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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww yr😃 dt was awsum blossom update😃 loved it to d core 😳 really loved d way dt now niyonika tasted her own medicince by singing d death papers by his own hands😆😃 what a trick MM hats of 👏😆 really hate niyonika to d core as how a mother even can do ds to her own blood😡 but im hapi dt all well dt ends well😃 im hapi for 4 of dm😳 plzz update d epilogue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!!! Awesum update dear...
Finally one more awesum stry also came 2 its end...
It was really n aweum stry of manan..
Lvd it so much...Last update was really awesum...
Thnks so much dear 4 d pm...

Finaly 'nyo apni asli jaga phunch gyi...
Nyo bcme out from manan's lyfs..
.Feeling vry disgusted ven nyo acts lyk a typical mothr towards manik..
Manik s awesum..Sb plan krke set kiya...
Nyo toh aasani se manik ke jaal mein phas bhi gyi..
Dat was fabulous...Nyo n lawyer tlks was suprb..
Shckd n failed nyo was really a treat 2 read...
She didnt evn regrettin on her deeds..😡😡😡
Feelin pity on her...Finally evrythng sorted...
Waitin 4 epilogue dear..Jaldi de do na...
Do continue wid ur wrks...😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
I loved that part in which manik shows his all rights on nandini after their meeting with cunning producer I forgot his name.

That was the superb part.
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Posted: 9 years ago

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|| EPILOGUE ||

"and to present the award for best lyrics 2016 , i would like to call Mr. Manik Malhotra on stage " the host called the presentor cheerfully. Manik came up on the stage carrying the manik malhotra aura' looking abosulutely handsome in his black suit . He looked at nandini who was already looking at him with an ethereal smile sitting with navya and cabir . he opened the envelope and announced though he already knew who is gonna get the award "and again the award goes to ... my wife , my life Mrs. Nandini Manik Malhotra ..." . the hall echoed with the cheers and every one hooted for nandini .. she walked up to the stage and like a gentle manik came down the stairs and took her up gently . manik presented her the award and she took from him smilingly and hugged him tightly .

"mam please ... we all would love to listen some lines from you ..! the host requested her and she looked at the crowd who were hooting for her like maniacs ... crazily . she then held manik's hand and started

Kuch ankahe se lafz the

To kuch ansune se lafz the ...

Kuch lafz khamoshi bane bethe the ...

Tou kisi or ke kuch lafz dil mein ghar kar bethe the ...

(she remembered some bad memories but smiled thinking them ...)

Kuch lafz zubaan par reh gaye the ..

Tou kisi or ke kuch kanon mein goonj rhe the..

Kuch lafz zubaan se bahar nikalne se katraa rhe the..

To kisi or ke kuch lafz andar hi andar kisi ko kat rhe the


(she looked at manik who made his grip more tight on her hand ...)



kuch lafz darte hn ki kisi ko chubh na jayen
To kisi or ke kuch lafz kahin dil mein chubh gaye the



kuch lafz kisi ki zite zee MAUT ban gaye the
to Kisi or ke kuch lafz kisi Ke ZEENE ka sahara

kuch lafz khamosh reh gye the ..

tou kisi or ke kuch lafzon ne kisi or ko khamosh kar diya tha

(she remembered her silence, his silence ...their silence ...the immense pain they had gone through ..but now had turned into their lifetime happiness . )

kuch lafz kisi ko umeed de gaye the ..

tou kisi or ke kuch lafzon ne kisi or ke zeene ki umeed cheen li thi ...

kuch lafz bebak beh rhe the

tou kisi or ke kuch lafz bar bar behne ko tadap rhe the ..

kuch lafzon mein kisi ki tadap dikhai de rhi thi ..

tou kisi or ke kuch lafzon mein kisi ki us tadap ko bhujane ki mazboori ..


kuch lafz na chahke bhi moonh se nikal chuke the ...

tou kisi or ke kuch lafz chahje bhi nikalne se darte the ..

kuch lafz sacchai ka samna kara rhe the ...

tou kisi or ke kuch lafz jhoot ka parda dal rhe the ...

shayad is duniya mein lafz hi the or hn
Jo apna kam bakhoobi kar rhe hn ...

(she said directly looking into his eyes ...which were not reflecting the pain but happiness.. which were not reflecting the suffering but surviving ..)

she completed and now started the sequel of her poetry for which she was getting the award , for which the people were getting crazy ...

Jo lafz ankahe the ...aaj woh alfazon mein tabdeel ho gye hn ..

Jo lafz ansune the ...aaj wo kisi ke kanon mein goonj rhe hn ...

Jo lafz kal kisi ki tadap the ...

Aaj woh kisi ki mohabbat hn ...

