Manan FF - 'The Aroma of Love'-Chapter 18 on page 141- 11th Feb 2016

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Tishyy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#651

I'm totally enjoying this gal
Kudos to u

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Aamikrish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#652

Awesome update.

Manan'S shopping was superb. Tom boy nandu can't b seen n formals.

Rehearsal part was the best, awe nandini biting her nail. How cute.

Wen will Manik know dat nandu z a girl.

Anyway till den I would love to see dem behaving as a gay couple.

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parimala94

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Posted: 9 years ago

#653

🤣🤣

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waiting fr the date to start!!!...🤣

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priakachan

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: megha94kumari
nyc update

Thanks a lot, yaar😃😳

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aishubangia

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Awww.. awsum update... soo cutee.. jb manik ko pta chalega that nandu is a gal... tab pta ni uska kya rxn hoga. ... jaldi open this secret... update ASAP

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neetamandaliya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#656

Nandu is so cute.. ..
Awesome update.. ..
Please update soon ya... 😊 😉

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priakachan

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: ankita_t
Hi,

Priya you nailed it, infact killed it... i am a voracious reader since childhood and i am quite a critique...

Honestly, since this story started i found it nice, at times it made me smile, at times it made me think...

But, today from the time i started reading it i smiled throughout the chapter and trust me i might not be a great writer, but a good reader for sure...

I have followed your work from starting and i have sen the graph you traversed showing how you were slowly improving as a WRITER...

I am impressed by the way you are improving and are now able to set the premise for your every chapter... Trust me Language isn't the barrier and i can see the effort you take to make everyone relate to your stroy... AND THIS IS A SIGN OF GOOD WRITER... I AM TELLING YOU ALL this from MY EXPERIENCE as being a PRO at creative writing once...

THANK YOU PRIYA... Hope you didn't feel offended... I never tell all this to anyone as i feel everyone is good in their eyes... But, I felt I should tell you a bit more about me and tell you what i feel as a reader.

Lots Of Love...

Ankita

Thanks a lot yaar! 😃

No yaar..I didn't feel offended...rather I felt truly happy that U shared your thoughts and feelings with me and I'm happy that U are enjoying my FF during the journeys. Every time I wonder..how my next chapter will be...but then after reading the comments I feel..ah...it's not as a bad as I thought.😆

To tell you the truth..I'm not a professional with regard to writing...but just wanted to try my hand in developing a thought in the form of 'Aiyoo Ayyappa' FF...then I thought if it gets accepted by readers..I'll develop it more. The way it was received and enjoyed encouraged me to write more. This one actually was not my intention at all. Vicky suggested that we do a collaboration FF and then I agreed but his work is keeping him off from joining in the collaboration FF. It was my idea that perhaps we should try to make an Indian version of 'Coffee Prince' with Manik and Nandini...because I felt somewhere that as the story progresses...there's a scope for romance that is stronger than what is seen in the beginning😆

I mean a guy falling for a guy..without knowing that the guy is a girl...that is going beyond appearances and loving a person for her heart...for her behaviour etc.😛

If she were a feminine girl...whether he would notice her is doubtful...but he noticed her because he thought that she is a boy and a cute boy who can help him get over some blind dates. That somehow inspired me to write this. Hopefully when Vicky gets more time, he'll collaborate on this FF. But right now he's busy too. But as this story progresses..if readers don't find it very interesting (one reason being that in KY2..Nandini is a very feminine girl and in this..she is a tomboy which readers are unable to accept much) I may think of closing it down.

Hmm lets see how it goes😃😉

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priakachan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#658

Originally posted by: syamasastry_68
Nice update.

Thanks a lot, dear😳

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soothu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#659

😉manik paavam frontil ullath girl annenu epozhum aringitila,,

ariyumbol heart attack varathiruna mathi😳😳😳

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priakachan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#660

Originally posted by: lovePANI
hahahah update :)

cheesy boys but so.cute
matching colour..

haihaih manik felt shy oh my lord do cute..

practice was quite funny
flirt kai liye b paise
paise Hume kis mod pe le ayya 😆

i really wished to see manik aka Parth doing this act..aiyoo it will act like a laughing gas

nandu developed feeling ahahah ..
druv is manik friend he knows nandu is not a guy..

i really wanna see manik reaction when he will get to know nandu real appearance..

Sayad yahi hai pyarrr :) :)

thank u
keep smiling.

Thanks a lot yaar😃😛

Hmm..they need to act gay na😆😆

U want Parth to act on this FF? I'm pretty sure he would do 100 times better than the Manik in this FF itself. I mean it would be a treat to watch Parth enacting this one😆😆

Yaar..Nandu ko starting se attraction hai..from the moment she went to deliver pizza😆😆

Yes...that would be interesting😉