta hoon...aur sun jab tak main na kahun ghar mat aana. Nandu se abhi kuch mat kehna.
M-Ok. Byee..And don't stress ok.
C-Haan..
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M-Nandini... he softly calls her caressing her hair.But she turned around.He smiled at her cuteness and called her again gathering her in her arms..
'Kya hai Bhai..' she said irritated.
'Mujhe bhai bana diya..' he said huskily in her ears. Her eyes shot wide and she mentally slapped her head.'Aiyoo Manik!!' she said 'Wo bhai hi uthate hai na mujhe roz..toh..' she said hesitantly.
'Hmm..I understand!' he smiled at her. 'Waise tumhare bhai ka phone aaya tha..and usne...'
N-Usne..she said with a pout.
M-Usne mujhe full permission diya ha.He said Manik..tu use ghar na laya na toh bhi thik hai..." he said mischievously.
N-Hawww...' she palmed her mouth and he laughed.
'Tum mazaak kar rahe the...' she frowned annoyingly. 'Abhi dikhati hoon..' saying this she started tickling him and our Mr.Malhotra stood with a poker face..
'Hhahaha...I don't feel ticklish' he said as a matter of fact..'But...I know...you do!!' Saying this he started ticking her vigorously. And she lay there laughing her heart out..
'Aaa...Man..ikk...stopp..stop...ple..ase..!' But he was not in a mood to stop.But seeing her breathless he left her. Both were panting heavily...and their proximity was not helping either.
Knowingly or unknowingly..both got close.Close enough to feel their breaths.Manik caressed her forehead and shoved her hair away.She closed her eyes feeling warmth of his hands on her face.He cupped her face making her open her eyes and eyed her lips.He looked into her eyes as if wanting to ask her permission...she was so lost in his dark brown eyes that she didn't respond.He winked at her and she came out of her trance...he proceeded further.And she didn't stop him.But maybe she didn't want to!! And he didn't want to think further.
He leaned closer and joined their lips.Soft..soulful..full of love..their moment was like all they ever craved for. It wasn't a long one...but a one of those moments where time stopped. He hugged her so tight.
'You know Manik...I'm so so happy with you!!' She reciprocated the hug.
'And I'm happy that you are happy!! Muaahhh' he kissed her cheek and she giggled.
'Manik hume chalna chahiye na.Humne wo uncle se humne sirf subha tak ka time liya tha..' she said.
'Hmm..main toh kabka uth gaya tha..par tum so rahi thi..Ghode bech ke.' He said teasing her.
'Cabir said that tum bohot soti ho..Future mein bohot problem hogi na!!' He said nuzzling his face in her cheek.
'Manikk!! Tum mera mazzak uda rahho..' she said and hit his arm. 'Jao..mujhe tumse baat nai karni!!'
'Are main toh future ki baat karraha tha..' he giggled and pulled her back.
'Waise tumhe ek baat kahu..Tum na raat ko muh khula rakh ke sote hoo!!' She said teasing him and mentally patting her back.
'Haan..pata hai mujhe.Zyada hasne ki baat nai hai.Chalo utho ab!!' he frowned on this not-so-new information of his.
'Tum bachpan se hi aisa karte ho na!!' She said moving her finger to and fro. But he ignored.
'Awww...your so cute Manik!!' She pulled his cheeks and hugged him.
Comment karne ke liye iss baar nai kahungi.I have written this part for myself...I love this cute story and it's very close to my heart.According to me..this is my cutest fiction work.😳 Ye update mere liye likha tha..par agar acha lage toh bolne se katrana mat 😊(don't hesitate). Waie bhi tumlog mood acha kahan rehne dete ho.Response dete hi nai.Silent readers Shoo...Edited by Dhingli44 - 9 years ago
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