Jo lafz kal jhoot ka parda dal rhe the ..

Aaj woh ek hassen sacchai hn ..

Jo lafz kal kisi ki khamoshi bayan kar rhe the ..

Aaj woh kisi ki beintehan chahat bayan kar rhe hn ...

Kal bhi lafz hi the ...aaj bhi lafz hi hn ...

Bas farak itna h ki jo lafz ...

Kal Kisi ke chehre ki mayoosi the ...

Aaj wo lafz kisi ke chehre ki muskurahat hn ...

Tab bhi lafz hi the jo apna kam bakhoobi kar rhe the ...

Or aaj bhi lafz hi hn jo apna kam bakhoobi kar rhe hn ...


she completed and the thundering of claps went on its peak ...manik hugged her tightly and looked on navya and cabir who were also hugging each other smiling in between their tears of happiness . they left the stage holding each others hands and made their way to the exit to kiss their better and happy life followed by cabir and navya .

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Ok so that was it ...

i knew maybe many of you was expecting a whole long update with manan romance but for me it was decided from so lond ki meko iska epilogue kaise dena h ...

you know guyz i wrote this poem ,i guess two years back..umm in december 2014 ..ratko around 11:40 while doing maths ..but was thinking about something else ...and pen down this ...and then started the story after six seven months ...i dont know why i am telling you this bas ese man kia ...lol 🤣😆

i really didn't knew that you guyz like my poetry this much😃 ... hey bhagwan😲 ...tum logon ne mujhe talented bola ..mujhe 😲🥱🤣... mujh jaisi alsi ko ... meri mamma ko mein bolungi apki beti kitni kam ki h ...woh bolengi ..kyun dimaag kharab kar rhi h ...jaa pad 🤣 ..😆

Jokes apart ... so here the story ends.. i will miss it for sure ...😭😃😳

Waiting for your comments ... though i know long nhi ate 🤢..but if aaj possible ho kar dena .., epilogue tha!!!😭😃😆

Had started a new story do have a look - #1 SOMETHING ABOUT YOU 😛

Bye bye ...

Here the journey for lafz ends ...😊

Love you all ..

Thanks for your support ..😃

LOVE

AKANKSHA !

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Posted: 9 years ago
Yar Itni jaldi epilogue aa gyaa. 😃 mujhee laga tha late milegaa.but this is best..ki jaldi aa gya.soo come to the epilogue. First of all I can't complain..ki mujhe accha nhi lga.because I love this very very much.Are I was actually missing ur poetry 😉 U know seems like poetry se puri story ko lafz hi mil gye.oh god..kyaa line boli mene 😳 Soo Epilogue was very Awesome. Actually Beautifully Written. .n ur Poem..ab kya tarif kru.it was likee dil ko chu gyi..Kyoki khte h naa.Kuch Lafz Pain ko Express krte h..(likee ur part 1)Or Kuch Lafz Happiness Express krte h ( like sequel part)..Vaisee itss very nice idea n actually different. to show it throw poem.Soo the poem of urs touched my heart..Soo Best ki manik present this award to his beautiful lyrics writer wife ko.. N the way nandini express her emotions. Big Thumbs up.."Ye Lafz Jo kabhi Ankhe the jo ab Jaane phchane bn gye h..""Lafz Hi to h jo is duniya me apna kam bakhubi k rahe h"ye kuch aise or or bhi kyi aise lafz h..jinhe pdkrr mujhe kuch yaad aa gyaa.but I feel so happie while reading this...N haa apni mumma ko ye jarur khna.h to unki beti h bdi talented..Aakhir kyaa likhti h.Vaisee Thanku for writing this much amazing story for us..Will Miss It..Thanku For Pm..

Aree m first kyaa..
yipeee.
M shoo happiee.

But M thodi sad bhi.
I likee this story.
Ab me miss krugi...

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Edited by gtilwani45 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
aknkshaaa
yaar tumne to rula hi diya
aapke kuchh lafzon ne humare kuchh lafzon ko avaak kar diya
wah wah wah wah
haayyy will miss dis stry
honestly i started reading it bcuz of ur poetry
meko to believe hi nhi hota dat sm1 can write so gud
all d bst for ur future
keep writing
luv d epilogue
short n sweet
till nxt tym

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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing epilogue...
& ur poem is just excellent...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow finally manan r together nd one ...,
Manan nd der beautiful love for each other...,
Plzzz update new part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Are u mad.. who said that u are not talented . Poetry likhna sabke bas ki baat nai hoti..
I just love ur poetry..
It has deep meaning hidden behind it...
Really loved this story.. will miss it for sure...
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazingg
Superbb epilogue
Beautiful lines...lovd it...enjoyed a lot

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